ohy aeh and some people say i ned a beta redder so if anyone wants to beta red please notiyf me!1
this chapter is from my arginal characters point of view. her name is natalie, btw and she jas brown hair and realy pretty icey bleu EYez. her mom tried to kilt her one day orwhatever becuz she was jallous of her daughter, but NMatalite's okay in case u were wqorried or anything. ^_^
i wal walkinmg on a gravel road but i had to be careful becuz i satill had my high pointy heels on from prom. i kicked a rock. "It's not fair!" i shouted becuz my stupid ugly best friend just one prom queen (shes not even pretty) my boyfriend just dumped me in frint of ther entire school. i wiped my eyes wit my hand but then it got all black from my eye make up. i was walking acrossed the road when suddenly i felt a lot of pain. i screamed and then i passed out on the gravel which was really unformatable becaus its like rocks (ur an idiot if u didn't know that ha ha).
i woke up chained to a bed in a really dARK ROom. my wrests were all red from the handcuffs and mybon es hrt fom the handcuffs too because i was chained at a really uncomrtoable angle. i started t cry but then i heard someone outsied of the ROOM! The door knob jaggled foriosuly...
read the next chaptor to find o ut who it is!