Ok. Told myself I wouldn't do another elf poem and here we are! Thanks so much for the reviews I got last time on Waiting. The spacing was messed for a bit yes, and I couldn't fix it so here's hoping this one goes up easier!! I was writing a poem and the whole time I was writing it I was thinking about an elf. So this story's about an elf (any elf) that falls in love with a mortal and then the mortal dies. Wrote it like a normal poem and then tried to translate it to Tolkien speech.erg.I'm not to good at that. If you have any ideas on how to make it sound Tolkienish please tell me!! Once again thx!

There's no more tears to cry, my love

Nothing more to say

Just a hollow emptiness inside

That wont go away

I've wasted away so many nights

Wishing you were here

It feels like my heart's been ripped out

The true is what I fear

I feel so lonely without thee

I guess I should get used to it

Of nights so long and days forever

The pieces just don't fit

I'm lost, afraid and cold inside

Is this the fate doomed to be?

For my heart to be broken and unfixable

To be alone for all eternity