I am new to this writting a short story thing and would like to know what you guys think before

I go into more depth with my writting.

This is Bella's pov and it's just going to get better I hope lol

I am open to suggestions

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Chapter 1

"Okay Alice let me call you right back , I am trying to find my mail key." "Okay , and don't forget about tom morrow we have your

dress fitting at ten ." she said excitedly and hung up before I could try and worm my way out of it .Digging through my purse for my mail key I glanced at a man I thought I knew ."Edward , wow it's been so long!" I said hugging him, it's been three years since we last saw each other at our high school prom.

"Bella !" he said returning my hug "you have not changed a bit. Do you still live in Forks?"

"No I moved to California for school I am just here visiting Charlie ." Should I tell him about my recent engagement ?

"what about you ?" I asked trying so desperately to hide the ring on my finger.

He looked at me with his signature smile that would make anyone melt "truthfully?" he asked , I smiled at him "what?" i asked laughing he has never been one to not say what was on his mind .

"well , I uh..." he said looking at his feet " Bella , I was here in hopes of seeing you , Alice said you were in Port Angles for your wedding ." my smile dropped from my face I should of known that she would tell him, it was just a matter of time .

"Uh yeah ." my god I didnt want him to know , him of all people . Note to self beat up Alice!

I always wished that Edward liked me , hell I prayed for it but since I was best friends with his twin sister Alice I never acted on it . "Bella!" I heard a very low stern voice calling me , great here comes the man I will be marrying .

World get ready to meet the one and only Jacob Black.

I turned to see Jake walking up to Edward and I, and have never seen him so mad. "hey , I thought that you were having your

bachelor party tonight." I asked turning to look at Edward "THIS IS WHO YOUR MARRYING !" Edward hissed

"Look pal , she chose the better man !" "I'll show you a better man !" Edward hissed . Great ...

"hey hey hey !" i said stepping in the middle of the soon to be fight. "Jake you need to go to your party, you don't want to upset your soon to be father in law do you ?" I asked looking at him, my dad Charlie Swan was Jake's boss at the fire station in Forks. "Babe , I got this ." "okay Bells but promise me he won't be at the wedding, I don't want to see you get worked up the doctor said that it's not good for the baby. " SHIT why did he say that? Man now I am done for ...

"Baby?" Edward's voice so low. "okay I promise." kissing Jake as he walked out the front door of our hotel lobby.

"Bella , look at me !" he said sternly "Edward please." I was trying to hold back the tears now , why did I have to make that

mistake?

"Bella how far along are you?" he asked . I turned to see the normally strong Edward look like he was going to cry.
" 3 months" "are you fucking kidding me Bells . Is this baby mine? Now I know why Alice told me to come quickly."

Okay people please review , I know that it was short but I promise I will go more into it.

Thank you