Hallo people! How you doing? I finally made enough time to fix this. I mean
come on, all Ash said was that she was worthless, and that her parents.
okay so it was kind of bad, well I fixed it. Ash is a bit out of character
in this chapter, I just thought he should get a lil violent, NO MORE OF
THAT! Well. I am pretty sure that all of the other chapters will stay the
same as before!
Disclaimer: [oops I almost forgot this ^_^'] I do not own Pokemon yadda yadda blah blah.
Now here are the ages:
Ash: don't know.
Misty: don't care.
Brock: SCARY!,
Pikachu:TOO HIGH TO COUNT!
(Hey I really do wonder how old Pikachu is. hmm. Ok enough thinking time, my head hurts, enjoy.!)
The Fight
It was a beautiful summer day, the sun shone brightly, with very few fluffy, white, cotton-like clouds; it was peaceful and quiet until.
"I AM A GOOD TRAINER WHY DON'T YOU ADMIT IT, IM BETTER THAN YOU?" Ash yelled.
"NO YOU ARENT ASH KETCHUM YOU ARE A BAD TRAINER. YOU SENT A CATERPIE OUT AGAINST A PIDGEOTTO AND YOU KNOW THAT BUG IS WEAK AGAINST FLYING!" Misty retorted.
"WELL ATLEAST I HAVE ALL THE BADGES OF KANTO AND THE ORANGE LEAGUES REMEMBER I RANKED 16 IN THE INDIGOE PLATUE AND I BEAT THE CHAMPION AT THE ORANGE LEAGUE! YOU ARE THE BAD, WORTHLESS, STUPID, TRAINER NOT ME!" Ash yelled.
Misty was hurt, but she wasn't about to show it, "YOU LITTLE JACKASS! WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM?"
"Oh, so now its okay for you to yell at me and call me names and when I say something in my defense, you get all offended! What goes around comes around Misty!" Ash yelled angrily.
"Oh fuck you Ash," Misty said.
"At least I have a parent and people who love me, now I know why your mom has never been there or why your sisters don't want you around!" said Ash a lot more calmly.
Misty held back tears as Brock gasped slightly. The rest of the day went by slowly, not one of them was talking or even thinking about making conversation.
"Hey Ash, man, can I talk to you?" Brock asked.
"Sure" Ash answered, and they walked off and out of earshot of Misty. "That was wrong, Ash, that was just wrong," Brock said, shaking his head sadly.
"What?" Ash said, clueless.
"What you said to her earlier, it really hurt her feelings," Brock said.
"About her being a bad trainer?"
"No! About her parents and no one loving her," Brock answered, becoming frustrated.
"She had it coming," Ash answered lazily, Brock sighed and they both walked back to their desired camping spot.
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Brock was preparing their dinner, and Ash was brushing Pikachu's fur, while Misty just sat quietly on a log with Togepi asleep in her arms. Ash looked up from brushing Pikachu's fur and looked at Misty who hadn't looked at him all that day.
"What's wrong Misty?" He questioned.
No answer.
"Hey Misty what's wrong" He asked this time louder.
Still no answer.
"MISTY WHATS WRONG?" Ash yelled angrily.
She just stared at him tear-filled eyes.
"Aren't you going to answer me?" Asked Ash.
"I really don't think she's going to talk to you after what you said Ash you, you really hurt her man." Brock said as he looked up from his cooking.
"What about her parents?" Ash said as he looked around.
"Yeah" Brock answered.
"Well okay then I'll tell you the truth, Misty" Ash said looking at Misty (Misty hopes went up a bit),"Not only does nobody love you, but when most guys look at you, they feel like taking a crap on you."
Misty, Brock, and Pikachu were all surprised by what he just said. But Misty was mostly hurt. She got up and walked to Ash she stood in front of him for a few seconds they looked into each other's eyes then. Misty slapped him, she slapped him with all her might, all the power she could muster she had hit Ash. Ash became angry, no one had ever hit him before, only his mom, and today he was just not in the mood, he stood up, grabbed Misty's wrists and pinned her to the nearest tree. Brock stood up from his cooking and ran to get Ash off of Misty. Ash and Misty's noses were almost touching, Misty closed her eyes, and tried to forget how familiar this all seemed.
"Now I know why your parent hated you so much, why she abused and abandoned you why they left you why they thought of you as the runt. That was the only thing you were good for, to punch and control. That is the only reason they stayed as long as they did!" Ash said angrily.
That surely did it, she cried, she cried softly trying to keep her control, memories of the past flashed into her head, memories of being hit and punched, and at one time almost killed. Misty kicked Ash on the knee and ran, ran as quickly as she could, she passed by Brock and Pikachu as she passed Togepi, she picked it up quickly and kept running. Ash stood there, he just stood there like the idiot he was. He stood there angrily until he heard a voice say:
"I cant believe you, you have no idea what a bad life she's had and you can see it in her actions that she has had a life without friends without help or someone to comfort her in her bad times that she has always been hurt emotionally and physically. I thought you were a nice caring person who would respect someone feelings, especially hers, but I guess I thought wrong didn't I? You are the total opposite of that and you just showed it. You proved your point Ash, but you also lost a good friend" Brock said.
"I-I'm sorry" Ash said trying to conceal his tears.
"{now look Ash, look at what you've done Misty and Togepi are.}" Pikachu could barely get the last words out as it began to sob,"{they're gone}"
"No. No. They can't be gone not forever they cant they just can't, what have I done?" Ash said, sinking to the ground.
"Come on Ash, we have to go find her, for all we know she could go running off a cliff!" Brock said, he and Pikachu help stand Ash up, and they began running.
They ran for about an hour, not knowing in which direction to go, but just when they were about to give up, they heard wailing not to far from there spot, Pikachu ran toward it, making Ash and Brock follow. And there, in the middle of the path, was a crying Togepi and 5 other Pokeballs.
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Okay, hopefully, this is better that my other chapter. I worked on it long and hard. Please Read and Review. I will probably make time to fix the other chapters as well.
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P.S: To Crystal: NO MATTER WHAT YOU SAY! MY RATS *ARE* ADORABLE! EVEN IF THEY HAVE NO HAIR! AND IF THEIR EYES ARE CLOSED! IF YOU INSULT THEM ONE MORE TIME, YOU CURLY HAIRED HEAD WILL BE SITTING NEXT TO ARIEL'S ON A PLATTER! FOR THEM TO EAT! He he he. you weren't suppose to read that. wait a sec I could just erase it.
Disclaimer: [oops I almost forgot this ^_^'] I do not own Pokemon yadda yadda blah blah.
Now here are the ages:
Ash: don't know.
Misty: don't care.
Brock: SCARY!,
Pikachu:TOO HIGH TO COUNT!
(Hey I really do wonder how old Pikachu is. hmm. Ok enough thinking time, my head hurts, enjoy.!)
The Fight
It was a beautiful summer day, the sun shone brightly, with very few fluffy, white, cotton-like clouds; it was peaceful and quiet until.
"I AM A GOOD TRAINER WHY DON'T YOU ADMIT IT, IM BETTER THAN YOU?" Ash yelled.
"NO YOU ARENT ASH KETCHUM YOU ARE A BAD TRAINER. YOU SENT A CATERPIE OUT AGAINST A PIDGEOTTO AND YOU KNOW THAT BUG IS WEAK AGAINST FLYING!" Misty retorted.
"WELL ATLEAST I HAVE ALL THE BADGES OF KANTO AND THE ORANGE LEAGUES REMEMBER I RANKED 16 IN THE INDIGOE PLATUE AND I BEAT THE CHAMPION AT THE ORANGE LEAGUE! YOU ARE THE BAD, WORTHLESS, STUPID, TRAINER NOT ME!" Ash yelled.
Misty was hurt, but she wasn't about to show it, "YOU LITTLE JACKASS! WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM?"
"Oh, so now its okay for you to yell at me and call me names and when I say something in my defense, you get all offended! What goes around comes around Misty!" Ash yelled angrily.
"Oh fuck you Ash," Misty said.
"At least I have a parent and people who love me, now I know why your mom has never been there or why your sisters don't want you around!" said Ash a lot more calmly.
Misty held back tears as Brock gasped slightly. The rest of the day went by slowly, not one of them was talking or even thinking about making conversation.
"Hey Ash, man, can I talk to you?" Brock asked.
"Sure" Ash answered, and they walked off and out of earshot of Misty. "That was wrong, Ash, that was just wrong," Brock said, shaking his head sadly.
"What?" Ash said, clueless.
"What you said to her earlier, it really hurt her feelings," Brock said.
"About her being a bad trainer?"
"No! About her parents and no one loving her," Brock answered, becoming frustrated.
"She had it coming," Ash answered lazily, Brock sighed and they both walked back to their desired camping spot.
*~*~*~**~**~**~**
Brock was preparing their dinner, and Ash was brushing Pikachu's fur, while Misty just sat quietly on a log with Togepi asleep in her arms. Ash looked up from brushing Pikachu's fur and looked at Misty who hadn't looked at him all that day.
"What's wrong Misty?" He questioned.
No answer.
"Hey Misty what's wrong" He asked this time louder.
Still no answer.
"MISTY WHATS WRONG?" Ash yelled angrily.
She just stared at him tear-filled eyes.
"Aren't you going to answer me?" Asked Ash.
"I really don't think she's going to talk to you after what you said Ash you, you really hurt her man." Brock said as he looked up from his cooking.
"What about her parents?" Ash said as he looked around.
"Yeah" Brock answered.
"Well okay then I'll tell you the truth, Misty" Ash said looking at Misty (Misty hopes went up a bit),"Not only does nobody love you, but when most guys look at you, they feel like taking a crap on you."
Misty, Brock, and Pikachu were all surprised by what he just said. But Misty was mostly hurt. She got up and walked to Ash she stood in front of him for a few seconds they looked into each other's eyes then. Misty slapped him, she slapped him with all her might, all the power she could muster she had hit Ash. Ash became angry, no one had ever hit him before, only his mom, and today he was just not in the mood, he stood up, grabbed Misty's wrists and pinned her to the nearest tree. Brock stood up from his cooking and ran to get Ash off of Misty. Ash and Misty's noses were almost touching, Misty closed her eyes, and tried to forget how familiar this all seemed.
"Now I know why your parent hated you so much, why she abused and abandoned you why they left you why they thought of you as the runt. That was the only thing you were good for, to punch and control. That is the only reason they stayed as long as they did!" Ash said angrily.
That surely did it, she cried, she cried softly trying to keep her control, memories of the past flashed into her head, memories of being hit and punched, and at one time almost killed. Misty kicked Ash on the knee and ran, ran as quickly as she could, she passed by Brock and Pikachu as she passed Togepi, she picked it up quickly and kept running. Ash stood there, he just stood there like the idiot he was. He stood there angrily until he heard a voice say:
"I cant believe you, you have no idea what a bad life she's had and you can see it in her actions that she has had a life without friends without help or someone to comfort her in her bad times that she has always been hurt emotionally and physically. I thought you were a nice caring person who would respect someone feelings, especially hers, but I guess I thought wrong didn't I? You are the total opposite of that and you just showed it. You proved your point Ash, but you also lost a good friend" Brock said.
"I-I'm sorry" Ash said trying to conceal his tears.
"{now look Ash, look at what you've done Misty and Togepi are.}" Pikachu could barely get the last words out as it began to sob,"{they're gone}"
"No. No. They can't be gone not forever they cant they just can't, what have I done?" Ash said, sinking to the ground.
"Come on Ash, we have to go find her, for all we know she could go running off a cliff!" Brock said, he and Pikachu help stand Ash up, and they began running.
They ran for about an hour, not knowing in which direction to go, but just when they were about to give up, they heard wailing not to far from there spot, Pikachu ran toward it, making Ash and Brock follow. And there, in the middle of the path, was a crying Togepi and 5 other Pokeballs.
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Okay, hopefully, this is better that my other chapter. I worked on it long and hard. Please Read and Review. I will probably make time to fix the other chapters as well.
*~£f£~*
P.S: To Crystal: NO MATTER WHAT YOU SAY! MY RATS *ARE* ADORABLE! EVEN IF THEY HAVE NO HAIR! AND IF THEIR EYES ARE CLOSED! IF YOU INSULT THEM ONE MORE TIME, YOU CURLY HAIRED HEAD WILL BE SITTING NEXT TO ARIEL'S ON A PLATTER! FOR THEM TO EAT! He he he. you weren't suppose to read that. wait a sec I could just erase it.