My first fanfic and it's a few haiku's put together to make a short poem. It's about how sakura feels about Sasuke. At first it dosen't say directly that it's about Sakura and Sasuke, but I wrote it in class today and thought, 'This is like Sakura and Sasuke' So it probably sucks. Constructive critism helps! NO FLAMES!
Sakura's POV
He is standing there.
I know it will never be..
Heart of freezing ice.
Why am I still here?
He's staring with those dark eyes.
Coldest eyes ever.
I know love will die...
Until that day... I will love...
My sad, aching heart.
Now I'm in heaven.
Love never really does die...
Why am I like this?...
Sasuke...
So it sucked right? XD R&R PLZ