Hello! This is my first story and i am pretty nervous. If I have any mistakes I would you to correct me if you want. Also I would really aprreciate if you tell me your opinion about it.
"Dan, for the love of God, get down here already!"
"Dan, for the love of God, get down here already! Seriously, Amy, which normal person wants to go to school?"
It was the first day of school, something that Amy loved. And Dan hated. But this year he had one more reason to hate it.
"C'mon! It's going to be great! We will be at the same school! You'll finally get to go at middle school!" Amy said cheerfully.
Dan made a disgusted face and then told to Amy; "That's another reason why I don't want to go to school."
Amy wanted to say something but she was cut off by a loud noise coming from the kitchen. They both hurried in there just to find that there was nothing to worry about.
It was Nelly, Amy and Dan's new babysitter. They still hadn't got used to her. She was wearing her earphones, put the music in the highest level and 'singing' a punk song.
It was something that she was doing all the time. And that's why Dan liked her. She couldn't hear him planning pranks on the neighbors. And she couldn't hear them screaming and ringing the door's bell to complain, once again, about Dan and his 'stupid', as they called them, pranks.
…That and because she was making the best pan cakes Amy and Dan had ever eaten. Yeah, cooking was her second hobby.
What was the third? As every woman who respect herself; men. If she was busy listening to music, cooking or talking to man and you tried to interrupt her, it was most likely to kill you.
Nellie unplugged her earphones and told to Amy and Dan; "Haven't you still want to school?"
"Well, duh!" Dan hurried to reply.
Amy got pale just when Dan said that. She knew her brother was a trouble to her but Nellie wasn't like their other babysitters. She was younger and could get really angry at every little thing.
Nellie changed fifty colors before she answered to Dan.
"Listen to my kiddo; I don't know how you were talking to your other babysitters and I don't care, but to me you're going to talk with respect!"
"Yeah, sure whatever!" Dan said without seem to care. "…What are you cooking now?" said smelling well the kitchen. He tried to reach the place where Nellie had the food. On the table.
He could have reached it if Nellie hadn't cut his way.
'You'll find out at lunch. If you're here and not on detention cause you were late at the first day of school!" Nellie said a bit cruelly.
'Oh My God! Nellie's right! We are late. Dan lets go NOW!" Amy said in a hurry.
"But…" Dan tried to complain but didn't make it. Amy had taken his hand and lead him out of the house already heading to school.
So... how was that? I hoped you liked it. Review and tell me what you though.
~see ya,
Lily
