This is my first FanFiction story, so don't get mad if I mess up. I would be happy if you leave a review so I know how I did, but you don't have to. I postponed it because I didn't have time and I thought it was lame. Rated T for violence, But it seems like K+ , tell me what you think the rating should be.
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN MARIO OR FINAL DESTINATION. Just this story, unless there is somehow another story or movie exactly like this.
Final Destination (Yoshinaruto Edition)
Mario, Luigi, Peach, Yoshi, Daisy, Birdo, Bowser, Bowser Jr., Wario, Waluigi, Toad, Toadette, Donkey Kong, Diddy Kong, and Koops went to a water park. They decided to ride in some boat ride.
Luigi: Wow, this looks fun. I can't wait!
Toad: I love water parks.
Yoshi: I haven't been.
Toadette: You've never been to a water park?
Yoshi: Nope.
Toad: Well you'll love it.
Bowser Jr.: It looks like it goes really high. I'm scared of heights.
Bowser: You can't stay by yourself.
Bowser Jr.: Yes I can.
Yoshi: I'll stay with you.
Bowser: Are you sure?
Yoshi: I'm scared of water so yeah.
Wario: If you are scared of water then why did you go to a water park?
Yoshi: I was invited and didn't want to be rude by not going.
Koops: How come Goombella, Bobbery, Flurrie, Vivian, and Mrs. Mowz didn't come?
Mario: Maybe they were busy.
Daisy: Come on guys lets go get the tickets.
Ticket Manager: How many tickets?
Mario: 13 please.
Ticket Manager: Okay that is $6.50.
(Mario gives him the money and gets the tickets)
Mario: Thank you.
Bowser Jr.: Yoshi and I will watch from over there.
Toad: Okay lets go.
(The 13 of them get in the boat and the Boat slowly goes up splashing a little water on Bowser)
Bowser Jr.: Hey Yoshi doesn't the hill part of the ride look kinda broken?
(Yoshi looks at it and sees that it is broken which would result in them flipping over and drowning)
Yoshi: Oh no. GUYS THE BOATS GONNA FLIP OVER!
Toadette: what did you say Yoshi?
Yoshi: I SAID THE BOATS GONNA FLIP OVER!
Peach: WHAT!
(But it was too late, they all scream as they fall to their doom)
(The boat flips over as it falls into the water upside down and no one can get their safety belts off, and they drown)
Luigi: Daisy is something wrong?
Daisy: We need to get out of here!
Luigi: What are you talking about?
Daisy: Everyone lets go we need to get off!
(Daisy takes off the safety belt and leaves and the others follow her)
Waluigi: Okay what is going on here?
Donkey Kong: Is there something wrong?
Daisy: I had a vision that the boat was going to flip over and we were going to drown.
Diddy: That's not going to happen.
Mario: The people that were with us are still on the ride, lets see what happens.
Daisy: What? Hey, stop the ride they are going to die!
(But it was too late the other people on the boat fell and drowned after it flipped over)
Bowser: How did this happen?
Peach: I don't know but I'm glad we got off.
(Yoshi and Bowser Jr. ran to them)
Yoshi: Are you guys okay?
Koops: Yeah, were fine.
Bowser Jr.: What happened?
Birdo: The Boat that those people were on flipped over and they drowned.
Wario: But Daisy said she had a vision that this would happen, she freaked out and left so we followed her.
Yoshi: Well I'm glad everyone is okay. Hey Daisy, have you had visions like that before?
Daisy: Maybe a few times.
Diddy: Good thing you had that vision Daisy.
Peach: Yeah, hey do you think we should go home, after what happened, because I'm to scared to go on any more rides.
Donkey Kong: Yeah lets go, I can't wait to get home and start eating those bananas we have.
Diddy: Oh yeah, we have tons of bananas, lets go!
Peach: Hey Daisy, do you want to go to my castle? Its been a while.
Daisy: ...Sure.
Yoshi: I'll go home and get some fruit, you wanna come Birdo.
Birdo: Yeah I'll go.
( They start walking across the street to get to the car after looking both ways. All of a sudden a speeding car hits peach)
(Daisy looks to her right and sees the car)
Daisy: PEACH LOOK OUT!
(Daisy pushes peach away and the car barely misses them)
Yoshi: What happened?
Birdo: Let me guess, another vision came true?
Daisy: Yes, a car almost hit peach but I pushed her out of the way and saved her.
Koops: Hey, isn't there a movie where this guy has a vision about an airplane crashing and he and his friends get off, it comes true, then they start dying one by one?
Yoshi: Yeah I saw that, and if you intervene with there death then they are saved.
Birdo: I don't believe it.
Waluigi: Okay so Peach is safe, who is next?
Birdo: And they ignore me.
Koops: They die in the order they were supposed to die on the ride. Daisy, do you remember who died in order?
Daisy: Yeah I think so, let me get a pen and some paper so we can remember who is supposed to die in order.
Peach: I have a notebook and a pen here.
Daisy: Thanks Peach, Okay so it is Luigi, Wario, Waluigi, Diddy, Donkey Kong, Birdo, Koops, Toad, Toadette, Mario, Daisy, Bowser.
Bowser Jr.: Yoshi, Peach, and I are not on the list because peach was rescued and Yoshi and I never got on the ride.
Daisy: Correct.
Wario: Okay so lets protect Luigi.
Waluigi: Whats going to happen to him?
Daisy: I don't know yet.
Birdo: Hey how do we know we are on deaths list anyway? That was just a movie.
Toad: There has to be some punishment for cheating death, and the coincidence that Peach was the first to die in the vision and almost being hit by a car tells me that the we are on deaths list.
Birdo: Whatever.
Daisy: I think I am about to have another vision.
(A thief comes to them pulling out a gun, wanting their money, they refuse so he shoots Luigi)
Daisy: Luigi got shot by a thief.
Wario: Okay so lets look for a thief somewhere.
Peach: I think we should all go to the castle first.
Yoshi: If were going to your castle, can we get some fruit first?
Peach: I don't think I have any so go ahead.
Yoshi: Okay thanks.
(Yoshi looks at the different stores)
Yoshi: Lets go there.
(They watch Yoshi enter the store and come out a few minutes later)
Yoshi: I got 5 apples and 4 watermelons.
Diddy: Isn't that a thief right there?
Thief: Hey you, give me your money.
Mario: We spent it on a ride.
Yoshi: And some fruit.
Peach: He probably wants it for his family.
Thief: If you don't have money then give me the fruit.
Yoshi: No.
(He aims the gun at Luigi)
Thief: Are you sure?
Bowser: Get him!
(Bowser tackles him but the thief had already fired his gun just as Wario jumped in the way thinking he was wearing a bullet proof vest, but forgot to put it on)
Waluigi: Good thing Wario bought a bullet proof vest.
Wario: I … forgot it *cough cough*
Waluigi: Darn it. Wario are you okay?
Wario: I thought I had the Vest on, HOW DID I FORGET TO PUT IT ON! *cough cough*
(Waluigi goes to check his wounds)
Birdo: Hey Daisy, didn't you say the order was Luigi then Wario? It skipped Luigi.
Peach: I think that when Wario jumped in front of him he intervened so it saved Luigi and skipped to Wario.
Daisy: Bowser Jr. can you be the on who changes the list since your not on it? I need to focus on saving everyone.
Bowser Jr.: Sure, Lets see the new order is: Diddy, Waluigi, Donkey Kong, Birdo, Koops, Toad, Toadette, Mario, Daisy, Bowser.
Birdo: I still don't think this is happening from a movie.
Toadette: You won't think that for very long.
Toad: Okay lets just get ready to protect Diddy. Daisy, have you had any more visions yet?
Daisy: No, not yet.
Birdo: We are NOT being hunted by death, don't you people see that!
Yoshi: Birdo just calm down.
Birdo: I'm not just gonna sit here and worry about my death when its not happening. I'm going to have some fun instead.
(Birdo leaves walking in some random direction)
Daisy: Yoshi, follow Birdo, if you see anything that might kill her, save her, but don't do anything risky because it might be your time. If it is your time I will warn you and we will get you off of deaths list.
Yoshi: Okay, thanks Daisy.
(Yoshi runs in Birdo's direction without Birdo knowing)
Peach: Okay were are all going to survive.
Diddy: what about Wario?
Peach: ...Waluigi, how is he doing?
Waluigi: He is still alive, we need to get him to a hospital.
Wario: It doesn't matter, I am... not gonna *cough* make it.
Waluigi: You don't know that.
Toad: if you get shot in the stomach you will die of blood loss.
Waluigi: But I can't go on without Wario.
Bowser: lets take the thief's gun, it could be helpful, as well as wario's bullet proof vest.
Bowser Jr.: I agree.
(A King cobra bites someone and they die from the poison)
Luigi: Daisy, did you have another vision?
Daisy: Diddy is going to die from a poisonous snake.
Diddy: I hate snakes, keep them away!
Peach: Don't worry, you'll be fine.
Koops: Lets go to peach's castle.
(Before ariving Bowser Sees a snake next to tree slithering towards Diddy)
Bowser: Diddy get away from there!
I don't think I did to well. I don't know if I am messing up on their personality, the script or both. I would be happy if you would review and say if you liked it or didn't and what you think I didn't do well on, like the script or the story or both. I plan to post the entire story at the same time.