Authors note: This is my first fanfic!! I really hope you like it! If you don't, then tell me. I don't mind criticism. It helps me. I love the chipmunks and the chipettes but I really wanted to write this!!
Enjoy!! .
The chipmunks and chipettes walked into the 4 star hotel they were staying at. They were in Orlando, Florida performing a concert. It was almost midnight when they entered the hotel. Neither Dave nor Miss Miller was with them, as they had been trusted to go alone. They were all 14 years old.
Alvin, Simon and Theodore shared a room by themselves and so did the chipettes. There rooms were on the third floor and opposite each other.
They said goodnight to each other and headed into their rooms.
"Good concert, girls." Brittney said as she made for the bathroom. Eleanor was already asleep in her bed. Jeanette smiled. Through the bathroom door she heard Brittney say, "Tomorrow we take the train home!!"
Jeanette's eyes widened. The train? "Why not by plane?" she asked her sister.
"Miss Miller and Dave didn't give us enough money to fly back home," Brittney said as she walked out of the bathroom in her silky pink pajamas. "They suggested the train."
Jeanette had never taken a train, so she didn't know what to think of it. She shrugged and went into the bathroom. She took off her clothes and put on her fuzzy purple robe. She brushed her teeth and then put on her purple pajamas. She walked out of the bathroom to find Brittney asleep. She headed over to her bed and got under the covers.
She took off her pink rimmed glasses and placed them onto the night stand. She closed her eyes and quickly fell asleep. Then, she dreamed.
The group arrived at the train station. Jeanette's gaze shifted to the clock. The clock's second hand was ticking faster than Jeanette thought it should. The time read 1:56. Their train was leaving at two.
They walked through the crowd briskly. They got to the train. Jeanette could see the tracks beneath it. They stepped on to the train. The floor squeaked as if in pain. Jeanette shuddered. As the group found seats, the doors shut with a loud slam. It made Jeanette jump. The train slowly began to depart from the station. When it became a mile from the station, it picked up speed. Every now and then, the train would bump. Jeanette wondered why a train would bump if it was on the tracks. What if, during the bumps, it…
Jeanette looked out the window. She didn't want to think about that. The train picked up more speed and soon, Jeanette could barely see anything out the window as it was whizzing by. A small bump was hit. Jeanette felt goose bumps on her arm. A bigger bump was hit and there was a loud screeching noise. Jeanette looked to her friends. When she did the train lurched forward and the screech grew louder. Alvin was thrown to the floor. When he tried to get up, a cart flew down the aisle and into his body and crushed him into the wall with a CRUNCH.
Brittney screamed. Jeanette sat watching. Simon reacted and stood up to try and help his brother, but at that moment the train bumped harder and the glass window shattered onto him, impaling his flesh.
The train shifted and screams were heard. Jeanette watched in horror as Brittney's screams were cut off by the impact of a bump. Her neck broke. Theodore was one of the people screaming, but with another jerk of the train, he flew up and hit the window. Blood spurted out of his head.
The train turned on it's side and slid off the tracks onto the dirt it had been traveling along. Eleanor fell out the window that had shattered and was splattered by another car of the train. Jeanette remained where she sat, watching everyone of her friends and her sisters die.
Jeanette screamed.
"What the hell?" Brittney yelled. Jeanette stopped screaming. She looked around. She was in the hotel room, lying in her bed. She was breathing hard and sweating.
"Did you have a bad dream?" Eleanor asked. Jeanette looked at her sisters. "Yes…" she replied, heavily breathing.
Eleanor gave her a hug. "It was just a dream, Jean. Everything's ok."
Just a dream, Jeanette thought. It was all just a dream…
"Can I go back to sleep now? Our train leaves at two and I don't want to be sleepy on it." Brittney said. She rolled over. Jeanette stared at her. I'm not getting on that train, she thought.
"Try and go back to sleep, Jean. Its only 6:30!!" Eleanor said. She got back into her bed and went to sleep.
Jeanette didn't sleep. She cried.
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PLEASE review, even if you hated it with a passion. Tell me. There will be more chapters and it will be like the movies(She saves them from death and death finds them)!! Jeanette was the one to see it because she is my favorite chipette! :D
