MY first fanfic, any advide? I hope you reaaly like it, a lot of drama. :)

A POV

It had been a year since the Battle of Manhattan and it was time to go to camp, to see percy, but I didn't mention that part to my dad as he dropped me off. I went to my cabin after reciving a lot of "hi you must be Annabeth one of the vetarans from the Battle", and unpacked my stuff. I fell asleep in the middle of unpacking.

I looked my best around in the dark room. I heard noises coming from an area outside of what i thought was the door.

"Do you think he'll make it out alive?", I heard a scratchy but concered voice say. I knew this voice as Hermes.

A much clearer voice, with the same concered sound say " Luke will definitelly make it out alive, he didnt die, he was barely even hurt, the achilles curse is gone though". I recognized this voice as Apollo.

I started to interpret this, did they mean my Luke as in my hearty, protective brother Luke?

I heard a knock on the door and sat bolt right up, and in the process hit my head on the bed above me. Percy entered the room and brought me to dinner. I may have not seemed like my usaul self, while thinking of my dream because Percy asked me if I was ok? I said I was fine but I knew he didnt belive me and gave me that puppy dog face that I couldnt resist so i told him the real reason.

" I had a creepy dream about Luke still being alive, I just need to talk to Chiron about it though". I could tell he was fumed because he left me alone as soon as we got to the pavilion, not like how he used to make sure I was seated and had my food.

P POV

As I arrived to camp I thought, another year, no war, and Annabeth. I went to unpack. After upacking I went to the dinner pavilion and had lunch. It wwas great as always. I battled a bit in the sword arean. I took a shower and got ready. I went to Annabeths cabin and knocked on the door. As i entered she was lying in bed, then all of the sudden shot straihgt up. I was going to bring her to the dinner pavilion. She had that adorable "Im trying really hard but I really really dont get this" look on her face. I asked her, she didnt tell me so i gave her the puppy dag face that worked all the told me " I had a creepy dream about Luke still being alive, I just need to talk to Chiron about it though". I was furious! I coulnt believe that after all we've been through, after all he betrayed us, I mean sure he defeated Kronos but she still had dreams about the twerp, while we were in a relationship! As soon as we got to the paviilion i left her. That'll help teach her a lesson not to dream about olther boys when shes dating me. CURSE YOU APHRODITE, WHY MAKE MY LIFE SO TERRIBLE IN A RELATIONSHIP, YOU ALWAYS DO THIS TO ME! I thought. {aphorotite children started to glare at me.}

I hope you liked it I tried my best and its my first fanfic! Please review and nicely,{youll no why if u read my profile}. :)