It's time to fix this silly story! I see a lot of people are still streaming in and reading it and favoring it and stuff, but Like one reviewer pointed out, its not exactly... good. Like, it doesn't... flow well? Well, I pictured it differently in my head anyway so let's see If I can whip it. into shape. its not to late. to whip it. whip it good.

This yaoi will be starring Yuki~ and Kyo!

It will be based off the manga but not starting from the end of it. More like the middle, where Yuki has just decided to became part of the student council(end of chapter 28, pg.16).

Kyo and Yuki still fight obviously ^^.

Wish me good luck! the chapter is going to be modified around chapter 30.

Chapter 30

"I believe each and every one of you now has your semester exam results in your hands..." the homeroom teacher announced. "if you fail even one subject, you have to come take the makeup test on Sunday." The students in her class began to groan. "You should be grateful that I'm even spending my time on your makeup tests!" The teacher exclaimed.

"That's right, if you don't want to take the makeup test, then don't fail!" Outani exclaimed. "But of course Tohru doesn't have to worry about any of that, right..." Ou looked over to Tohru who was holding her head low in sadness as gloom surrounded her.

"Did you fail...?" Ou asked. Tohru nodded.

"...How many?" she continued. Tohru held up a finger to show she had indeed failed one.

"It's only one subject! It's ok! Don't worry about it!" Ou bubbled happily.

"That right Tohru-chan..." Hanajima said, appearing out of nowhere. She put a hand on Tohru's shoulder. "Compared to me, I failed all the subject. You're much better..." Ou looked at her friend incredulously.

"Actually you should feel depressed too..." Ou commented. "But this is Tohru's first time failing! Didn't the prince teach you this time?"

"No... he taught me..." Tohru answered. Just as she was speaking, Yuki began coming over to talk to her when he noticed the atmostphere.

"Honda-san?" Yuki said as he walked over. "Could it be... you have to take the makeup test?" he asked innocently. Tohru went into shock as flew off into her corner, tears flowing.

"I'm so sorry!" She exclaimed.

"Huh? Ahhh, Honda-san...?" Yuki stammered, unsure of how to cheer her up. He was never terribly good at things like this. How on earth could he get Tohru to see it was ok anyway?

'I am totally useless!' Tohru thought to herself. 'Yuki-kun tutored me with all his heart, but I failed... I returned failure to his efforts, I can't face him right now! why is my head hurting so much? ' Tohru continued to think helplessly as Ou and Hana sat at either side of her, trying to comfort her. Yuki mustered his courage and tried to confort her the only way he knew how.

"Honda-san... don't worry about your failing. That is, sometimes you win, sometimes you lose." he told her in his princely way. He knew he sounded kind of silly, and it wasn't a very good way to cheer her up. But he didn't like the thought of her suffering because of her failure and then, to make her feel even worse, cause she failed the one time he helped her. He wished he could find a better way to help beside telling her something her mom probably told her before. But he's no good with words. "Besides, the makeup test is easier then the exam, so don't worry too much."

"Yup... easy..." Hana commented in her toneless voice.

"It doesn't sound convincing because it came from your mouth..." Ou said.

Tohru looked down, and continued to think, 'I'm so useless...'

-After school-

While she's walking home with Kyo, he asked, "You have to take the makeup test?" He had heard from Momiji and wantd to make sure the kid wasn't just spouting stuff to annoy him.

Tohru reacted the same way as in the classroom, flying off in despair, tears flowing. Kyo could only look on at her display, wondering what was wrong.

"What's wrong?" He asked, an annoyed edge to his voice. when she didn't respond, he threatened to walk away. "I'm leaving now! Hey!" She finally responded and got back to continue with him. They continued to walk as Tohru thought on, reflecting on her bad grade.

'For some reason, I am in deep depression, it seems like... I can't even walk steady. I am so useless! 'I will graduate from high school', that's what I promised mom! But I actually failed the test. I'm starting to feel dizzying right now... just because of this, I... ahhh... I... what's wrong? Pull it together...!'

Tohru fell forward onto Kyo's shoulder who yelled out in surprise.

"Huh?" He said turning his head to look at Tohru, who was still laying on his back. "Don't act like that. If you do, you'll get a fever…" He watched as Tohru then slumped off of Kyo's shoulder and onto the floor. Her red cheeks and incoherent mumbles drew Kyo to a conclusion.

"EH? Did you just get a fever?" Kyo asked frantically.

"Eh…." Tohru mumbled weakly on the floor.

'I can't believe it! Have to get her home, home, home!' Kyo thought rushing around her.

-at home-

"32.8 C Degrees!" Shigure exclaimed "tohru has… a cold!" He added dramatically.

"I knew THAT!" Kyo said angrily. "Just go upstairs and get some rest!" He yelled at the dazed girl.

"No, no, I'm ok! I just need to take a pill and then I…." Tohru crumpled weakly to one side.

"NO! You need rest!" Kyo insisted.

"But what about my part time job? And I still haven't gone shopping for dinner…" she muttered weakly.

"Tohru-Chan, today, everything is cancelled. You just be a good girl and get to bed. Ok?" Shigure asked, leaning forward and tapping her nose.

"Hai." she replied.

"Good girl!" Shigure said happily. Kyo looked away from the embaressing scene. 'Pervert.'

Shigure got off the phone with Momiji who was saying something about taking care of it and leave it to me. Momiji was cute, but most of the time, Shigure couldn't make a left or right of him. He returned to the kitchen and stared in surprise.

"Ahhh~!" Was all Shigure said as he took in the scene of Kyo in front of the stove, mixing something in a pot. "No way! Kyo, are you cooking?" He asked teasingly.

"Well, sick people can't cook." Kyo said, trying to ignore the dog. Silence stretched on.

"What? You got a problem?" Kyo said defensively, grabbing hold of his robe, finally snapping at him while waiting for the dog to say someting to irritate him.

"I didn't say anything! What about our dinner?" He asked.

"Take-out, of course!" Kyo said, flipping off the fire and taking the pot of food. "Why should I be bothered by such things!" He said, busting the kitchen door down.

"Anything you break you have to pay for!" Shigure said, "A fine!" He called after him when he didn't respond. "What, embarrassed?" Shigure continued somewhat to himself.

At the time that Kyo was headed up the stairs, Yuki was coming home.

"I'm home!" He said politely. He saw Kyo making a beeline for the stairs.

"Hey, what do you have there? Something hot? Careful not to spill it on yourself, stupid cat." He said. Kyo didn't say anything and started climbing the stairs. Yuki climbed after him. "Aren't you going to eat downstairs?" He continued.

"It's not for me, damned rat! It's for Tohru! She's sick, but I'm sure you didn't hear! You were too busy with other crap."

"What?" Yuki questioned. "She's sick?" He continued. 'And you really made her something? ' He thought. Kyo took the cover off the pan as he reach the top of the stairs. Yuki was still a couple steps behind. He'd seen the soup inside. 'He really did make her something. Who knew he was even that…considerate.'

"Why?" He asked. But Kyo did not reply. He was staring down a hallway. Then he moved on like Yuki didn't even ask a question- no, like he wasn't even there. Yuki followed after and looked to where he had been staring off. A memory of Tohru hanging laundry down the hall came to his mind.

'He's thinking of her.' He couldn't help but think, somewhat bitterly. Usually if Yuki was nearby, he dominated Kyo's thoughts. The fact he was able to ignore him... He followed him down the hall to where Tohru's room was. He stood outside the door to hear the conversation. He probably shouldn't be eavesdropping, but he wanted to know how Tohru was and wether he wanted to admit it or not, she opened up to Kyo a lot easier then to himself.

"It's really good." He heard Tohru say. A slight silence went before he heard Kyo say, "Just hurry up and eat it so you can get better."

"Hai" Tohru replied.

"Tsk," Yuki muttered to himself, "Only Kyo would make such demands of a sick person."

"Well, leave your plate when you finish eating." He heard him getting up and Yuki was about to flee when he heard Tohru stop him with her next sentence.

"I….I'm sorry… that I'm this way…That I'm sick…" Something in Yuki pricked him slightly.

"If you feel that way then hurry up and get better!" Kyo demanded again.

'Idiot.' was all Yuki could think. After a short silence he heard her say "Hai…"

Not too long after that he heard Kyo move again.

"...Cry..." He heard him mumble. "Don't cry… tell me what's wrong… alright?" A short silence went on again before Tohru continued.

"I had promised my mom that I would graduate high school, but then I failed a test! And I also let Yuki down after he worked so hard to teach me. Then I got this cold. I'm completely useless…" She finished.

Yuki wanted to jump in there and tell her how wrong her thinking was, but then again, Kyo was in there and he wanted to know how he dealt with these things. After all, he only ever wanted to beat him up and was always angry.

"You done?" Kyo asked.

"I'm done." She replied.

"You can always make up the test. You can change your failure. And that stupid Yuki. Who cares about him! Let him die! Let that stupid rat die! Fuck him!"

Yuki almost fell over. 'That stupid cat! I'm going to kill him later for that!' He practically yelled, but he still wanted to hear how he was going to make her feel better.

"And just get better from your cold so you can walk around with that silly laugh of yours and doing things around the house." He said. "Otherwise, it feels too weird… so as long as you can walk around the house, I'll cook your meals for you… so you don't have to worry that much…Now eat something to cool your cold down!" Kyo demanded.

"Hai!" She said. 'He's trying to cheer me up…' she thought.

"It's good!" she commented after a short silence.

"Compared to your cooking, this is really bad. Really!" Kyo responded. Tohru smiled at Kyo who began to blush as he looked up.

"It's weird when you suddenly feel better!" He commented.

Yuki had remembered something, so he pulled himself away from the heartwarming moment to leave.

'so happy…I am so happy kyou-kun…' tohru thought.

-later-

"Don't make a mistake Hari!" Momiji exclaimed from behind Kisa. "If To-ru says hurt you have to stop!" He finished.

"Don't worry, it doesn't hurt a bit." Tohru said to calm them.

"But Shi-kun says it's going to hurt! It's going to hurt a lot! He says Hari always get the wrong spot!" Momiji claimed.

"That's because I do it on purpose." Hatori said.

"Hatori! So you did do it on purpose! How could you! I knew it!" Shigure complained from behind.

'I have no choice you complain so much.' Hatori thought to himself. "You are all too loud, she needs her rest!" Hatori said, kicking Momiji and Shigure out the room.

"Um… Hatori, about the medicine fee..." Tohru started.

"… Just get better." Hatori replied. "If you stay in bed all day, a lot of people will worry. Call me if you need anything." Tohru and Kisa looked after him as he left.

"So.. Even uncle Hatori is worried…" Kisa commented.

"Huh? UNCLE?" Tohru asked. "Ok let's see, Kisa is 12, Hatori is 27, 15 year difference.." Tohru thought aloud. Knock knock. "Come in…"

"Can I come in?" Yuki asked, to make sure it was safe.

"Oh, of course." Tohru responded.

"What did Hatori say?" Yuki asked.

"He said I'll be fine." Tohru responded.

"Here, this is for you." He said, handing her a notebook.

"What is it?" She asked.

"It looks like the possible questions for the makeup test." he said. "If you can answer these, you should be good to go. After when you feel better we can work on them together." If this is the only way he can make her happy, he'll try it.

"Thanks… Thank you!" She said.

'Not for myself, it's for someone else. For somebody else I have to cheer up. This feeling is good. The source of my vitality… is given from the people around me . Mother… I was finally able to past my test…'

-the following Monday in homeroom-

"So it's true. The makeup exams are easier than the exam." Hana said, looking up at the sky in false surprise. Or as surprised as someone who was usually impassive can look.

'Hanajima… did you fail your exam on purpose?' Yuki thought worriedly. He turned around and saw Kyo also looking over with a sweat drop, probably thinking the same thing.

'Well Kyo, your secret is my secret.' He thought and smiled.

"What?" Kyo demanded angrily when he saw Yuki smiling at him.

"Nothing." Yuki said looking away.

"You were staring!" He continued.

"I was just looking." Yuki replied as he left the room, and waited till he was down the hall to smile again.

I know It may seem weird that Kyo and Tohru's relation is too highlighted, but it's important to the overall plot TRUSTME! And keep reading THX U I love reading your reviews. ~~