Hello Frex here! Well here's my first story! Sorry if it has too many commas or other grammar errors. But seriously I'm only a kid. How many errors do you think I can correct? Anyway, hope you like it and sorry if the beginning is a little weird. I, unlike many people, have trouble with the beginning and not the end. Sort of. Read, hope you like it and sorry if I'm not good with paragraphs. Anyway READ (it's good for you!).
Boom PLUTO
"Hey, where do you think you're going with that melon!" said a random shop keeper.
I kept on running, not because I thought I would get caught but because I needed the melon for my twin sister, Kyrie. I'm Sora. Yeah kind of a weird name I know. But weird names run in the family. Apparently.
We never knew our birth parents but we had some awesome foster parents. Our foster mom was nice, her hair was black about to her shoulders and she cooked allot. She always had a smile on her face but when she got mad. Well if you got her mad if I were you I would be running in the other direction!
Our dad wasn't around much what with work and all. He had two jobs, a daytime job, he was a lawyer, and at night he was a janitor in our school. I can remember their names just barely, mom's name was, umm, oh yeah Xion, and dad, his name was aw crud, I can't ever remember his name, it was, wait, now I remember, it was Roxas.
I've been trying to remember every little detail about our lives before the accident. Here's what I remember. It was kind of nice, we got what we wanted and needed, because of the lawyer job, and we got a roof over our head and a warm place to sleep. Xion was nice, she always smiled and laughed. Her cooking was awesome, she would make every meal of the day, which if I do say so myself, was really, really good. Dad, well he was stressed but he was kind too. Kind of the two faces of Roxas. Well anyway he was really nice, he gave us all the toys we wanted and all of the school supplies we needed and the care we needed from a dad, our mom was the same.
Kyrie and I are really close. She has been really sick lately but we have been trying to get through it. We are starving, we don't have any of our toys anymore, we don't have a house, our mom and dad died, and all we have is each other, and our friends of course.
So… how do you like it so far? Do you like the 'plot' so far? I'm trying to go slow because this is my first story. So anyway sorry if it's kind of slow. And I couldn't seem to get myself to get from the parents to Frexyah. So… if you want me to update… review, review, REVIEW! Good bad or just some random thing. so… any questions or anything review. And updating will be relatively slow… due to lack of internet. ALSO: sorry about the short chapter. I want to make it relatively seemingly longish. So… it will help me a lot if you just read and review! (Keep reading, there's a BIG twist coming… I think.)