SO I re-read chapter 1 AGAIN, n found some errors that I wish to correct , I think I might just do that to all the chapters. Revise and then re-read the chapters after a couple of hours or the next day.

So here we go again

Chocolate made everything better, Chocolate made everything sweet, and Ra knows that chocolate was the only thing there for him.

Bakura always loved chocolate, you could say that's the only thing he has ever love. the only bad thing about it was that it left you with a bittersweet after taste…Still bakura didn't think he could find something better before his crimson eyes meet with chocolate pools.

Marik always loved sugar of any kind any candy was ok if it gave him a sugar rush but when he meets a packed of brown sugar would the rush be too much?

Bakura walked down the hallway late as always, with a chocolate bar in his mouth….enjoying the favor and the texture of the chocolate o Ra knew how much he loved chocolate especially bittersweet chocolate that was made of 35% chocolate liquor(1).

So there he was lost in his thoughts about chocolate when he felt someone bump into him, YES bump into the great bakura! And like that his chocolate bar had fallen to the floor. The sound of the chocolate bar hitting the floor was light but it was enough to make Anger rushed through him because his beloved chocolate had fallen down to the door depraving bakura of it's bittersweet taste.

In an act of anger Bakura grabbed the person by the collar of the shirt slammed said person into the closes locker that bakura found.

"Pleas no?" a small voice said a voice

The voiced sounded rather feminine and it almost made bakura believed the said person was a girl. Bakura put his eyes upon the person and notice that his chocolate attacker was wearing a boy's uniform. Even thought this did not calmed Bakura's anger did the boy did not know who he was?

"B..I t.." Bakura stopped in middle of his sentence

He eyes finally made contact with the boy's eyes and he felt his heart skip a beat. Those eyes were ones that he can be lost in forever and he would not even care that he did not have chocolate.

Bakura felt like he had die and went to haven because what he was staring at were pools of chocolate. If that wasn't haven he didn't know what was. The eyes of the other boy were just like chocolate but the terror in them reminded Bakura that the boy couldn't be an angel.

The terror in the boy chocolate pools reminded bakura that angels were not real . Even thought that in Bakura mind even if he did not wish to admitted the boy was close to what he imagine when he was younger and the chocolate pools that were place as his eyes just made it a plus.

the chocolate pool eyes made bakura be in a trance. The trance made bakura hold on the boy wreaking and finally bakura let the boy go. The moment bakura fingers slipped away from the boy's collar the chocolate pool eyes boy left running with a yelp of terror.

bakura realized what he had done he had scared the boy away, the boy had run from him and he was left with no kind of Id from the boy, not even a name. He would probably never see the boy again and even if he did the boy would run away from him with fear.

Bakura looked down and the chocolate that he was ate before catch his eyes. It was place on the floor broken between his legs and it angered him deeply, that he did not had the chocolate pools or even the chocolate to enjoy.

"Fuck were I'm supposed to get another one" He said with anger, with a funny feeling in his stomach looking at the direction the chocolate pool's eyes boy had left.

"I know marik!" He said to himself with a slight feeling of happiness

When saying that he head to the direction of the dirty blonde and just rubbed the strange feeling of his stomach. His stomach did not feel strange because of the boy that he had just seen he thought to himself, the only reason his stomach felt so strange was because of the lack of chocolate that he had. He was an addict to the chocolate so it made sense that he would suffer negative affects from being deprive of it he thought to himself. Bakura always was a great liar.