Hey guys this is my first story...review, or fav... I'm an amateur... Sooo sorry bout the grammatical errors... can't help it...
Chapter 1- Winter.
Jack frost was flying over the streets of Manhattan... waving at kids who stared at him wonder-eyed. it had been a year since he'd become a guardian and things seemed to look up finally.
Finally he felt noticed by someone...he loved kids... they seemed to like him too...
I wanna see light beyond the dark...
This made jack stop dead in his tracks. it was the most beautiful voice he'd ever heard.
"It is strong, yet something about it seems hammered down. it felt sad, lonely... LONELY" thought Jack.
"I've got to check it out"
I wanna feel the warmth beyond this cold
I want this eternal winter to end...
"What? Winter to end? It's barely begin honey..." he thought as he made his way the music came from- which came from a really huge house.
'Whoa... Big.' he said. 'Arrendale INC...' he read.
'Where are ya beautiful voice?' he searched.
I want the sun to shine...
I want the ice to melt...
Jack flew toward the window and made himself comfortable on the sill
'Ah there you are...' although jack could only see her back he was overwhelmed and as she turned he let out a sigh.
She was 17 years... just like Jack, She was pale skinned- just like the winter spirit, she had platinum blonde hair- again like Jack. blue eyes... same.
Everything about her seemed to be known to him. Like almost he had known her when he was still human. Everything about her seemed to make him want her.
...
Elsa was furious nobody ever sat on her window sill. And nobody ever sighed at her like THAT... well they did but they did not get away with it.
But this one was different. he was 17 years old, he was pale skinned, platinum blonde hair, blue eyes... he had all the features she had to make people stare at her.
Elsa snapped her fingers at the strange white haired teen.
'Wait... you.. you can see me?' Jack asked her. Nobody never saw Jack just like that. They had to BELIEVE in order to see.
'Yes and in a few minutes the security will... and you'll end up in the central jail! Who are you, what do you want and how long have you been here?' Elsa asked him.
'You ca see me. YOU can see ME! You CAN SEE me. oh my guardian... YOU CAN SEE ME! YOU CAN HEAR ME!'
'Stop screaming... you'll end up in the mental hospital!'
'OH... er sorry I'm Jack Frost the winter guardian.'
'Okkkkaaaay. so you've escaped from the mental hospital.' Elsa said. she thought for a moment and she called the maid.
'see him? over there Martha...'
'Elsa dear I can't see anyone here darling. are you okay?' the confused middle-aged asked.
Jack let out a sinister laugh.
He came into the room and sat on her couch.
'Honey... listen to me... i know you are depressed... losing your parents at such a young age is not easy...' Martha said in a gentle voice.
Jack was taken aback. "This girl- Elsa- had lost her parents? that's sick." thought Jack.
'Take care darling...' said the maid as she left.
Elsa remained silent for a minute. She never wanted to think about it. Ever. She never wanted to think about that cruel plane crash which snatched her parents from her. they were the only once who saw her powers as blessing. they were always there for her. once the died she was left all alone.
Jack could feel the temperature drop at an alarming rate.
Elsa could feel the same too. She liked the cold. it never bothered her. there was no-one in that room. except the wierd boy who was visible to only her.
'I'm sorry.' Jack said.
'Me too.' she sighed
'so... Elsa... you can see me?'
'yes... what are you? some kind of ghost?'
'Ha!' jack smirked.
"Jack looks... looks... Handsome!" Elsa thought. "wha.. no pull it together Elsa"
Elsa could feel her face burn... she could felt a strange feeling.
"pull it together Elsa..."
'I'm a guardian. a winter spirit.' jack said breaking Elsa's trance.
'Winter spirit...' Elsa nodded sadly.
'If you don't believe...' Jack said getting up from the couch and coming toward.
Elsa stood routed. Jack stopped and took a deep breath. he let his magic out.
in a few minutes Elsa could see bunnies and butterflies and birds and puppies running around the room. they were all made of ice.
"Ice... they 're made of Ice."
'Do you like it?' Jack's gentle voice whispered into her ear.
She was so engrossed with seeing the icy creatures that she hadn't seen Jack move so close to her.
'I... I... don't know what to say...' she said.
She could feel her face burn. Jack's face was inches away from moved away from him. she was afraid if she might hurt him. she removed her gloves- which she always wore-and stared at her palms sadly.
'I...I... I never thought that Ice and snow could be so beautiful.' she said. she reached out to bird which was flying above her head.
'You don't wanna do that. it'll melt...(gasp)...' Jack was taken aback, for that bird became big and became icy and frozen on her touch. then it blast into pieces.
'Strange my magic never does that.' Jack was the first to react.
'Your's doesn't... but mine...'
For the hundredth time that day he was taken aback, first her voice; then her looks; the fact that she could see him; that she lost her parents;that she was more beautiful on a close up than from far off; and to top it all her powers.
Okay so that was the first chapter review so i could write the next... at least 5 pls. Hope you liked it.