Okay here is my first fanfiction ever!
I don't really think it is that good but my friends do so that is why I am posting it
I basically wanted to know what other people thought of it...
Disclaimer: I do not own any peice of Naruto, Masatoshi Kusakabe does.
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Chapter One: Disappearances in the Village Hidden in the Leaves
In a world full of fan girls and what not, there was a deviously interesting plot happening. From one place to another there were characters being plucked from their world's existence.
One day a boy with messy blonde hair and big blue eyes awoke. He stretched and yawned as he did every single day. He thought to himself, "Come on Naruto! Why is your life so dull! You're a ninja for goodness sake," for even his missions had become somewhat boring. He wondered these thoughts over and over again as he ate his instant ramen and drank his almost expired milk. Naruto got dressed and walked sulkily outside. Out of the corner of his blue eyes he saw, Sakura coming up with Sai. Like every morning he tried to flirt with Sakura but only received a punch in the face and Sai stood there before them not doing a thing at all. Naruto not feeling up to training today said, "I think I will skip out of practice today. Just tell Kakashi that I couldn't make it….. If he asks more about it, tell him I'm….. I'm feeling a bit angsty today.
Silently he jumped away in his obvious orange jumpsuit. When he reached the place he had unconsciously gone to he looked and saw that he was at a forest's edge. Why had he come here? His mind answered him, "I have a strange feeling something interesting will happen here today." He walked through the forest and stopped suddenly. It seemed as though his breath was knocked out of him and he stood motionless as he saw somebody he thought he would never see again and with others he knew.
Sasuke stood in the middle of some of their friends. They too had incredualated faces and a curious air was around them. Sasuke, as usually, looked bored and was silent as the others asked questions they knew he wouldn't answer. Neji, Gaara, and Lee were here, in the middle of the forest for some completely unknown reason, with Sasuke and Naruto. Today defiantly qualified as interesting.
Naruto looked closely at the trio. Gaara was the furthest away from Sasuke and the closest to Naruto. He also stood almost normally. He still had the sulky look about him with his uninterested eyes lined with thick black eye make-up, and had his sand carrier on his back. Power radiated off of him and so did a small tinge of curiosity, along with concentration. He could only be concentrating on two things; one: the conversation Sasuke purposefully ignored and two: the fact that he was trying to cover up his curiosity. The second was working well in Naruto's mind, but also thought about why he was here and not the Village Hidden in the Sand.
Lee was not at all careful to hide his curiosity, happiness, anger, rivalry, fear, and excitement as he shot questions at Sasuke like a cannon. His black Beatle's hair and thick bushy eyebrows looked extremely odd on his weird circular eyes. He wore the same old green jumpsuit that didn't fit him at all. In Naruto's mind he was a fashion failure, but this was coming from a guy with an orange jumpsuit.
Neji looked interested. He was sure to cover some feelings but not much, and you could read the ones that were visible in his eyes. But Naruto wasn't at all interested in Neji too much right now and focused back on Sasuke. He had the same haircut: cut like a cockatoo or whatever that thing is, along with his Sound Ninja outfit that would make any girl there shiver with both fear and happiness.
Still Naruto stood there unnoticed and confused. Suddenly, Kakashi started to jump over some of the trees, searching for something. He had just been taken out of the hospital a few days ago and was in excellent health. He stopped when he saw the familiar orange jumpsuit and landed in front of Naruto. He looked upon the strange teen and noticed that his unusually large blue eyes were wider than usual, if that's possible, and with a hint of mixed emotions. He said, "Naruto what's the matter. It's not like you to be angsty or miss a practice."
The others all turned to face their new guests, even Sasuke. All Naruto could do was fall to his knees and ask, "How…. Why……When….." Kakashi just now realizing they were not alone turned around. He saw Sasuke and was gone in a flash. Naruto had just blinked and missed what had happened but when he opened his eyes he saw Kakashi holding Sasuke's hands behind his back. Naruto knew Sasuke was considered a type of criminal of the Village Hidden in the Leaves but this hurt hard. After all, their friendship was Naruto's first bond. The odd air that had been there just a minute ago was replaced by anything but normal.
When suddenly out of nowhere a giant ball of blue light crashed right into the group. Nobody was hurt and nobody was mixed up with many emotions anymore. There was only one thing going through their minds, "Where in the world were they?" The small group had mysteriously been taken to what looked like a modern day luxury hotel. Why they were there? Who knows? But it was magnificent site to behold. The ceiling was large and it looked as if the walls were made of gold. There were beautiful tints of red everywhere along with other colors that matched well. A man and woman came out of an escalator which was made of nothing but glass. They came out and said to the new visitors in unison, "Welcome travelers to our beautiful hotel." The man was dressed as a butler and the woman like a maid.
The man wore a normal black suit with white undershirt and black tie. He had a stern face with complicated features. His black hair was slicked back with grease and you could see faint traces of aging in his face and hair. He stood upright and wore what appeared to be black dress shoes. His nametag read "Samuel".
The lady wore a maid's outfit. Everybody knows what that looks like so Naruto didn't really process that through his mind. She did, however, have big soft black eyes. Her shiny black hair was to the length of her mid-back. She wore on high heels. She had a delicate noise and, to Naruto, were perfect red rosy lips. The lady looked to be about in her twenties while the man looked to be in his late fifties. Her nametag read "Kristy".
Naruto exclaimed one last time breathlessly, "Where are we?"
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I know it doesn't really make complete sense but it is basically in Shippuuden and Naruto had given up on trying to find Sasuke
I guess he heard that his brother killed him or something like that, that is a what this is going by I don't know if that actually happens or not
If it does, I am a good guesser...sort of, if it doesn't then it will still be going by that