Helloooo everyone :D after my story "the black servant" I decided to do a new experiment while I have a little writers block at my other story :P

This is a Vampire!sherlock story and I know it's not original and the grammar is gruesome Dx but I hope you'll give it a try ;D and give me a review ^-^

Chapter 1 White World, red blood, Blue Lips

Snowflakes were dancing in the wind and let the world look like it was dipped in sugar. Time stood still. No sound could be heard as the creature flitted between the large trees. He was starving and searching for his next hunger was killing him! The last meal was too long ago and he know if he would wait just a little longer he would be a time bomb. His thoughts were clear but clouds could come fast. The brawl of a waterfall was letting the ground vibrate and the vampire was still heading forward the water in hope to find there some lost humans who wanted to see the beauty of the falling, ice cold water. Suddenly a scream brook the silence, not loud enough for humans ears but enough for his sharp senses, and the vampire sprinted toward the Brink. His bare feeds didn't really touched the snowy ground and the trees were swishing By. Just a second and he was there.

Senses on edge he scanned the area for any living signs and found two. Two male, middle aged, humans there in the water. There pulses were low and he know they would be dead in some minutes, even without his help. He doesn't hesitate and jump in the icy water. The coldness was no problem for him and so he swam towards the weaker one of them. He was older then the other with a beard and a tall figure. It seems like his brain was already dead and only his heard was still working. The vampire doesn't think about taking the man to the brink, he was too hungry, and so he took him right there in the ice blue water. His sharp teeth sinked in the slightly blue skin and eagerly he sucked the warm blood out of the mans man didn't even doesn't took long and after some seconds the vampire couldn't hear the beat of the mans heart anymore. He was dead. Slowly he let the corpse tribe away and looked for the other one.

Surprisingly he found him near the brink, ice crystals building in his dark brown hair and lips deep blue but alive. He wasn't conscious and the d-dump of his beating heart was low and silent but he was alive. Not as hungry as before he took the time to look in the brain of this man. He doesn't knew why but something on this human drew his attention and that didn't happened often. Slowly he passed the mind barrier, weak but surprisingly still there, and what he found would let his breathe stop if he still had some. This mind was Beautiful ! The ways of his thoughts, the thqings he saw... It was rarely the brain of a normal human and he couldn't take his eyes of the face of this guy. He couldn't let this man die. It would be a waste, and it would mean to lost the only thing which drew attention to him in nearly 200 years! He doesn't has long to decide and so the vampire did the only thing he could do at the moment. He sinked his teethes in the vein on the neck and gulped the warm liquid. Oh,It was delicious! He coudn't remember any meal which tasted so good in a very long time! His ears were focused on the slowly heart beat, so he could stop at the best moment. There it was! The d-dump was so tiny now that he couldn't really hear it. Fast he bite in his own wrist and let the blood flow in the mans mouth. red on white. Slowly the tongue licked the red liquid, tasting the flavor,getting faster, gulping down - realizing how good it tasted. The body beneath him cringed and he could hear the men wincing. Good. The poison was getting trough his system.

The vampire withdraw his wrist and stood up, carefully carrying the wincing body,he must get him to a save place where no one could find them, could disturb them. He doesn't know how long it would take the man to learn how to control his new self but it was clearly forbidden to do anything which could reveal their identity.A single murder was okay as long as no one would think of vampires when he would find the corp. the creature was running now, nearly flying threw the woods, the wight of the body was nothing for him. A single glance on the mans face let him know how his status was. He was now in the beginning of the change. His body was still wimping and he knew from self experience that it was hard. Your body was feeling like it was burning and later it would be feeling like it was covered in ice. Nothing, really nothing, he knew was as hard as the changing. The blood on the neck of the unknown man was beginning to ice and he noticed that his own wrist was healed. It was a beautiful sight. Brown hair, white skin and then the marvelous brown-red of the blood. Instinctively he licked his lips, remembering the awesome taste of his meal. Snowflakes were falling around them, making a tunnel, desperating them from the rest of the world. It was only him and his new friend in his arms and something let him feel like a great time was lying forward big, something new and somethig really, really fun.

Chapter 2 preview

R.I.P. to the world you used to see

Sherlock Holmes felt surprisingly marvelous. The last hours, or days - he had lost his feeling for time long ago - were the worst of his life. He had tried to open his eyes but it haven't worked,so he had screamed,screamed in agony, for help, for the pain to stop, for something. But nobody answered and the pain didn't stopped. And after a time his screams stopped to. Now the pain was fading away and he felt better, different. His thoughts were clear and didn't understand it, they felt different. Sharper. What has happened? There were pictures. He was on the balcony, with dr. Moriaty and then Johns look when he had realized what Sherlock was about to do. The fall. Snow whirling around Them, James screams when they were falling towards the water. Ice cold water, feeling like He were running in a wall. My brothers breathing apparatus helping me to survive coldness. He was getting weaker. His shoulder was hurting. Black roses forming in front of his eyes. He couldn't swim any more, his legs were so heavy. A last try to get to the brink out of the the water. And then nothing but blackness.

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