Hi guys! I am totally new to writing fanfictions so I apologise if I suck. I have read so many fanfictions that my brain is bursting with ideas. I just feel like I should try to write them and hopefully you like them. I never understand why people ask for reviews but I now know why. I want to know if you like, dislike or hate it totally. I am definitely open to criticism, advice or even ideas. I never really excelled at creative writing at school but if I really tried I could write and awesome story. And I guess this is creative as it will never end up on the show, how sad as it is.

If I don't get a great grip of the characters and their personalities, I only hope I can work it out as the story progresses. That is, if you want more. I think Maura will be the hardest to write as she talks a lot of science mumbo jumbo. I guess I should stop my ramblings and present you with a story from a crazed mind.

Note I obviously don't own any characters because if I did they would so be getting it on!

Enjoy!

Tommy

"Tommy." The venom which laced the name could almost kill you. The strong detective sat on her sofa, in front of the game, cradling a beer. She was however meant to be with the gorgeous ME who actually phoned to cancel on her to help Tommy find an apartment. And here she was sitting in front of a recording of the game from a couple of weeks ago on a beautiful sunny Saturday.

She had looked forward to this day all week, especially after the stressful case. They were always worst when they involved children. She didn't really want to think of it. She just wanted to spend the day with her best friend. Go for a run, lunch, dinner, movie and just spend time with her. To say the least, Jane was pissed. In fact furious because her stupid little brother couldn't afford an apartment and he knew it, she knew it. Everybody fucking knew it, except Maura.

Maura wasn't stupid, she was a genius. Maura knew Tommy was attracted to he and Jane could remember something Maura had said years ago. People are attracted to people who are attracted to them. Does that mean Maura is attracted to Tommy? Jane was attracted to Maura, yet Maura isn't attracted to her. Not to mention Tommy was no good for her. Maura deserved the best, someone who understands her, gets her quirks, tell her to stop when she is googlemouthing, be there when she is scared. She deserves someone like Jane.

Jane was contemplating whether she should phone Maura, ask her if she wants to have dinner but no doubt she is out there already fucking Tommy. At that thought Jane threw her bottle. As it smashed against the wooden floor, Jane winced. Great, only Maura could get Jane to lose control. As Jane bent down to pick up the broken shards of glass she heard her apartment door open which caused her to jump and a small bit or glass got lodged in her finger.

"Fuck." Jane said furiously, observing the blood pouring out of her finger.

"Jane, is everything okay. I was about to knock when I heard a smash." Jane looked up and for a moment all her anger vanished at the sight or the blond doctor. She had a slight frown on her face as she looked at the floor.

Just as fast as it vanished it came back as she thought about Maura cancelling on her again to be with her little brother.

"Just dropped my beer Maura." Jane said as neutrally as possible.

"Oh Jane your bleeding." Maura walked up quickly to Jane lifting her finger, examining it. "You have glass in it. I'll go get tweezers to pull it out." As Maura turned, Jane caught her arm pulling her back.

"I'm well aware there is glass in my finger, it isn't something that goes unnoticed. What are you doing here, shouldn't you be with Tommy." Jane snapped back at Maura. She knew she shouldn't take her anger out on Maura but the way she was concerned and caring wasn't something she needed right now. She also knew she was acting childish, but love makes you do crazy stuff.

Maura looked down, slightly hurt by the way Jane was talking to her. "I came to talk to you but if you don't want me here I can leave. Make sure you take the glass out and put on a plaster so it won't get infected." Jane felt horrible, she hates seeing Maura sad or hurt.

Again as Maura turned to leave Jane caught her arm. "Maur, I'm sorry, I a little hungry and you know how I get when I'm hungry. What do you want to talk about?"

Maura smiled at Jane, the smile that melts her heart everytime she sees it. "First let me take out the glass." Maura walked to the bathroom to retrieve the tweezers and plasters and returned to the sofa and sat down, facing Jane. She gently took my hand and further examined it for the piece of glass.

"So what's up?"

Maura looked at Jane, confusion written on her face, then she looked up. "Um, the ceiling?"

Jane laughed, "I didn't mean literally, what is it you want to talk about?" It was the small things like that which made Jane love Maura just that bit extra.

"Oh. Well when I was out with Tommy, we stopped for lunch. He then asked me out on a date. I thought I should tell you because he is your brother."

Jane's could have sworn she felt her heart break a little and flinched when she heard that Tommy asked Maura out. As she flinched it pulled her finger away from the tweezers, poking and pulling at the glass in her finger and so ripped the glass straight out, her finger started to turn red from the amount of blood coming from it. Maura quickly wrapped it in a plaster and wiped the rest of the blood from her finger.

Jane sat staring straight through Maura, not knowing what to say. "Jane?" Maura asked, a concerned look on her face.

"Do you, ah, do you want to go out with him?" Jane asked her voice failing her tough detective look.

"I, he is a great guy but I-"

Before Maura could finish it Jane lost it. "You know what Maura, do whatever the fuck you like, why would I care." Jane got up and started to walk out of the room.

"Jane I-"

Again Maura was cut off by Jane, her voice travelling down the hall. "I think you should leave Maura." To emphasize her point she slammed the bedroom door.

Maura looked down as a silent tear fell. Only Jane could make her cry. She gathered her bag and walked to the front door. But before she left she scribbled on a piece of paper on the counter in the kitchen. Sorry-M xx. She left the note and walked out the door as more tears streamed down her face.

So this is the first chapter, I hope you like it. Please review and if it is shit please let me know and I will cut my losses and quit. Thanks for reading and like I said, I would appreciate a review. Happy readings people.