Chapter 1: Saved by a crimson headed beauty

Jamal Pov

"Jamal would you please die for me?"

Now you might wonder how I got in this situation, hold your hat cause its quite a bit…

It started right after I went on a date with a hot girl… Now before I tell you how this happened I'll tell you a bit about myself. I'm a 6'0, I weigh 186, I'm tan, and I have wild crazy hair that is spiked up in many different directions (AN: Gohan's hair before he fought cell) and no I'm not fat, I think I'm pretty muscular and I hear it a lot too. I have onyx eyes that can stare into your soul… not really but I like to think that.

I'm an adopted child technically, my mom told me she and my dad found me in a basket beside a tree when they used to live in the mountains and decided to pick me up and take me home. When I got home I terrified the kids in the neighborhood from the start of my time in New York. Nobody wanted to be my friend, and all the bullies were scared of me because I beat them all up. My parents had trouble handling me also, they said I was a pain to wash, and take care of and feed.

That all changed one day when I was 6 in 1st grade. I was fighting a group of kids I had been bullying for the whole year, they were all on the ground beat up and one came behind me while I was fighting the last one and bashed me in the head with a rock. I fell to the ground with a gash in my head. My mother said ever since that fight I've been an easy kid to Handel and a true warrior.

My father was a strong man who was very well educated in martial arts, he thought me kame style or turtle hermit fighting style. He said he learned it from a perverted old man. He thought me how to use my abnormal strength for good and how to maximize my fighting strength and output. I've always been the best at fighting ever since I was young, no matter what they do I'm always stronger than everyone else. I've actually never lost a fight!

My freshman year of high school was when my father was killed by some man by the Toinshinsman. He was slaughtering people for money... basically an assassin. My father heard of him and his wrong doings, my father then challenged him to a fight to the death. I asked him if I could go but he said, "no my son this is my fight." I think if I fought with him he would've survived, and we wouldn't of had to move to Kuoh town. After the man killed my my mothers said this was enough and we moved to somewhere more peaceful than New York which is where I reside now, Kuoh town.

Oh, almost forgot to say my name… Jamal Swift is the name I was given when I was found by the tree.

Now back to the die for me situation. This very pretty girl asked me on a date and I really didn't want to go but I hate being mean to nice girls like I thought she was, so I said yes. So, we went of this fun date I planned for 2 hours, but right before I went to go see her I got this paper that had a symbol that looked like a red circle with a whole bunch of other lines around it. Since I was going to be late I stuffed it in my pocket and ran off… don't want to be late right? I made it there on time and our date started around 3 o'clock.

So, as we were on this date I kept getting this feeling that some Romeo and Juliet tragedy was going to happen. So, we were walking to the fountain in a very pretty park right after we went to a movie. She stopped right in front of it and turned around and looked at me with a conflicted look in her eyes, she said "hey Jamal can I ask you a question?". I said "Oh sure Yumma" that's her name Yumma, can't seem to remember her last name… wouldn't matter cause this next thing she says makes me want to forget her all together.

She got an evil smirk on her face and said slow "would you die for me Jamal?" not going to lie I thought she meant like in a lovely girlfriend way or something. I looked at her like she was crazy and said "uh… please repeat that Yumma" she then said in an evil devil sounding voice "would you please die for me?". She then started to transform her whole body in some bright light and once it died down I see her in a nasty looking thing that left 0 to the imagination. I smirked and said confidently "I thought we could at least have some more dates before we got intimate, but if you want to go now I'm down!"

She laughed and said, "I actually liked our date Jamal, to bad it's the last one we will have!" damn I got my 6th girlfriend to break up with me in less than 3 days I guess this is a new record! She then pulled out some jet-black wings and formed some purple spear and said, "I'm sorry it had to end this way Jamal… but don't blame yourself, blame god who gave you the sacred gear and super human strength." She wasn't wrong, I did have some insane strength, but this sacred gear thing is news to me!

She threw the spear at me, I dodged and started sprinting towards her. Once I got close I grabbed my sweatshirt and ripped it off then threw it right at her! Bingo she had her vision blocked for a split second, so I rammed my fist into her gut she then rocketed through the air and hit some weird barrier… she must have made that so I can't run, clever girl.

She hit the ground really hard and got up with scratches all over her body, she was leaking killing intent all around the barrier, so I had to show her I'm not afraid of her witch magic and I said this in a bad ass way " If you think you are going to just kill me your dead wrong, I'm going pummel you, you damn witch!" Freaking nailed it man!

She must've took offense to that, because she suddenly ran to me and tried to jab me with that purple spear again. So, while I was dodging I see an opening and deck her in the nose, then kick her in the stomach then she flys back into the fountain. I guess all that extra training paid off because she looked almost dead… I'm not a killer so I will let her live out of mercy. I walk over to her and say in a cocky manner "I'll leave you alive for now witch but if you try that again you will die." She looks at me and smiles… weird why is she smi- GAH.

I then feel something stab me from behind, I feel an insane amount of pain rush through me and I hit the ground bleeding out. I hear Yumma say "Thanks millet I was at deaths door. Let's leave this shithole quick!" and they fly away leaving me dying on the ground… damn this is really the end of my life. I start to think of my years of life, and how much I want to hug my mom again. I start to think of my 2 main goals, to protect my mom, and to get revenge for me father… now that I'm going to die I can't achieve these goals, what a freaking waste of hard work.

I then remember the paper I had shoved up in my pocket, right as I thought of it, it started to glow bright red… no crimson. Suddenly I see the most beautiful woman in Kuoh Academy, Rias freaking Gremory. She sadly says "oh look what they did to you… sneak attack right after you had beaten the fallen. Luckily Your ambition to live has summoned me to you. Be thankful for your new life, as I am now your master Jamal swift." Freaking great, dad told me never to be a slave to anyone and now I'm a slave, what are my odds dude.

Redid chapter 1, I think it's wayyyyy better than before. Also let me tell y'all something, I don't give a single f* about the rude stuff y'all gotta say so ain't no reason to post it. Also if you don't like it ya don't have to read soooo. But if you give me some good advice I'll definitely take it and run and see if I can fix my story with it. And if you post a comment I'll reply to you saying what I think about what you said. So be smart with your words! Oh and this isn't a Insert, Jamal isn't me or based of me. Totally different name and everything else. He's a Saiyan warrior with insane strength and determination to protect his mom and get revenge for his dad! And thanks for the likes and follows you guys, I'll definitely keep up the story as long as I have my creativity! Till next time y'all!