Traces

I exhale on the cold glass a breathy prayer

Through frost I etch your eyes sublime

With these gloved fingers of mine

I allow your submissive kiss

And out of mercy paint a smile on the window.

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As I walk through the hall

Ghosts emerge unbidden as my quickened pulse

They weave a waltz around us

Pulling us close

I recall your confusion

Like the first green in spring.

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You were so cruel

Accepting my hand

Without understanding the dance

Leaning against me

But not hearing my heart.

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The wooden steps gasp and groan,

Uplifting the weight of two

Up to the arch of my chambers

Where the silence amplifies

And appreciates our sighs.

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And then I remember

I wake up

Only to wonder when I will revive

No power, no power, no power

Over me…over you.

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You are whisper

Only a whisper in the dark

The wind howls as the rain beats against your face

And through the window

Sublime eyes are crying.

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Orientalbunny: Hi, I know I should be working on my story but I have a little writer's block and thought I would have a bit of poetic fun. I only like the first and last stanza of my poem but I figure, I got to start somewhere. Reviews will help me fine tune this poem so don't hold back. Oh, and the lines seperating the stanzas are there because for some reason, even though I space them out before uploading, for some reason all the lines of my poem are not spaced out anymore, so out of frustration, I had to resort to cheating. Have a good one!