This is my stab at poetry. Well, not exactly my stab; I have a co-author, a really good one. She's 0o0SchoolDaze0o0, formerly known as 0o0Summerlove0o0. She helped me with this poem, and I thank her deeply. U must read her fics; they're formidable. And I really mean this. I'm serious. I'm not saying this just cuz she made me her advisor; I'm saying this cuz I mean it. Well, I hope u enjoy our poetry, plz review; we wanna no if this is good.
A Poem on Fire
Oh, fire
You bring such desire
Volunteers everywhere want to know
Why you have such a luminous glow
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Some volunteers have scientific guesses
While others think of nonsense messes
Everyone has a thought
And it cannot be bought
The thought I am talking about
Is that volunteers everywhere want to know
Why you have such a wondrous glow
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Arsonists like Olaf think they have the solution
By making you glow, they cause pollution
And no volunteer knows why
They like to see you up in the sky
And also no volunteer knows
Why you have such a superb glow
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But I, Lemony Snicket, believe I know the solution
Your glow, it's just a delusion
A delusion to hide your formidable light
All vivid, flamboyant, and bright
So now, I'm sure I know
Why you, fire, have such a mysterious glow
Fin
Was it enjoyable? Boring? Too short? Too long? R&R and tell us! Oh, and visualpurple, and your sis, could u plz review and tell us if this is good? Your sis, blueacorn, is a great poetry writer, and we want to know if this is good. And one more thing to everyone, we might continue if we get at least 5 reviews or more, so R&R!
TelepathicPrincess and 0o0SchoolDaze0o0
