Hey people, animals, aliens, ghosts and anything else! Ok this is my first Soul Eater story. Also this is my first attempt at 1st person, so don't hate me! My friend recently got into SE and begged me to make this. So this is a dedication my friends. I'll be playing as Rachel. I'm adding some of my friends in this, but just to let you know, these aren't their real names…Or their personality... They don't want anyone thinking they are really like this… On to the story!
NEW WORLD
Rachel's P.O.V
"WOOO! FIELD TRIP! Hey Crystal, is John dead?" I asked. We're all in a bus, heading to a high-tech computer office for a field trip that cost 30 bucks. But we got away from school, so it was ok. In the back, there was Crystal, me, John, his 1-year younger brother Joshua, and our friend Allen.
"Um… no he's just sleeping, as always." Said Crystal…silence. No one talked. It just got awkward…It's raining…This is probably a good time to tell you about us. Ok, let's start with Crystal.
Crystal: She is the group's 'Hi! I can be nice at times, but if you annoy me ...' person. But when she's not in that mode, she's pretty awesome. She down-grades herself a lot though, which everyone encourages her to not do. Also she can play a clarinet, and she's pretty good at it. She likes to read book too. She has extremely long nails that she stabs people with. She has brown hair with red highlights going to her mid-back and dark brown eyes.
John: Ok…he's the groups 'If you do something to me and my friends, I'll bash your brains.' guy… And um…well he sleeps a lot. He loves games. He has long light brown hair for a guy and brown eyes. He can play the violin and he's also good. And only at times, is he a jerk, but a really funny jerk.
Me (Rachel): Ok… Well I'm the groups 'Hey! I'm nice but if you insult my friends, I'll punch you in the gut! :D' person. I have dark brown hair that goes just past my shoulders and my eyes change from brown to black at times. I'm the shortest of the group :'(, but I'm also the strongest. And I admit I'm pretty aggressive at times, but playfully aggressive. I can play the flute.
Allen: Weellllll…. He's a spazzing, turtle loving, weirdo, funny, random dude. He has light brown hair and really light brown eyes. He plays the trumpet.
Joshua: …. Ok… what to say about him. … There are only three words to describe him… RACIST AND SEXIST. He makes racist jokes about everyone one. And sexist jokes too. He doesn't play anything.
Ok done telling you guys about us. … HEY LOOK WE'RE HERE!
"Hey guys we're here! Yay!" I said.
"Can one of yous wake up John?" Crystal asked. She adds an s at the end of some of her words when she's bored.
"I'll do it." Josh said. Then he walked up to his brother, and slapped him in the face.
"Aghgh… what?" John said when he woke up.
"We're here." Crystal told him. We all look out the window and we see a giant building with expensive looking glass windows lining up everywhere.
"…What if someone, like, threw an actual rock? And it like, broke all the windows?" Allen said. We all stared at him for a good long while, the rain soaking our shirts.
"Well if someone actually DID do that, they'd be chased by guard dogs, security with tazers, and maybe even arrested." Crystal stated.
"Typical whites." Josh said. I punched him in the arm.
"Hey guys everybody else is leaving. Let's get off the bus." John sleepily. And he starts getting off, and so do we. We're at the end of the line of the other students. Our science teacher, Mr. Nigh, led us into the building.
"Bill Nigh, or Mr. Nigh. We're here for the class field trip tour." Our science teacher told him.
"I'm sorry; the tour guide is running a little late today. Please wait quietly in the waiting room." She said with all seriousness. And her suit and glasses made it even more serious. Now what? …OOH, A COMPUTER!
Crystal's P.O.V
The receptionist told us to wait. Now what are we going to do? As I looked around, I saw that this place was all fancy like. Glass doors, shiny water fountains, an expensive looking chandelier, and marble counters. The floor had a red carpet lined with a gold looking color on the outside. The walls were white and boring. There were also three door-less rooms going somewhere. And there were also some people in suits were walking around looking busy.
What are we going to do, blow up the building? Well…maybe… If Rachel gets extremely bored then she will probably do it. I better go watch her and stop her from murdering people. Where did she go?
"CRYSTAL I FOUND ANOTHER SERCRET DOOR!" I heard. I looked in the direction here it came from and saw Rachel looking at something. Hmm… I better get John for this. I saw him sitting down on a bench looking awkward and about to fall asleep. 'That's John.' I think. I walk over to him and stab him in the neck with my nails.
"AAghghg… what? What the hell do you want with my life? Blood?" He said waking up again.
"Mmm…. Maybe later. Come help me." I asked
"With what." He said.
"Come help me tell Rachel that a computer screen is not a magical door to an alternate universe." I said.
"Is she still on that?" He asked getting off of the bench and dusting himself off. Even though there wasn't any dirt on him.
"Yup. She's convinced we can go into one of our favorite shows or something." I told him. It's true. One day while we were on the computer watching an episode of Soul Eater, Rachel suddenly started telling us that we will one day go into an alternate universe.
"Ehh… alright." He said. And we both walked over to Rachel.
John's P.O.V
And now Crystal was leading me to Rachel who had her face right at the screen, as if she was going to go right through it.
"Rachel. We already told you that a computer is not a magical portal. Now get away from the computer, you're going to turn blind." Crystal told her yanking her away.
"But no! I'm telling you, one day we shall fall into an alternate universe!" She said resisting her. So I start to help her. Then Josh and Allen walk up to us and see us and starts helping out.
"Is Rachel going on about that alternate universe thing again?" Allen asked as we finally pulled her away.
"Yes." Me and Crystal say in sync. And we stared at each other …I felt like going back to sleep. 'Where's the bench?' I thought.
"I'm telling you! The Bleeding Moon and the stars of the universe whispered it to me!" She said.
"Rachel! Don't say that out loud! They're going to send you to an asylum! Then I'll be all alone because John is all awkward and boring!" Crystal told her.
"Hah! Loner!" My brother Josh told her. I punch him softly in the arm.
"Agh you fatty!" He yelled at me. This was typical. Hey there's the bench! And I just walk away and start heading towards the bench. As I left I heard Rachel going on about the 'Bleeding Moon'. Again. Just as I sat down, a man who was actually smiling instead of the serious faces came towards us.
"Hello. You must be Mr. Nigh's class. Please excuse my lateness; I will be your tour guide for today. You may call me Mr. Bucaro. Shall we be off?" He said. Then he shook hands with Mr. Nye, and we all followed him upstairs. Aghhh… stairs. Why?
Rachel's P.O.V
Finally the tour guy comes. We all follow the rest of the group, but we are at the end.
"Here at Technology 5000 head quarters, we work to improve technology in the world to make it faster, better, and more useful to human kind." He began as we walked upstairs. I could already tell we were going to get bored easily.
"Now here we have our computer labs where we create new faster and modern computers." He said. My eyes widened at the word of computers. As we looked inside, there were many people in lab coats experimenting with computers, chips, people on lunch break, and other stuff.
"Crystal!" I whispered to her. "The portal could be in there! Let go in."
"Rachel. No. We told you, there are no portals in the world. There are only portals in stories, or movies. Not in real life…I think." She said. Mr. Bucaro kept going and talking so we followed but talked to each other. Then John spoke up.
"Rachel, why do you think there are portals that will take us into shows and movies?" He asked.
"I already told you, the Bleeding Moon and the stars of the universe told me." I said.
FLASHBACK
Rachel, John, and Crystal were on a computer watching an episode of Soul Eater. They all laughed as Maka, yet again, smacked Soul with her book.
"I like Maka, she's awesome." Crystal said. She was very much like her too. They liked books and can be aggressive with it, and they are very smart. Plus they both don't really like their father, and had a good companion.
"I like all of them." Rachel said, she had a little of all of them in her. Except for Liz. She was random like Patty, strong like Black*Star, somewhat serious like Kid, smart like Maka, can be really nice like Tsubaki, and laid back like Soul.
"I like Soul." John said. He was like him. Kinda lazy but can be serious and strong when he wants to be. The episode had just finished so Rachel was about to click the next one. Then suddenly, Rachel started hearing these voices, and seeing the Moon with the blood coming out of its mouth surrounded by millions of stars.
'The big day will arrive, and you and your friends will join our world, an alternate universe than your own.' It said. It sounded like there were other voices talking at once. 'Look for the computer screen, it is the portal.' And it stopped. And Rachel snapped back to reality.
"Rachel!" Crystal and John both said.
"GUYS! We're going to fall into an alternate universe through a computer screen!"
"Sure." They said sarcastically.
END OF FLASHBACK
"We told you, there is no such thing as that. Silly." Allen told me. They will learn soon. After 10 minutes of following Mr. Bucaro, we finally got to wonder around.
"Ok class. I hope you enjoyed our tour. Now you all get to wonder around the building. Every door has a sigh, telling you all about what we do. But there is one door that you're not allowed to go to. So if you see a door on the third floor with a sign saying 'DANGER DO NOT ENTER', don't mind it. You should all meet back here in three hours for lunch. Now have fun." He said. And everyone wondered off at that point. I walked over to Crystal, John, Josh, and Allen.
"…You're going to that secret door aren't you?" Crystal asked me.
"Yup." I simply stated. "Let's go."
"Nosey b***h!" Josh said. And he received a punch from his brother.
"Yay! Adventure!" Allen said jumping up and down.
"*sigh* Alright." Crystal said. And off we went to the third floor.
Crystal's P.O.V
Of course Rachel would go to something dangerous. She always did dangerous things, how she is still alive is one of the universes greatest mysteries.
"Ok where is the elevator?" I asked.
"Mmm… over there." John said. He pointed to our left and we saw the elevator. We got in, Allen pushed the button and we were off…with the elevator music and awkwardness. I just stood there, Allen was humming, John… was falling asleep, and Rachel just tapped on the wall.
"So… who wants to hear a Mexican joke?" Joshua asked.
"NO!" Everyone said at once. Good thing we stopped and the doors opened. We all stepped out and saw that the path was clear. Of course, the floor with the dangerous room is unguarded.
"How are we going to find it?" Allen said as we walked out of the elevator. Then after a few steps, we were faced to face with a door with a giant sigh saying 'DANGER DO NOT ENTER CAUTION'.
"….. I think we found it…" Rachel said. She checked the door knob. Open. Of course it is. As we walked inside, there was a weird looking computer with a bunch of codes we couldn't really understand.
"Cool!" John said. We walked up to it and on the desk was an energy drink. Probably a security guard left it there. But then where did he go? Probably to the bathroom? Oh well.
"Hm… maybe this is the portal." Rachel said. I stare at the back of her head.
"Hey look, internet!" Allen said. Then he suddenly spazzed out shaking his hands everywhere. "Blehhh." And quickly went back to normal. That was normal for him.
"Hey let's all watch Soul Eater!" John suggested.
"*Shrug* Alright. Why not?" I said. Then Josh goes up to it, finds the internet, goes to YouTube and starts typing…what? …Wait… OH MY GOSH NO!
"NO NO NO NO!" We all yell. Then Rachel pulled him away from the keyboard. Then she starts typing herself.
John's P.O.V
There. Now we were just waiting for it to load… it was taking a long time. Now it is all quiet…And awkward. I look around and see the outside, and it's still raining. I look at the floor and see a whole bunch of wires. I look at the desk and see the energy drink still there. I look at everyone and they were just standing there looking at the computer screen. It's still loading.
'Didn't they say they were working to make things faster?' I thought.
Suddenly a bunch of lightning bolts occurred and we all jumped and screamed in fear at the sudden noise. Josh, being the one right next to the counter, accidentally knocked over the energy drinking on the floor, wires, and the computer. Rachel tried to stay herself as she slipped on the spilled drink and accidentally elbowed really hard the computer screen, causing a huge crack in it. Then apparently I was next to trip on the drink and fell on the keyboard, typing a bunch of random things. Then another lightning bolt happened and suddenly, there were sparks everywhere. The sparks were coming out of the crack in the screen…Wait… THE CRACK WAS WIDENING! It opened further and a bunch of colors surrounded darkness… Was the screen getting bigger? No… Oh no. We were being pulled in!
"Run!" Rachel screamed.
"What's happening!?" Crystal screamed.
"It's a black whole! I knew it was a matter of time!" Allen yelled as we all tried to get away. But the force was too strong and it pulled us in right when security came through the door. We were tossed into a rainbow spherical looking place. My body felt like it was being torn, ripped apart, and pulled back together all at once. It hurt like hell. And all I wanted to do was sleep.
Done! So how was it? Completely and wondrously amazing? Or was it so horribly bad that your eyeballs melted? Well tell me in the review you leave. Oh and sorry for all the racist jokes, it just goes with his made up personality I gave him. By the way, how was my very first attempt at 1st person? I hope you guys liked it. I will try to update as soon as possible, but I have three stories to work on; this, my Teen Titans story, and another story I'm doing for my friends but am not publishing it… Well that was useless information. Um… Bye!