Hi this is my first story so please go easy on me and leave me a review to tell me how i did.
Naruto was walking home from school one day and was lonely."
"Hey freak were going to fight you!" yelled someone from behind him. A punch came from behind but Naruto dodged it. Behind him were a bunch of jocks from school who were mean to him and made him sad sometimes.
"I dont want to fight i just want to go home and play Tales of Symphonia lol im really good at it maybe i should call it Tales of SymPAWNia.'
"No were going to beat you up because we dont like you and youre a freak!" Another jerk ran and tried to jumpkick him but Naruto grabbed his foot and threw him up a tree.
"FINE! IM GOING TO BEAT YOU ALL SO THAT YOU NEVER MAKE FUN OF ME EVER AGAIN! BELIEVE IT! IM GOING TO BECOME THE HOKAGE TO MAKE SURE THAT NO BULLIES LIKE YOU EVER MAKE FUN OF SOMEONE AGAIN!" Naruto ran at the guys from school and screamed out loud and he punched both of them the each in the face.
"You can do it Naruto!" Hinata said. She stood in the door.
That made Naruto blush and he kicked the bully extra hard to impress her.
"You shut up or well beat you up next."
That made Naruto really angry. "Your not allowed to talk to Hinata-chan like that! Shadow Clone no Jutsu!" Naruto split into 32 parts which left six clones for each the of the six bullies. He beat them up all really hard and broke all their arms and legs and they had to go to the hospital.
"Oh Naruto your so impressive." Hinata said and she hugged Naruto. "You were so brave and cool!"
"I dont think theyll ever bother anyone again. Do you want to hang out."
"Sorry i have to go home my dad wants to talk to me. Bye."
Naruto wasnt sad though because he beat up the jocks easy and Hinata-chan hugged him so he was happy.