A/N OK I AM SO SICK OF U SAYIN DAT MY CHARRIES ARE MARY SUES SO TO PRUV U ALL RONG, THIS GRRL IS GONNA BE A GOTH PUNK WHO IS A TOTAL BITCH

At the sorting ceremony at Hogwarts Dumbledore wuz all standin up and smiling at all the kids "hello" he said "Welcoum to Hogwarts school of witchfraft and wizardy I am prorfesser Dumbledore . Now you have all been sorted eksept for one grrl her name is Raven Moonlyt and she is from america, now please don't treat her bad because she dress weird, in amreica they are quite ahed of us in fashon and they have Goths and punks and they are accepted there. So pleeze welcome raven"

The whole schul clapped as a tall girl walked upto the hat, she was was sexy and skinny with long silky balck hair that had white highlights and in the right light her eyes looked red, her skin was white as virgin snow and she was wearing ablack tight top with 'I'm not A bitch I'm THE bitch' writing in punk letters and under that she wuz wearing a tiny tiny cute little leather skit that showed off her long legs to die for and she was also wearing knee high black boots made of leather and a choker around her slim neck

Some people in the hall booed coz they had never seen a goth before, this was England after all, but Raven just flipped them off "Stupid fucking limeys, get with the times and stop dressing like mary poppins" she said. A few people even laughed at her wit and some of the slytherin bois gave her wulf wistles.

Raven sat down on a stool and maconagal put the hat on her head the hat said "without a dout you are a slytherin" and Raven tossed the hat aside and santered ova to the slytherin table

Snape smiled and clapped as she went, he could sense that she was special and had powers that were stronger than anyone in the whole schul.

A/N short first chappy coz I cant be bothred to right too much, but u betta review if u read it lol or else I will send pygmy goat pirate ninjas to ur house! Lol!