Hello everybody
This is chapter two
Ps. I am not a troll I just don't write we'll so please do not flame me, I come from another
:( ill try harder, but thank you Onyx and Moonbeam, you two are veru helpful
:)
Pretty paw walk around the camp, she went to hunt and she already caut three prey, she was hungry so she ate a mouse and went to train.
Her mentor smiled to her.
"Pretty paw, you are amazing are you ready to becccoe a warrior
Prettyp screamed and said
"Yes!,"
S they go to the camp and the leader sya,
"Pretty paw do you promise to be loyal to your clan forever?"
Prettypaw was serious for a while, then she said, yes, I am
Then the clan cheered because they like her a lot, and she became pretty tail. Later she go sleep, and when she was slepping she didn't hear the urguyment outside the den.
"But I love her and to y do not!"
"But I love her too
"Okay, then we will fight and we will see who is stringer!"
E WTO toms fight, their blood splattered pretty paw and she wake up, and she screamed,
"NO, WHAT ARE YOU DOIN?"
The two toms fall to the ground, and one of them (Tailstreak) look to her and sa
"Preettypaw, I love you! Can you be my mate?"
Pretty frown, she also liked the leader and Frogleg, too! But she knew in. Her heart whose liked, so she said,
Sorry but I like the leader...
The two toms cried, but e walk away and prettytail smiled.
Prettytail smelled something coming from away and she screamed,
Oh no!" They are coming to attack!
"ATTACK"
A cry came from high abuve and she screamed,
Might! Everyone fight!"
She jumpnontoa. White tom and she scratch him, he died, and a she-cat, maybe his mate, came and scratch prettytail's ears, but prettytail scratch her and run away. Suddenly she fall over a tail and a tom jump in her she scared but she fight him and won. She fainted.
Oh no, what will happen? Please review! :))