This is the first chapter of my new story, I am a terrible writer so all help, tips and critique is appreciated. If anyone has knowledge of this time than please contact me and tell me any fixes for mistakes I have made. Thanks a lot guys.
Disclaimer: Just like everyone else I don't own the show, I also think Nick shouldn't but at least they aren't totally demolishing the franchise
The guards were shifty around me, their heavy armor chinking together as they wondered why I of all people would be here. Finally the guards were given the signal to let me into the throne room, the large ornate doors slowly swung open before I stepped inside.
"What is the meaning of this?" the warlord asked, sounding slightly annoyed but with a hint of curiosity tinting his voice.
"I have come to give you a warning for the future." I said strongly without any sign of weakness, I continued "The war between the 4 kingdoms will not end well, it will end with the destruction of all 4 kingdoms. The only solution is for each of the 4 kingdoms to unite and become one under a common ruler!"
The warlord just stared at me like I was the biggest idiot in feudal japan. he started to talk but just laughed. when he saw I was not fazed he knew I was not telling a joke "I know we may not be winning this war right now but that doesn't mean we have lost, we wont die just like that. You -" but before the warlord could finish I interrupted him
"I have given you your warning and you have ignored like every other warlord. when this war destroys itself, each warlord will hate the others and this hate will carry on into the future causing upheaval and more problems. This hate will develop and run deep. far into the future 1 of your dependents and 1 of each of the other warlords descendants will meet and against all outside pressure will unite and fix the mistakes of this time. Be prepared for the end as your path has almost reached its end"
I finally finished my speech before walking out and off far into the distance back to my safe home, as safe as it can be at this time anyway. Soon these mistakes will be fixed, the master told himself, soon
And thus the first chapter comes to an end. Sorry about it being so short. As I said at the start please give me any help and tips for this. I wrote it as a start to try and get better at writing so don't expect too much.