I do not own Avatar; none of the characters (except for Karena and others) are mine.
This is only a test chapter; I just want to see how people review it before I continue adding chapters.
Chapter One: The boats the heat, the flame.
Normal P.o.v
As night drew close on the navy yard, the fleet tied up peacefully, a shadow moved in the distance. As a guard passed by, he thought he saw a figure in the corner of his eye, but he quickly dismissed the thought. "Just a bird" he thought. Little did he know, he had just made an unforgiving mistake.
Karena P.o.v
"To close" I thought, as the guard passed by. Damn , normally I wasn't this sloppy. As I moved through the corridors of the navy ship, a man walked by. A man reading a schematics map. "Perfect" , I thought. By quickly knocking him out, taking the map and anything I dubbed important, I put him in a nearby closet. I did feel a little bit sorry for him, but not sorry enough because I knew more just like him were coming. And I was right. Two more men walked by as I was jumping into an air duct. Without wasting any more time, I made my way into the boiler room, putting my little surprise into the heat. Trying to shoot off the boat like a bat outta hell, I had to dodge more guards and quickly got to the cliff looking over the shipyard. Since I knew there were still men on the boats , I had to throw a small bomb to get the rest of them off . This was crazy. Why were there no people on the first few boats, but on this one there had to be an armada? Shaking my head, I stamped my foot.
Normal P.o.v
A wave of sound crashed through the cliff, and rippled the water. The gentle rocking of the boats was more than enough to activate the sonic heat bombs.
And then…BOOM.
End Chapter One.