HELLO AND WELCOME TO MY OC STORY! Woah sorry for the capitals there I'm so excited to finally start writing. I know this is probably not up t o par with all this other great stories but I'm trying here. So any and all advice you have for me please feel free to give it to me, seriously i need it you should be able to tell I'm not experienced. Well i hope you enjoy my story ill try to keep writing and give you the next chapter tomorrow if I can. Ok you can actually read now... well i guess you technically have been reading but... stop reading this bold read the actual story.

Ao was taking his afternoon stroll down the streets of vale with a smile on his face, unbeknownst to all those he walked with the 17 year old had just been accepted to the most prestigious battle school in all of remnant. "Beacon, that's where I'm going, I get to go there in only a week wooo!" he sung cheerfully as he walked into his favorite dust shop. He grabbed a hand full of red dust vials and walked up to the clerk.

" I noticed you are running low on dust, when will you restock?"

he asked with a slight smile still on his face. The clerk just slowly pointed to a paper under the counter covering up some of the less desirable crystals.

All dust supplies get refilled the second Wednesday of every month.

Ao chuckled lightly as he gave the clerk the necessary lien.

"Have fun restocking"

as Ao walked out the clerk smiled and waved lightly to his favorite customer. As Ao started his trek back to his apartment he got caught up in his reflection in the window of a weaponry store. Ao looked at himself for awhile, he always thought of himself as moderate looking he had pitch black hair his eyes were a deep shade of emerald the rest of his face was normal no acne a blessing from god, a chin that his mother says could cut diamonds. He adjusted the hood on his black jacket as well as the rest of his jacket so he could proudly display his emerald green shirt. Ao then looked down at his black flat tops and green jeans.

"not bad" he muttered to himself,

once he got caught up with his own narcissism he noticed a cute girl wearing a red cloak similar to that of red riding hood. Her hair was a similar shade of black as his hair but with some dark red highlights. The mystery girl then turned and looked straight at Ao and gave a confused smile, Ao's face turned bright red and started to walk away quickly.

He briskly walked away and looked up at the sky and smiled as water hit his forehead. Ao started to run home as to not get caught in the rain. When he returned to his apartment he pulled out his wave-bladed sword from its sheath, Vlamsabel was a typical sword no special modifications however when combined with the red dust it would create an unstoppable flaming sword. He pulled a vile out of his bag and poured some on his sword so that it was burning as hot as a volcano's magma. He walked into the apartment slowly using his sword as a light, while walking through the dark apartment. The quick flash of lightning revealed a horrid sight to Ao. His sword dropped to the floor putting the fire out, he walked slowly toward the hanging bodies in the kitchen, tears streaking down his face. He finally saw the bodies of both of his parents in full view.

"No… no Noooooooo!"

Ao ran out of the apartment and onto the deserted street; he looked up and said one word to himself before running to the one place he felt safe "why."

Well i hope yah liked it give me all your critiques like I said! :D