Amo Trans Tempus, I Love Across Time.
By St1
He dove over the pile of dirt as energy beam flew over his head causing a large explosion that decimated the car that it hit. The boy pushed off with his feat trying to gain a few feat of distance from his pursuer. He pushed himself harder than he ever had before, he knew that he couldn't fight these things in his condition. There were just too many and they were just too strong. He jinxed in random directions trying to dodge the blasts while he fled at a speed incomprehensible to the average person. Diving down between buildings, moving from alley to alley, pushing off with his feat just to gain a few inches. At one point he even dove into the old sewer system.
That had been a bad idea for one of them was waiting for him at the end of the tunnel. He heard its pincers before he sensed it. He could think of only one way out, and he knew he would lose speed doing it, but it was the only way for him to get out of the sewer. He created energy balls, one for each hand. First he threw one at the ceiling behind him hoping to trap his pursuers, or at least slow them down. The second ball he powered up as much as possible, and at the same time he repressed his ki to the point where it showed up as almost non-existent. He threw the ball in front of him so that it exited the tunnel just moments before he himself did. His trick worked, as soon as his blast left the sewer pipe he heard a terrible high-pitched scream. It was the sound of a creature that dived at the first thing to exit the tunnel and was in turn engulfed by the ball of energy. That tunnel hadn't put him where he thought I would though. He was now in the middle of a swampy field with no cover anywhere and his diversion didn't work for long because he felt his pursuers speed up towards him once again. He knew he wouldn't make it till he felt 3 very familiar people up above him. "Get out of here" was all he heard before blasts filled the air.
He soared strait up till he knew he wasn't being followed anymore. He lowered his speed to conserve energy as he pulled a small pouch off his belt. In this pouch was an orange ball about the size of a baseball. "All that for something so tiny" was all he thought as he sped towards the place he called home.
AN This is only part of the story, the true first chapter will hopefully be published within 2 weeks. I just wonted to see what the reaction was to my writing style as this is the first thing I have published. E-mail me or Review please as your comments help me help my writing. I know at this moment it doesn't make much sense (its actually not intended to but to find out what's going on you will just have to keep watching.)
By St1
He dove over the pile of dirt as energy beam flew over his head causing a large explosion that decimated the car that it hit. The boy pushed off with his feat trying to gain a few feat of distance from his pursuer. He pushed himself harder than he ever had before, he knew that he couldn't fight these things in his condition. There were just too many and they were just too strong. He jinxed in random directions trying to dodge the blasts while he fled at a speed incomprehensible to the average person. Diving down between buildings, moving from alley to alley, pushing off with his feat just to gain a few inches. At one point he even dove into the old sewer system.
That had been a bad idea for one of them was waiting for him at the end of the tunnel. He heard its pincers before he sensed it. He could think of only one way out, and he knew he would lose speed doing it, but it was the only way for him to get out of the sewer. He created energy balls, one for each hand. First he threw one at the ceiling behind him hoping to trap his pursuers, or at least slow them down. The second ball he powered up as much as possible, and at the same time he repressed his ki to the point where it showed up as almost non-existent. He threw the ball in front of him so that it exited the tunnel just moments before he himself did. His trick worked, as soon as his blast left the sewer pipe he heard a terrible high-pitched scream. It was the sound of a creature that dived at the first thing to exit the tunnel and was in turn engulfed by the ball of energy. That tunnel hadn't put him where he thought I would though. He was now in the middle of a swampy field with no cover anywhere and his diversion didn't work for long because he felt his pursuers speed up towards him once again. He knew he wouldn't make it till he felt 3 very familiar people up above him. "Get out of here" was all he heard before blasts filled the air.
He soared strait up till he knew he wasn't being followed anymore. He lowered his speed to conserve energy as he pulled a small pouch off his belt. In this pouch was an orange ball about the size of a baseball. "All that for something so tiny" was all he thought as he sped towards the place he called home.
AN This is only part of the story, the true first chapter will hopefully be published within 2 weeks. I just wonted to see what the reaction was to my writing style as this is the first thing I have published. E-mail me or Review please as your comments help me help my writing. I know at this moment it doesn't make much sense (its actually not intended to but to find out what's going on you will just have to keep watching.)