A/N: This is my first attempt at writing a fanfic... Please review and give me feedback so I cant figure out what to do for the next few chapters.
I angrily slammed the apartment door, muffling the yells of frustration coming from the inside. I zig-zagged through the dull, twisting halls of the compound until I reach the top. The night was silent, except the sound of gravel crunching beneath my feet. A cool, autumn breeze sifted through the air, messing my hair that had once been perfectly straight, all around me. A lone tear slipped down my flushed cheek. He promised... thoughts of the fight filled my mind but I pushed them away, out of my head.
In the midst of my thoughts I had not realized how far I had come. I stood at the foot of the ferris wheel. A shiver crept down my spine, and I wrapped my black hoodie tighter around me. I took a deep breath and begun climbing the rungs. Step by step, foot by foot, I soon reached the top. With a sigh I slid onto the cold, silvery metal platform. Lost in my thoughts, I didn't realize the dark figure climbing the rungs until he was about halfway up. Panic rose in my chest, the figure got closer. It was Tobias. He took a seat next to me, clearly distraught, eyes puffy, nose sniffling. I look away and focus my attention on the contrast between the black sky and the specks of glittery stars dotting the sky. I could pick out a few constellations my mother taught me to identify when I was younger. Tobias is the first to break the icy tension between us.
"I'm so sorry Tris." his voice sounds gravelly, rough, and cracked slightly when he spoke my name. He moves closer and wraps his strong arm around my waist. I shift my gaze downwards and pause for a second, then turn to face him.
"You promised." I almost whisper. God, what is wrong with me?! Why am I this upset? Because you love him, the voice in the back of my head persists.
"I know, I know. You wouldn't believe me if I told you how much I regret it." He tenses up, and looks at me. Ugh, why does he have to be so hot?! "And I don't know how to make it up. But I know one thing for sure, I love you, if I ever lost you, if you ever leave me, I don't know what I would do. You are my everything, I love you more that anything, anything, in this whole world. I love you, Beatrice Prior." My eyes glisten with salty tears, they begin cascading down my cheeks and drop to the ground.
"I, I love you too." I say. "So, so much..." I start to sob, but not because I'm upset. "More then anything." Tobias fingers something in his pocket cautiously, a look I can't quite read spread across his perfectly chiseled features and deep blue eyes.
A/N: okay so this is my VERY FIRST ATTEMPT EVER to write a fanfic... any tips or comments will be VERY VERY appreciated! Thank you so much, maybe if I get a little feedback, the next chapter will be posted tomorrow night. XOXO