So I decided to make a ''my immortal'' commentary.
Enjoy my pain.
Chapter 1.
AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) oh god 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. She didn't do a very good job U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX! I actually agreed with the last sentence.
Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way that's a very long name and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) you were born with hair? poor you! with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears am I suppose to care? and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!). nooooo! i'm stuck here! I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. Incest alert I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. You must be one of those 'Cullen' creatures I have pale white skin. *snape voice* obviously I'm also a witch, *cough*halfblood*cough* and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England Hogwarts is in Scotland where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) I thought you were a prep, my bad! and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing I don't care a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, aren't you already pale enough? black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining I like rain :D so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them. Such a lovely girl!
"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy! Yes! I bet he's gonna tease her about being a halfblood!
"What's up Draco?" I asked.
"Nothing." he said shyly. Wait,what?! B-BUT SHE'S A HALFBLOOD! AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN 'SHYLY'?! DRACO'S NOT SHY!
But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away. .ever!
AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz! *facepalms*
Dude,like...WTF did i just read