Hello!!!!
I'm Smiley Mary, this is my first fic in english!!! (I'm from Chile)
I hope you like it. If you see any writting or grammar mistakes please tell me because I don't know for sure if it's alright.
REVIEW!!! I'll try my best to update soon and to make this a good story!!
Summary: Alice is a muggle, and it's her 15th birthday. To celebrate she's inviting her friends over for the last 2 weeks of summer vacation. Sparks will fly between the dares games and things they will do. But everyone must be carefull not to let Alice and her friends know that they are witches/wizards.
"Under a Tree"by Smiley Mary
Chapter 1: "Alice's birthday"
-"thursday night?"-
-"Yep, 8 pm, but Natalie and you can come earlier"-
-"yeah, that way we can catch up on everything"-
-"and I can tell you a little about my guests"-
-"what does that mean?"-
-"you'll see..."-
A shout is heard faintly through the telephone.
-"gotta go, mom's calling, see you thursday"-
-"OK, don't be late"-
-"bye"-
After hearing a click, Alice hangs up and stays in her bed facing the ceiling.
-"this is going to be the best birthday..."-
Suddenly she remembered something, picked the phone and slowly dialed a number she knew very well
-"hello"-
-"Remus?"-
-"Alice! Hi, how are you?"-
-"hi, I'm great, and you?"-
-"fine, just a little bored"-
-"I might be able to help you with that"-
-"what's in your mind?"-
-"do you remember a certain date that's really important"-
-"mmm... in this month?"-
-"Yep"-
-"mmmm..."-
-"Remus!!"-
-"calm down, I would never forget your birthday"- Alice smiled -"I knew you'd remembered"-
-"so, whatya gonna do? "-
-"I'm planning a meeting for the last 2 weeks of vacation"-
-"oh really?"-
-"stop bugging!! Listen, I'm inviting 2 friends and I want you to come with your friends from the other day "-
-"let's see if I got it right, you want me to get dates for you and your friends?"-
-"no, I want you to come with two hot guys so that maybe, maybe, my friends and I can get dates or at least have fun"-
-"It's the same thing I said"-
-"but the way I said it doesn't sound like I'm using you"-
-"yep"-
-"but I'm not, you're really important to me..."- Alice blushed and tried to correct yourself -"because I want you to meet my friends"-
-"it's fine I was just joking"- Remus sounded a bit... sad? But as fast as it appeared, it was gone -"don't worry, I'll do it, I'm sure the guys would love to meet your friends"-
They laughed -"thanks"-
-"no problem. So, see you... when is it?"-
-"thursday 8 pm."-
-"OK, see you thursday"-
-"bye"-
-click-
Again alice lyid in her bed, facing the ceiling, this time, with a gigantic smile on her face.
-"Perfect"-
*** end of chapter one ***
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I hope so, this chapter was short but it's only because it's the introduction to the plot.
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Sincerely and with love
Mary
Miembro de la Orden Siriusiana