This is my first attempt at a Maximum Ride FanFic so... IDK cut me a bit of slack.
The story is currently nameless when I wrote this chapter. May be OOC.
Chapter 1
Fang POV
So here I was running like hell. You want to know why? A cloud. Not just an ordinary cloud, a cloud of freaking flyboys! I swear we'd destroyed Itex four years ago. I know I was making a priceless WTF face too. Pff screw waiting 20 years I had to warn the flock now, err I mean my old flock.
I'm sure you know I left... If you don't you must be living under a rock. I had a perfectly good reason, I think... Anyways back to, 'Run like hell!'
I made it to there (Well Max's Mom's house) house and knocked on the door. OK, don't call me a stalker for knowing where they live. I still care about them. While I was still panting, (No I didn't fly here 'cause the freaking flyboys were right over me.) a very, and I mean very surprised Nudge opened the door.
"Fang! Guys! Come here!"
"Nudge... No time... Get away... Flyboys...-"
"Flyboys? Fang you know we destroyed Itex."
Gazzy walked to the door,
"Nudge what are you yelling ab- Fang! Dude where the crap have you been?"
"Flyboys... Above us..." I said still panting. They really weren't seeing what I was saying only too excited about seeing me before 20 years.
"Ig!" Nudge yelled. Both Iggy and Dylan walked over.
"What?" 'Cause obviously a blind person wouldn't see me. But I saw Dylan and he saw me. I could see the shock and hatred in his eyes.
"Ig it's Fang!"
"Nudge you already pulled that trick on me."
"No for real this time."
"Seriously... Flyboys!" Ugh stupid kids.
"Gazzy I know you're mimicking Fang." Iggy said flatly
"Nope he's there." Dylan said with almost invisible hatred in his voice.
"Somebody get Max!" Oh crap she'd kill me.
"Just get your stuff. There are 1000+ flyboys outside."
"There is? Fang why didn't you say that!" Angel said coming over. What the hell? Weren't any of them listening to me?
"Meet me at Lake Mead." (AN: Hey Lake Mead is an actual place.)
(AN: Heh a lot of dialogue in Fang's POV now for Max's)
Max POV
Ugh here I was an emotion mess just lying around all day. That son of a bit-
Max watch your language
Angel get out of my head
OK Max
Yep that's all Angel did, probe my thoughts. I heard a bunch of commotion down stairs and decided to go down stairs. When I got there the flock was going around packing.
"What are you guys doing?"
"Fang told us a bunch of flyboys were coming." Fang? What the hell? What was he doing here?
"Max go get your stuff we're going to Lake Mead." Dylan said a little too forcefully.
Since my mom was gone with Ella on this CSM mission in Pakastain, we were the only ones in the house. Well after I'd scraped my stuff together, we headed off to LM (Lake Mead) where I hoped Fang would be so I could rip his limbs off then his head...
(Well Max's POV was shorter, its easier to write for a guy when you are a guy.)
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