I wanted to write this story as I love AVATAR the movie (by James Cameron)

Sorry if it isn't good, but this is my first story on here :)

All characters and the film go to James Cameron! (par the ones I make up)

Story setting : Neytiri is younger. Sylwanin is alive. It is before the shooting


Whilst dawn broke over Pandora, a variety of creatures awoke from their slumber. Viper Wolf howls could be heard from a mile away. Birds flew out of trees and flocked over the waterfalls.

Neytiri awoke, adjusting to the light of the sunrise. She squinted, a little drowsy, and stretched her arms up above her head. Before she could climb out of her hammock, Sylwanin jumped onto Neytiri from the branch above. "Ah!" Neytiri shouted, shoving her sister off of her body. "I got you 'eve!" Sylwanin laughed at her sister's reaction. Neytiri felt her face fill with anger. Sylwanin's smile soon faded and patted her younger sibling on the shoulder. Neytiri soon forgot about her anger and started to giggle. The girls sat there for a few minutes, just laughing about the event that had just happened. Even though Sylwanin and Neytiri annoyed each other sometimes, it was out of love. They respected and adored each other more than anything in the world.

Neytiri and Sylwanin chased each other down the spiral of kelutrel, leaping from branch to branch, laughing as they went. The sisters got to the breakfast gathering to see their clan gathered around the fire. It was a poor excuse of a fire, spitting pieces of ash as it gasped for life. This clearly showed it had been unattended over night. Still, that did not mean the girls couldn't eat. They decided for a light breakfast of fruit and seeds. They walked over to Mo'at and Eytukan. "Oel ngati kameie, sempul, sa'nok" Sylwanin said, bringing her fingers from her forehead over in a circular motion towards her parents. Neytiri then repeated what her sister had just done and sat beside her mother.

By the end of breakfast, Mo'at thanked the clan for joining them and said a prayer to Ewya. Neytiri and her sister where itching to leave. They were all for morning prayers, however, practicing their hunting skills was also important.

Sylwanin grabbed her bow from the weapon room and threw it over her shoulder. "I am coming today Sylwanin" Neytiri demanded, looking at all of the spears and daggers hung on the wall. "No, you are too young and not ready yet. This is dangerous work 'eve" Sylwanin replied, checking her instruments were good for hunting. Neytiri frowned and her ears flattened against her head. She walked over to her sister and banged her hand on the table. Sylwanin looked up in shock and stood up straight, so she was as tall as possible, making Neytiri smaller than herself. "It is not fair sister! I am only a few years apart from you!" Neytiri started to raise her voice. Sylwanin sighed and picked up her arrows. She gave one of her smiles to Neytiri. Her smiles were comforting and trustworthy. Neytiri grunted and turned away, though she knew inside she could not contain her own smile any longer.

Neytiri turned and smiled back. "Ok then sister, you can join me and my hunt. But I will not be out for too long. Mother wants me to hunt with T'sutey instead, as he will be the next leader and I the next Tsahik."

The girls set off to hunt.


What did you think? Please review, and again, im new to this : )