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Naruto stands outside his door, looking into the sky and admiring the beautiful day ahead of him. "Great day to train" he laughs and begins to take a step, but before he does, he notices a small pink envelope on his doorstep. "A letter? Who would send ME a letter?" Now very curious, Naruto picks up the envelope and opens it. The first thing he notices is that the handwriting is very neat and girly. The border of the paper had little hearts floating around and it looked like they wrote the whole note with a pink pen.
"Dear Naruto-kun,
You probably never bothered to notice me before, since I'm always there to pass out by the presence of you. It's alright if you don't like me back because I know how it is... but anyways, I've written this letter to tell you that I've fallen deeply in love with you. This has been going on for the last couple of years but I was always too shy to approach you and talk to you and become friends with you. My friends Kiba and Shino always tease me for being so shy and growing a very dark red colour when I'm about 10 feet near you. It's gotten to the point where it's almost ridiculous and now I'm mustered up my courage to come greet you, by letter. I was hoping later this week, maybe tomorrow, you could arrive at the outdoors training ground and meet me there. If you don't want to go, that's fine, I could always just wait for a better time. Maybe we could go practice training our ninja skills together, then possibly get some ramen (because we all know it's your favorite) and then we can go shopping and just hang out together. Meet me around 4:00 in the afternoon. I hope you see you there, Naruto-kun.
P.S. I'm trying to give this to you face to face so if you only see this at your doorstep it means I have chickened out into handing to you and I'm very sorry about my shyness. I hope you to see you tomorrow, thank you for reading my little letter of joy."
Naruto stares at the note for a good two minutes before he finally tries to run it over in his head. "How is this possible? Nobody has ever even liked me as a friend ever since I was a young child." He stood on his doorstep for a while trying to come up with a logical solution for the note. The streets are growing busy with people now, shops are beginning to open and various citizens of the Hidden Leaf village are waking up and starting their day. As Naruto starts to notice the people, he realizes that he has been on his door step for much too long. Glancing at his watch he realizes that it is already 8:30am. Training starts at 8:00am sharp, and being this late will surely get him in a lot of trouble. He stuffs the note in his back pocket and bolts off in the direction of the training ground, hoping that Kakashi won't give him too bad of a punishment. As Naruto passes his favorite ramen shop, the owner greets him with a smile "Morning Naruto, I'm guessing you would like some ramen?" As much as Naruto would LOVE some ramen, he did not have time. Being late by ten minutes is bad enough, but thirty is just awful. He had to get to the training grounds before it gets too late. "No time. I'm late for training!" The shopkeeper is taken aback by this response because Naruto was his biggest customer, eating at his shop every morning. "Surely you will be back for some later? I have the best ramen in the whole Hidden Leaf village" Naruto lets out a chuckle, "I will be back tonight for dinner, I promise" And with that, Naruto picks up speed and runs down the street. His orange shirt flutters in the wind as he sprints across the dusty dirt path. As he rounds a sharp corner, the note in his back pocket flies out of his pocket and floats off into the distance without Naruto noticing. He was too focused on making to the training grounds to even notice that his feet were moving so fast that they were kicking up dust into the warm summer air. As Naruto continues running, the note flies off very far into the distance and lands on the ground directly in front of a dark figure. "Whats this?" The man bends over and picks up the note. "I think we just found the perfect opportunity." The man crushes Hinata's note in his hand.
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