Well, here is the revised version of chapter one (1). comments help everyone so plz comment!!! and thx for reading my story; chapter two (2) will be uploaded sometime this week also, but it really depends on how school goes and how much homework I have until then enjoy ---Ukiro---
Naruto/Bleach: Black Heaven, White Hell
"I remember now, I remember what Jiraiya asked me to do. I vowed that I would make his dream a reality, to end fighting," contemplates Naruto as he kills the shinobi invading Konoha. His body tingling with the rush of adrenaline, his fingers twitching with this rush he forces his fist into one of the invaders chests. He was sent launched over one hundred feet in the opposite direction, knocking back some of the remaining invaders.
The scent of death, ripe and crisp as Naruto deals blows of death to the invaders. The actual strength of his attacks masked by a seal the severely restricts his strength. "Scum… Why don't you just leave?" thinks Naruto as he continues his onslaught of barrages to the invaders "What? Reinforcements, where the Hell did they come from."
"Naruto, th…the sky, its opening," states Sakura as she rushes to Naruto sides.
"They're coming from the sky?!" states Neji as he looks at it using his byakugan.
"Wait, Naruto, they don't look like enemy reinforcements. If they were then why would they be being attacked by their own allies?" states a bewildered Kiba.
"Hey, Ichigo, why are these people attacking us?" asks Renji as he defends himself from the unknown force.
"I don't know, but the other people seem to be ignoring us after a couple of attacks," states Ichigo as he slowly moves toward the group of people that are friendly. The sky, it looms with the emotions of despair and death. Ichigo, grasping his zanpaku-tô he loosens his grip and head towards the one that looks like the leader. Their eyes meet as if they can sense one another's power, "So, are you the one who leads these people?" asks Ichigo as he examines the other person.
"Yes, it's a pleasure to meet you. My name is Naruto Uzamaki and I am the sixth Hokage of the hidden Leaf Village…"
"My name is Ichigo Kurosaki, I'm a substitute soul reaper for Soul Society," continues Ichigo as Naruto moves closer to him to get a better observation. Their eyes scanning each other looking for a word to say to each other, yet none comes. Naruto, strong and brave his attire dirty from fighting. However, Ichigo's attire is a casual black and white garment, like a kimono, covered in lines of blood.
"Hm, Soul Society, what's that?" asks Naruto with a growing curiosity towards the newcomer.
"It's a place in which souls go when they die; it's also the place that shinigami call home," complies Ichigo "well, if you don't mind me asking. What's a Hokage and what's the Hidden Leaf Village?"
Chapter 1: a New Home
A war torn village, ravaged with death, and covered with tears. The surprising sight that they were winning that battle was surprising and hard to imagine. Their determination to make the fighting no longer needed is his dream. Everyone goes with his plan with one hundred percent trust and a belief that they can win this war. "So, Ichigo what do you think of my village?" asks Naruto as the head to his office.
"It's broken, but nice. You don't mind if we stay here for a while, do you? Answers Ichigo as he examines the houses and people throughout the village. Their clothes torn and ragged his eyes water with sadness, "His idea to end fighting can only be accomplished by fighting those that won't give up that way ideology. How hypocritical of him, however, I myself can only think of that way as well." Thinks Ichigo to himself as he stares at the heartbroken people and the pain they must have for joining his idea.
"Goodbye Naruto Uzamaki…" zanpaku-tô being drawn; Ichigo moves in the way of the attacker, his spiritual pressure fluctuating in a semi-wild manner, the attacker turned to dust before Ichigo could even draw forth his blade. "Well, I guess I won't need this thing," says a confused Ichigo as to why he died so quickly.
"That's quite an interesting sword you got their mister," curiously states Konohamaru as he stares at the exquisite beauty of Ichigo's zanpaku-tô.
"Hm, oh yeah, its name is Zangetsu. However, it's only in its shikai right now, but what until we get into a real fight and I'll show you its bankai," states Ichigo answering Konohamaru's curiosity, but leading to more questions of confusion.
"Shikai, bankai; what's that?" asks Konohamaru.
"Oh, okay, sorry I forgot you're not from where I come from. Well Shikai is a zanpaku-tô's released form and a bankai is a zanpaku-tô's final and most powerful form. Also, when I'm in bankai, my appearance slightly changes, for instance, my outfit changes and my zanpaku-tô turns pure black. In this form however, my body starts to get crushed by my own power and the name of my zanpaku-tô turns to Tensa Zangetsu (Heavenly Chained Zangetsu), this form increases my speed by 100 fold," informs Ichigo as he marvels at the expression on Konohamaru's face.
His face quickly reverts back to the childish forms it was in only minutes ago. As he walks away Ichigo continues to stare at the Hidden Leaf Village, comparing it to his previous home, Karakura Town, where he was born and raised.
His life was pure and full of it too, until one day his mother Masaki Kurosaki was killed by a hollow with the name Grand Fisher. He has evaded the Soul Society for 50 years; his style of fighting is to lure souls to him, the same way an angler fish does with the light lure on its head. Later on Isshin Kurosaki reveals himself to Kon and the other MOD SOULS that he, too, is a shinigami. During this time he kills Grand Fisher, who was turned into an arrancar (Spanish for- to take/pull off) with a zanpaku-tô the size of a skyscraper.
Unfortunately, Isshin kills him with a single swing of his zanpaku-tô, cutting Grand Fisher in half. Also, during this time Ichigo learns that the hollow within in him is getting closer to driving him insane and on top of that, Shinji Hiraku, another Vizard confronts Ichigo about himself and tells him that he can never go back to the Soul Society because he is an enemy. He broke the rules, he attempted to be stronger so he gained the power of a hollow (arrancars are the exact opposite of vizards because they are hollows who try to gain the power of soul reapers).
"Hey Ichigo...Ichigo...you still with us Ichigo?" asks Renji as he stares at Ichigo's miserable face.
"Uh. Yeah, I'm fine I was just thinking about something," starts Ichigo, but his voice lowers too much "I was just thinking on how I got pulled into all of this chaos. Soul Society, Hueco Mundo, the soul reapers, all of the hollows, and now even the Vizards are starting to drive me crazy."
"Yeah I know what you mean; I was the same way at first. I didn't know how to react, but I just got used to it and well, I moved on I stopped thinking about all the bad things going on and I stayed focused on all the good that I'm doing for both the Soul Society and the World of the Living," compromises Renji as he tries to cheer Ichigo out of his gloomy mood.