okay so those of you who have read my other stories know that I changed Tris's appearance and that I changed her attitude a little as well. so I'm going to try and write a better story sort of
based off the first one and second one using things from both their plot lines. so I apologize in advance if you don't like it. if you want to give me suggestions and feedback then it's highly
appreciated but you don't have to and I'm not pressuring for it. so thanks and I hope you enjoy it.
CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS
Six:
This character is Tris but she goes by Six. her hair is half blonde half black. she has 16 piercings; 7 in her left ear, 5 in her right ear, one in her left eyebrow, on in the right side of her nose, one in
her tongue and a belly button ring. she has 6 tattoos; the word 'PAIN' in black letters on her right bicep, the words 'FEAR GOD ALONE' in black letters on her lower back, a grey and black rose vine
crawling up the left side of her rib cage, dauntless flames on her left calf, the roman numerals IV+VI on her right wrist and a peace symbol on the back of her neck. she has a six pack, she's ripped
in general, not overly ripped but really strong. she is about a D cup, 5'10, she has a nose that makes her look fox like, big blue eyes and full lips. she tans nicely. she almost never smiles. she's sort
of violent.
Four:
This character is Tobias but he goes by Four. he has dirty blonde hair that he wears as a buzzcut. he has 2 piercings; one in his eyebrow and one in his left ear. he has 2 tattoos; one that covers his
entire back (instead of me describing it just google image search "divergent Fours Tattoo") and the roman numerals IV+VI on his right wrist. he has a six pack and is extremely ripped, he is 6'3,
he has a medium sized nose that is hooked on the end but you can't tell. me has a full bottom and spare upper lip, he as piercing blue eyes. he doesn't smile, he gives the occasional smirk but
never laughs. he's sort of violent.
Uriah:
he has black hair that is in a buzzcut. tan. he has one tattoo; dauntless flames on the left side of his chest. brown eyes and a big smile. he is really muscular. 6'0 and is really goofy.
Zeke:
he has black hair that is in a buzzcut. tan. he has one tattoo, dauntless flames on his right shoulder blade. brown eyes and a big smile. extremely ripped. 6'2 and is slightly less goofy and annoying than his younger brother Uriah.
Marlene:
she is white but not pale. brown hair. green eyes. no tattoos. 5 piercings on right ear and 3 on left, one tongue piercing. 5'9. muscular but not super muscular. she has a four pack. she is dating Uriah.
Shauna:tan, long brown hair, brown eyes, a nose and tongue piercing, 2 in left ear, 3 in right ear. no tattoos. 5'9 and a half. muscular like marlene and has a four pack. she is dating Zeke.
Christina:
goes by Chris. 5'10. tan, long brown hair. she has a tattoo of something abstract on her left calf. she has an eyebrow and nose piercing, 4 in right ear and 2 in left ear. same muscularity as mar and shauna. she has a six pack. she is dating will.
Will:
he is 6'1 with blonde hair and green eyes. he is as ripped as Uriah. (all guys have six packs.) he has no tattoos or piercings. smart ass.
ok so next page is chapter one. I thought that I should do character descriptions so I didn't have to describe them through narrating or through the characters themselves.