Editor's Note: I'm still pretty new at writing fanfics, so please review!
I need your comments!
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While the SS(Seven Sheshi) are resting, Miaka decides to take a walk. She's strolling down the street window-shopping when suddenly she is grabbed from behind.
"Aaaaahhhhhh!!" Miaka screams.
"Jeezuz, it's only me!! Tamahome laughs. "Women." He mumbles.
"Phtt…oh, soo-rry. Gosh, I'm starving, let's go get something to eat." said Miaka.
"Sure." replied Tamahome.
As they got toward the nearest restaurant, they pass by an old woman.
"Woould yoou liike tooo have your fortune toold?" the old woman rasped.
"Okay, why not!!" Miaka said cheerfully.
Gurglegrowlgrumble. "Oh fudge, my stomach's growling, I don't think…"
"Don't worry Miaka, I'll get a take-out for us, now you just stay put." he said to her like she was a dog."
"Would you like me to play dead also?" Miaka teased sarcastically.
Tamahome, not knowing what that meant, firmly said, "No, I don't want you to, I want you to be the happiest wife in the whole world before you do."
Miaka, laughing, says, "Silly!! Of course I didn't mean it THAT way." and then kicks Tamahome playfully, but REAL hard.
"These other world people are so confusing." thinks Tamahome to himself.
While all of this is happening, the old lady is standing there watching them silently. Finally she piped up and said, "Now don't worry young man, I'll take good care of your uhhh, friend, you just go on now."
"See ya Miaka!!" Tamahome yelled.
"Mmm Hmm." she replied.
"Come now, child, come." the old lady told her.
Miaka was led through a tent flap and into a dark and moist room. She was seated on a hard wooden bench.
"Come, this service isn't free, one…"
"Yeah, coming right up."
"I do palm reading."
Miaka stuck out her hand.
"Hmmm, I see bad fortune brought upon you near, and a friend.."
"Yes, I know. Can you tell me about my relationships? Is it going to be bad? Or good? Or…" Miaka pondered.
"Do calm down. Yess, I see something. Hmmm, let me transcribe thiss...it says, 'Thousth paths shall not merge together in this life.' You must find out the meaning of this on your own, I have other paying customers."
"What's my fortune supposed to mean?" asked Miaka to herself.
Miaka was so troubled by her fortune that she had not noticed a blue aurora that had surrounded the woman after the fortune was told. At this moment, Tamahome comes bursting into the tent.
"Okay, I got us some noodles and rice, let's have a picnic together! I saw a great place in the park where we can watch the sunset together!!"
"Tamahome, that's wonderful." answered Miaka.
"Beeewaareee…" cackled the old woman.
"Who's she?" asked Tamahome.
"Oh, she's the crazy old woman. 'mem?"
"Right."
"I'm not only that, children." the old woman mumbled when they were out of hearing range, "I'm not only that."
*****
Tamahome walked quickly to the park while Miaka trailed along beside him. She was troubled with the idea of the fortune teller's prediction. Or was it not a prediction?
"Bad fortune. Not good. Oh well, I'll think of that later. Hmmm, paths, more than one, not merge together, won't meet, paths won't meet. She couldn't possibly mean us, could she?" Miaka thought in her mind.
"Hey, what's the matter? All of the sudden not hungry?" Tamahome asked, concerned. We all know that Miaka is aaa SORTA a pig, so Tamahome is a little worried about her.
"Oh, it's just Yui, I don't understand why one minute she's my best friend and all of the sudden she's so mean." Miaka lied.
"I know," said Tamahome, "these outer-alien world weirdo girls, why can't they just get along?" he thought out loud.
"HEY!!" Miaka shouted.
Tamahome receives a punch in the face (hehehe).
A candlemark later, Tamahome exclaims, "Oh, right here, it's PER-FECT!!"
They settle down and unwrap their packages. They are very content to be with each other while they can.
M: "Tamahome, I..I don't want to leave you. I don't want to lose you."
T: "And you won't, we'll be together, because we were meant to be. And out wedding won't have to be grand…"
M: "No, Tamahome, I don't think we can."
T: "WHAT?!? But why?"
M: "You don't understand, my family, my friends, I.. I can't just leave my whole world, I'll miss them so much. And the pizza and hamburgers and all the yummy stuff in my world. ;-)
T: "No, I do understand, I do. My family, I feel…" (when his family gets killed by Nakago)
M: (wails) "And it's all my fault!!"
T: "No, my mission is to protect Suzaku No Miko, to be with her, to never let anything happen to her. You did nothing…"
Tamahome is interrupted when Miaka sighed contentedly and let her head fall into his lap. She looked up at him, and he smiled and bent over for a passionate kiss.
"I wish we could just stay like this forever."
*****
Well, whad'ya think? Once again, PLEASE review!
*****
While the SS(Seven Sheshi) are resting, Miaka decides to take a walk. She's strolling down the street window-shopping when suddenly she is grabbed from behind.
"Aaaaahhhhhh!!" Miaka screams.
"Jeezuz, it's only me!! Tamahome laughs. "Women." He mumbles.
"Phtt…oh, soo-rry. Gosh, I'm starving, let's go get something to eat." said Miaka.
"Sure." replied Tamahome.
As they got toward the nearest restaurant, they pass by an old woman.
"Woould yoou liike tooo have your fortune toold?" the old woman rasped.
"Okay, why not!!" Miaka said cheerfully.
Gurglegrowlgrumble. "Oh fudge, my stomach's growling, I don't think…"
"Don't worry Miaka, I'll get a take-out for us, now you just stay put." he said to her like she was a dog."
"Would you like me to play dead also?" Miaka teased sarcastically.
Tamahome, not knowing what that meant, firmly said, "No, I don't want you to, I want you to be the happiest wife in the whole world before you do."
Miaka, laughing, says, "Silly!! Of course I didn't mean it THAT way." and then kicks Tamahome playfully, but REAL hard.
"These other world people are so confusing." thinks Tamahome to himself.
While all of this is happening, the old lady is standing there watching them silently. Finally she piped up and said, "Now don't worry young man, I'll take good care of your uhhh, friend, you just go on now."
"See ya Miaka!!" Tamahome yelled.
"Mmm Hmm." she replied.
"Come now, child, come." the old lady told her.
Miaka was led through a tent flap and into a dark and moist room. She was seated on a hard wooden bench.
"Come, this service isn't free, one…"
"Yeah, coming right up."
"I do palm reading."
Miaka stuck out her hand.
"Hmmm, I see bad fortune brought upon you near, and a friend.."
"Yes, I know. Can you tell me about my relationships? Is it going to be bad? Or good? Or…" Miaka pondered.
"Do calm down. Yess, I see something. Hmmm, let me transcribe thiss...it says, 'Thousth paths shall not merge together in this life.' You must find out the meaning of this on your own, I have other paying customers."
"What's my fortune supposed to mean?" asked Miaka to herself.
Miaka was so troubled by her fortune that she had not noticed a blue aurora that had surrounded the woman after the fortune was told. At this moment, Tamahome comes bursting into the tent.
"Okay, I got us some noodles and rice, let's have a picnic together! I saw a great place in the park where we can watch the sunset together!!"
"Tamahome, that's wonderful." answered Miaka.
"Beeewaareee…" cackled the old woman.
"Who's she?" asked Tamahome.
"Oh, she's the crazy old woman. 'mem?"
"Right."
"I'm not only that, children." the old woman mumbled when they were out of hearing range, "I'm not only that."
*****
Tamahome walked quickly to the park while Miaka trailed along beside him. She was troubled with the idea of the fortune teller's prediction. Or was it not a prediction?
"Bad fortune. Not good. Oh well, I'll think of that later. Hmmm, paths, more than one, not merge together, won't meet, paths won't meet. She couldn't possibly mean us, could she?" Miaka thought in her mind.
"Hey, what's the matter? All of the sudden not hungry?" Tamahome asked, concerned. We all know that Miaka is aaa SORTA a pig, so Tamahome is a little worried about her.
"Oh, it's just Yui, I don't understand why one minute she's my best friend and all of the sudden she's so mean." Miaka lied.
"I know," said Tamahome, "these outer-alien world weirdo girls, why can't they just get along?" he thought out loud.
"HEY!!" Miaka shouted.
Tamahome receives a punch in the face (hehehe).
A candlemark later, Tamahome exclaims, "Oh, right here, it's PER-FECT!!"
They settle down and unwrap their packages. They are very content to be with each other while they can.
M: "Tamahome, I..I don't want to leave you. I don't want to lose you."
T: "And you won't, we'll be together, because we were meant to be. And out wedding won't have to be grand…"
M: "No, Tamahome, I don't think we can."
T: "WHAT?!? But why?"
M: "You don't understand, my family, my friends, I.. I can't just leave my whole world, I'll miss them so much. And the pizza and hamburgers and all the yummy stuff in my world. ;-)
T: "No, I do understand, I do. My family, I feel…" (when his family gets killed by Nakago)
M: (wails) "And it's all my fault!!"
T: "No, my mission is to protect Suzaku No Miko, to be with her, to never let anything happen to her. You did nothing…"
Tamahome is interrupted when Miaka sighed contentedly and let her head fall into his lap. She looked up at him, and he smiled and bent over for a passionate kiss.
"I wish we could just stay like this forever."
*****
Well, whad'ya think? Once again, PLEASE review!