Hey, everybody! : D
Well, what can I say.
I finally decided
to write a story in English
(although I'm half German, half-American woman
and only speak German!-_-)
Anyway! : D
Here is the story as told! : D
Wish you all happy reading! : D
prologue
Rin's point of view:
I'm running.
Waves bite into the sand while I force one foot before the other.
Fighting high slip and high fight again.
Faster, the view of the dunes in front of me fixed.
Do not look back.
I must not look back.
My breath is panting - in, out, in, out.
I'm running more and more.
Just as my lungs and my heart want to explode, lands a blood-red star on the sand.
I stumble.
A man turns around.
He pulls me up and pushes me further.
It comes closer.
My legs give under me, and I fall again.
I can not walk.
He drops to his knees, holds me and looks into my eyes.
, It's time. Quick now! Construction on the wall. "
Closer.
So I build it, brick by brick.
Row by row.
A high tower, like that of Rapunzel, but no windows.
No opening through which I could let down my hair.
No hope of rescue.
, Never forget who you are, "shouts the man, grabs me by the shoulders and shook me violently.
The shock sweeps the sea away.
The sand.
His words, the spots on my arms and the pain in my chest and in my legs.
It's there.
And cut! : D
How did you like it? : D
There are opinions that want to speak to her?
Reviews and criticism are welcome! : D