Girl time rush remake Chapter 1, a big time rush fanfic

CHAPTER 1

So time to disclaim

Diclaimer: i dont own big time rush because if i did the well would I write this fanfiction?

I dont own most of the ocs just Sussie! or make it shine! or a little faster! NOW READ!

It was a great morning for Kennadee or KC as her friends call her. She didn't talk back to any teachers today and actually got 98 on her science she walked to her locker she heard a vocie she knew too well calling her name. " KC! KC! GUESS WHAT!" A very eager japaness girl yelled. As soon as Kennadee opened her mouth the blueish black haired asian answered for her. " Theres a record producer coming to town and he is looking for a girl group! That could be us! We could be famous! DO YOU SE..." asian half yelled half said. The asian looked to see a hand over her mouth. " Su calm down ok?" Sussie nodded. Just then three other girls came there way. " I'm guessing she told you a part of it? " a black haired hispanic asked. "yea what the rest Mar" a small blond asked in a hint of a british accent asked."Well my brother Carlos is signed with him so the producer is gunna see if we got what is takes to make it." she answered looking down at the small girl." Well knowing us well make it with our skills we might be way better then your brothers band." A some what tall girl with platiom blond hair with pink and blue steaks said."Cj are you sure? I mean we are kinda never played in front of anyone." the small girl pointed out. "look piper we got right fearless leader?" she asked looking at KC. Kennadee made a face she hated when Colleen called her that but they she ignored the comment and looked at piper. " You know we got this."

_B_T_R_

Soon after school they praticed and they sounded amazing. It was in a few that producer would be here. As soon he got there they saw a man who looked like he sawllowed a` piano [ Collen had whisper this to the others] with werid glasses. "Ok so who is related to one of the dogs?" he asked. The girls look at each other. Marielle spoke up " you mean Carlos?" "yes" Oh me" she said cheerfuly." ok my name is Gustavo Rocque I produce Big time rush." Then a woman came next to him " I'm Kelly Wainwright his assitant" she said with a smile. "ok you can start now!" Gustavo yelled. Kennadee looked angey " KC stop. Lets just start ok."Kennadee nodded. They all got in posion.

{MAKE IT SHINE BY VICTORIA JUSTICE}

The beat started slow then Sussie sang with the beatHere I am, once again feeling lost but now and then I breath it in to let it go.{ the beat got faster and so did she}and you don't know
where you are now or what it will come to if only somebody could hear When you figure out how your lost in the moment you disappear.{ now the beat is exactly where she wants it}You don't have to be afraid to put your dream in action you're never gonna fade you'll be the main attraction Not a fantasy Just remember me when it turns out right 'cause you know that if you living' your imagination tomorrow you'll be everybody's fascination In my victory Just remember me when i make it shine!{songs over}

"So what did you think?" they asked together. " What i thought! WHAT I THOUGHT!

CHAPTER 2

DISCLAIMER: I DONT OWN BTR OR THE SONG JUST A LITTLE FASTER

LAST TIME ON : GIRL TIME RUSH:

So what did you think? they asked together. "What I thought? WHAT I THOUGHT!"

"I thought it was going to L.A to become famous. BUT you might have to go threw my boot camp but you seem ready to start recoding. "YES!" The girls screamed they all packed for the trip to the place that made people famous.L.A. Marielle called Ms Knight and told her dont tell the guys but if they could stay with them. Of course she said to ask there parents whom had already had said yes so all had to do was get an extention on the apartment which with the money Rocque Records provided she would be able to.

IN PLAMWOODS HOTEL, LA

" Ugh! stupid planes never have comfotable chairs for me!" Piper exclaimed. "Maybe when you grow a few more inches you'll we fine."Colleen proclaimed. The girls had just pulled into the hotel the guys where at. As the exited the limo they walked to the man at the front desk. "Welcome to the Palmwoods. What can I help you with?" A man with glasses who looked kinda fat asked Susie (a/n my bad this is the correct way to spell it)." Uh the keys to the extended..." she started as she looked down at her paper."...2J" she said. "Um I need the money for making this whole thing happen" he said wth a smirk. Kennadee sighed. Gustavo told her that he would say that. She handed him the check. He handed them each a key "Have a Palm woods day." he said with fake happyness. "By the way the name is Bitters!" He shouted as the walked away. Susie being Susie asked some one how to get there decipite the others yelling at her. She went up to a pony tail wearing blonde and a curly haired brunnet. "Hi me and my friends are new here can you tell us how to get to 2J?" she asked. The blonde spoke up first "Um yea take the elevator to the second floor and make a right you'll see it and Hi I'm Jo Tylor." Jo said. The brunnet spoke next " I'm Camille Roberts. Uh why are you going to 2J people live there already?"Camille asked. "I'm Susie know the people from 2J infact one of my friends is related to one of them." "Sorry to butt in but we gotta go nice to meet you!" Colleen yelled from over her shoulder.

SECOND FLOOR:

As soon as the girls got off the elevator they guys screaming. "Uh I think thats them." Colleen said. They walked until they saw a door with a small but noticable 2J on it. "This must be the place." Piper said. Kennadee knocked on the door and when it opened a surpised blonde with green eyes looked in to hers. "Um hi there?...Marielle what are you doing here?" he asked. "Umm..." was all he got til Piper made up anexcuse she whispered to Susie and the others. "Because we wanna be famous." they sang beautfully. "GIRLS Come in!" Ms Knight yelled.

They walked in to see the other members of the boyband.(1) "CARLOS!" "SWEET PEA!" Marielle and Carlos shouted before embracing each other. Then Logan opened his arms and smiled. Marielle huged him too. " Um dont you guys remember us?" A left out Susie and Piper asked. " Well duh you guys are in the same grade as us why would'nt we?" James asked. They shrugged as the guys walked over and said there respectable hello's. Kendall and Kennadee both talking about the sports they play. (2) James and Colleen made an intresting arguement about hair produces. Logan and Marielle both agreeing that being a doctor would be an amazing job. While Carlos and Susie both were talking about just about anything. "Hey KC theres a hockey game in tommorow and I was wondering if you would got with me?"Kendall asked. "Sure I would love to." she responded with a smile. She has a pretty smile.Kendall thought." SO CJ wanna go to the new cuda and morabi showing?" James asked with his to die for smirk. "I dont know I'm really busy these days you know but I'll fit it in my plans." she said. She is really pretty but it wont take much of the james charm to woo her.He thought."Hey listen there is a doctor convension and I have two tickets just for but I was kinda hoping that in the slightest chance that you would go with me?" Logan mummbled. Marielle was blushing. " Of coruse! I mean yea..." she said trying and failing to keep her cool. WOW shes so amazing.he thought. " Susie there is a carnive tonight and the guys are going and I wanted you to go. With me but its ok to say no everyother girl I asked said that."he said in a very sad voice. Susie looked at him and said " why would anyone say no your cute funny and..." she stopped her self. "I uh ment like your really cool but I would love to go with you!" she told him. Is it wrong to think your sister's best friend is cute? Well she's my age and we talked all the time in Minnesota.He thought.

CARNIVLE

The guys went ith the girls and well both partys did there best to look good. Kennadee wore a purple baby doll dress with a black short sleave cardigan with purple flats and black wore a gold off shoulder shirt with a black rolled up sleave jacket and black skinny jeans with black and gold nikes. Marielle wore a offwhite rose print dress with white tights and white wore a long sleave black tee and over that a white tee that sparkled white a black frilly skirt black tights and black flats. Susie asked Colleen to help her, Kennadee asked Marielle,Colleen asked Susie, and Marielle asked had left early wearing a black long sleave dress with tights and gladiators. (picture the guys in the outfits they wore after they turned human in big time halloween) "Wow..."was all anyone could Gustavo and Kelly came up to the boys. "Dogs we have a surpise for you and its a new girl band." Gustavo said with an his voice going up then down. "WHAT?"the boys said "YEA! Get over it! It seems you already know them." Gustavo said. The boys looked at the girls. "you where gunna replace us?"Carlos asked. "WHAT? Carlos why would I? He said he needed two bands!" Susie yelled to him with tears in her eyes. He felt bad but then he thought for a second she was replacing them so no emotions for her." I can't belived I liked you but you're gunna lie in my face?" he replied angerly. Now the tears just poured out of her face. The guy whom she had developed a crush on hated her for what?. Kennadee was angery nobody hurt any of her friends feelings. So she got in his face. "Look were telling the truth but if you idoits are to full of your selfs to relize that..."She started until Kendall got in her face. "HEY! Leave them alone if your gunna yell, yell at me becuase you girls are liars!"Kendall retorted. Kennadee was mad. NOBODY CALLED HER FRIENDS LIARS! "YOU CAN FORGET THE HOCKEY GAME CUASE I'M NOT GOING WITH A JERK!"She yelled. The other girls were comforting Susie and they all left. "DOGS! THERE NOT LIARS! I REALLY DID NEED TWO BANDS SO I CALLED CARLOS' SISTER AND THEN HERE WE ARE NOW!" Gustavo yelled. Now the guys all felt like idoits. They hated them for nothing! Carlos could'nt belive he made someone cry let alone a girl he liked! Kendall felt stupid for calling them liars and well everything. Logan and James had not even spoke to the other two in the girl band instead they gave the girls mean very mean glares. They all looked at each other and ran after the girls but it was to late.

-ROCQUE RECORDS

The girls were about to start recording a song. The instuments started.(3)

(susie)You keep calling it a crash and burn
Just wait your turn you might have time to speak
There barely was a lesson learned
Cause it return no favors back to me

I'm sure it tasted oh so sweet
But it was never good enough for me
I bit the tongue behind my teeth
It was never good enough for me

(all)Chorus:
You said you always keep your word
Show me what you're after
I thought you promised me the world
Tell me what you're after
Go on and take it way to far
Cause here we are waiting once again
You said you always keep your word
Show me what you're after
Just a little faster

(susie)Verse 2:
Are mine the only eyes that see
So steadily this cut and dry routine
Even when you're by my side
I still need time to feel the company

I'm sure it tasted oh so sweet
But it was never good enough for me
I bit the tongue behind my teeth
It was never good enough for me

(susie)Just a little faster

Hold your breath now the bad blood's wearing thin
From the pain that settles in when we learn too much to soon
Hold your breath now the bad blood's wearing thin
From the pain that settles in when we learn too much to soon

"Good job girls but you need a name for your band."Kelly said. "Witch."they said together."what?"kelly asked hurt."No the name of our band Witch." Marielle explained. When they got out of the sound booth Kelly turned to Susie. "was the song about carlos?" she asked. "WHO? Oh you mean the heartbreaking jerk who called me a liar for nothing then yes." Susie responded angerly. "She still is mad at them but which of us is'nt."Piper told her. Piper heard from the girls what had happend. As if by magic the guys came from around the corner. "Susie I'm so sorry I am an idoit I should have listen to..."Carlos back was to him but when she turn around the anger in her eyes alomst made him flich." You think an apoligy is gunna help you? YOU DESTORYED MY HEART!" She he surpised them both, he hugged her. She hugged back."I'm sorry."She whispered."For what? You had every right to be mad." He whispered still in each others are with little space they closed it and they pulled away they both thought the same thing :MY FIRST KISS! "I...was sorry for the kinda was about you..." she whispered. "And I'm kind of a jerk." he said. "do you want to go out with me?" Carlos asked. "I, um yea" Susie said nodding and blushing. Meanwhile Piper and James where talking but not about them selfs about Colleen. "I feel so dumb I hated a amzing girl for what? I'm an idoit!" James yelled. Piper looked at him and put a hand on his shoulder."She's like this all the time she stopped talking to me for a week after I ate her chocolate bar." she explained."Your really cool but um how old are you?"he smiled. "14 and proud! I was in a few of your classes." she said. "Oh yeah your that one kid in my science class." he said. They talked for awhile but there not the only ones. Logan sighed as he approched Marielle." I'm sorry I am a real jerk please forgive me."Logan said. "Logan your no prince charming and your certinly not perfect but if I'm gunna be a true ...friend to you I'll have to accept it so I accept your said. "No thats not why I want you to like me again because you feel ready to!" He exclaimed. "I do! In fact I might like you alot!" she yelled back and with wide eyes she bolted to the door. Kendall was in a heated staring contest with Kennadee only his eyes were filled with sorrow and hers were filled with anger. "Ok you two seem really busy so I'm just gunna go!" Colleen said. Finally Kendall spoke "I'm sorry I didn't mean..." But he was cut off by Kennadee. "NO BECAUSE IF YOU WERE "SORRY" YOU WOULD HAVE NEVER SAID IT!" She yelled. "But how am I gunna learn for my mistakes if I can't make them?" He qustioned. He thought she would have thought about it and forgave him but she just got angeryer. "YOU THINK BEFORE YOU SPEAK!" She retorted as if she didn't hear was going to say something until words didn't come to his mind. Out of anger she turned and walked the same way Collen did.

OK PPL HOW DO YOU LIKE IT? IF I GET AT LEAST 4 REVEIWS I WILL GET 3&4 UP BY TONIGHT! OH AND THESE(_) ARE LITTLE THINGS I KINDA GUNNA DO THERE NOT A/N BUT THEY ARE SO HERE THEY ARE

(1) I WAS TO LAZY TO DESCRIBE THEM LOLZ

(2)I TRIED TO PUT THE MAIN THINGS THE BOYS LIKE INTO THE COUPLES

(3) THAT LINE IS JUST THERE THE SONG IS STILL IN CHAP 2 SO IT IS DISCLAIMED