This is my very first attempt of writing a fanfiction... So I would loooove it if you would comment about how you find this story, what's good about it and what isn't, I wanna know everything that is written bad so that I can change that and I wanna know what is good so that I can keep doing it that way , so please! If i get enough comments from people who wanna have a longer story, I will write a much longer one, it's just a trial to see how it works out! thanks! I LOOOVEE HANNILY!


Hanna's POV

I hear the ringing sound that tells me to step in the funny-smelling classroom, filled with an unknown but not so old teacher, old friends that I haven't talked to in awhile, just some boring people who you've never talked to, and of course my bff Mona!
Since we two became besties, this was the day we looked forward to, after transitioning from super nerdy and uncool people to fashionista's who will soon be the it-girls of the whole school, maybe even the whole town...

Curious about the reactions from all the people that always looked at me like hefty hanna, I walk in and completely lose the sight of everyone in this room along with the sounds of "OMG" and "Is that hanna?".
The one thing I'm setting my eye on right now is a beautiful brown haired girl, also a used-to-be best friend of mine...
As she looks at me with her shy but beautiful smile, I'm starting to feel an old but familiar feeling in my stomach ...
I can't believe what I'm thinking but the thought of not wanting the extreme make-over to be the only thing to change this year, hits me incredibly hard ...

Emily Fields ,The only pers... -girl who can make my knees go weak...

Emily's POV

As I'm entering the classroom, I look around and see a familiar girl walking in front of me.

"Aria?!", I say as I look at her in disbelief.

"Emily!",she yells and hugs me in a tight embrace. "Oh my god, it's been so long!" "How are you?".

"I'm great, thanks. But how was it in Iceland for a YEAR?" I ask as we're both sitting down next to eachother.

"Well it was... Is that Hanna?!" She moves her eyes, pointing at a blonde familiar girl. Before letting our mouths fall open, we both whisper "Wow" at the same time.

As I'm thinking about how beautiful and hot she looks, she sets her eyes on me and just stares. While I can see her cheaks turn lightly red, I smile at her and begin to feel a little bit nervous, and an old familiar feeling that I can describe as having butterflies. I think back to the days when we were all friends and I couldn't get that feeling away when I was with Hanna. I always thought I had a thing for Ali, but now I realise that it wasn't Alison who I was looking at with strong feelings... It was Hanna Marin. And she's gonna be the it-girl of the whole school, I need to talk to her right now... I can't resist somene who's that hot and perfect.

As I'm standing up, she looks at me with a combination of lust and desire in her eyes, probably just like I have at the moment. Just as she is in the motion of standing up, I hear the teacher pronounce his name. "Hi, everyone. My name is Mister Fitz and I'm your new teacher, sit down everyone, please!" I do as he says and so does Hanna.

While looking directly in Aria's direction, he brings out "Holy crap". Aria looks up, obviously confused and overwhelmed while the two just stare at eachother in disbelief. I think everyone in this room would agree with me that something's obviously wrong. As I totally forget about the rush of emotions coming over me a few minutes ago, I feel the touch of a soft, warm hand on my arm. "Hey, Em. Looking good" I turn around and look straight into 2 beautiful blue eyes.

The rush is back again and this time I don't know if I will ever lose that feeling again.


Thanks for reading! Hope you liked it! And I also forgot to mention that my mothertongue isn't English, so I'm terribly sorry if I make mistakes, please let me know if I do ! It means so much to me! xoxo