Hi guys… I'm been completely caught up with Percy Jackson the pass few months and decided to write my own fanfiction about it. It's been a long time since I last wrote and now I would like to consider this story my first, so I would appreciate it if you guys take this chance to review and give some constructive criticism.
Chapter 1: What the hell was I doing in school?
I sat there dazed, looking at the fire spreading around the room. I could have sworn I was asleep just a few minutes before. What the hell was I doing at school and to make it worst, the entire place was burning.
I stood up and walked out to the hall. The rooms were all in flames, chairs were flung all over the place and some parts of the roof were already falling apart. I reached the end of the hall and went in to the cafeteria. I saw a huge hole on one side of the room and continued to the other end, connecting the cafeteria with the kitchen. I walked over the room connecting to the kitchen and tried examining the debris. I'm not sure if I'm dreaming but I could have sworn there was actually bull fur on the cement.
"Help!" I tensed up from the shout. I look around and saw nothing. I looked inside the kitchen but still there was no one there. But then I heard the call again and ran outside. I tried listening for any other sound and caught the glimpse of what seem to be two individuals walking towards the other side of the school.
I followed the two and stopped when I heard one of them talk.
"Isssss the girl sssssecure," one of the voices said. I could have sworn they were hissing but it might have just been me.
"Yessss," replied the other one.
"Let'sssss get out of here then before that idiotic fool of a bull ssssstart messssing around again."
"Yessssss sssssissster."
The two voices started getting weaker and weaker as they walked away. I'm not sure but I think I'm going crazy. I said 'walked away' but all I could hear was the noise made by snake when they slither away. And these snakes didn't sound like your average backyard ones.
I was about to follow when the cold feeling I got from my neck stopped me right on my tracks. I tried not to panic but it was to no avail. I looked at the object on my neck and realize it was a sword made completely out of what seemed to be bronze.
"What the hell," I shouted out, trying to get away from the blade. I fell down when I tried running forward, hitting my head on one of the debris. "Who are you?"
"I should be the one asking that," the boy in front of me sighed.
"Dominic," I said, trying my best not to piss my pants but seeing where this is going, I'm not quite sure anymore. "Dominic Cruz."
The boy looked at me for a few seconds before his calm sea-green eyes, changed from ones that were thinking what to do with me into ones that looked like they were about to eat me. He raised his bronze sword and prepared to strike me when he muttered softly his name.
"Percy Jackson."
I know the chapter is short but don't worry, the next one will be much longer (I hope).
