Hey guy, this is a story that I wrote from a few years back, when I was like really young. I know a lot of you guys didn't like it because of all the grammar problems and yeah there was a shit tone of them. Even I was like 'damn that's bad' though I'm still not that good when it comes to grammar, but I can say that I have gotten better. So I thought to make things ten time better, I'm going to fix this lovely story of mine and make it better than it was and more understandable. So I hope you enjoy it better than you did the first time.

Wonderful Night

I was staring out into the night where Kaname in sitting in his study room. I can't really get him out of her mind, I wanted to be with him always but I worry a lot about what Zero would do without me. I love Zero to death, but it's a different kind of love, like a brotherly love kind of thing. Kaname is different compared to Zero, he is much sweeter than Zero ever was. Zero is such a hot head, all he wants is to kill all the vampires and that's the one thing I dislike about Zero, but I understand why Zero is like that.

"Yukki where are you?" asked Zero.

I jumped down from the roof top that I was on and landed right in front of him. "Hey Zero, what do you want?" I asked.

"Nothing I was just wondering where you was, hey are you heading back already?" Zero stared.

"I guess I am, come on," I yelled as I grabbed his hand and stared walking back to the headmasters place. I didn't know why I started dragging Zero with me to headmasters place, but I did. It doesn't bother me, so I'm ok with it. Headmasters place wasn't far from where we were. When we got there no one was home and tomorrow is a day off of school so everyone will be calm. I turned around and looked at Zero, "Did you know the headmaster left, Zero?" I asked.

Zero glared at me, "No I did not."

I looked at Zero and then I punched, the dumb ass in the arm.

"OW! WHAT WAS THAT FOR!" he yelled.

"That was for being an ass, why can't you just smile and be nice for once ZERO!" I yelled back.

With that I ran into my room without looking back. I wish he could be nicer to me, at least once, I don't like it when he's being mean to me. Thirty minutes past when I got up to go take a shower. This will, hopefully, calm me down from all the bad thoughts that I had. I opened the door to the bathroom to see steam everywhere and in the steam was figure. When I took a closer look I see Zero, his body had water droplets all over and it was glistening in the light. My eyes was locked on Zero toned body, it was perfect in every way possible. My eyes traveled all the way down to….

"Zero!" I yelled in surprise, though I wasn't really surprised except for seeing his…yeah, that piece of meat down there.

Zero ran to me and slammed his hand over my mouth. I tried to move, but when I did I felt something against on my ass.

"Yukki stop moving," Zero growled.

I stopped all of my movement and when I did, he removed his hand from my mouth.

"Why did you..." I didn't get to finish what I was trying to say as Zero's lips slammed against mine. What is wrong with him? He has never done something like this before. Then my mind suddenly thought, 'What about Kaname, he will be mad if he finds out,' but the feeling of Zero's lips on mine was such a nice feeling. Next thing I know, I'm kissing Zero back full force as if I lost all control of my body. Zero jerked in surprised and pulled away, "Yukki I'm sorry I didn't mean to force you to do that," Zero started.

I didn't even listen to what he was saying as my mind was on his lip and how much I want to kiss him again. My body reacted before I thought about what I was doing. I captured Zero's lips with my own and kissed as hard as I could, letting my mouth explore his. Zero let out a moan which drove my mind into a deeper gutter. All I could think about was exploring his lips, neck, chest, stomach, and then my mind went to that perfect piece of meat that cause all of this in the first place. I was so deep in my thoughts that I didn't think I was doing exactly what I was thinking until I heard Zero moaning and panting. I looked up and seen Zero's flushed face and then looked at what I was doing; I was sucking on his dick and notice that I was doing a good job since there was pre-cum on the tip. The sight was so erotic that I started to close my eye and take Zero's dick back into my mouth.

"Ah... Yukki ...I ...Think ... You ...Should ...Stop" Zero moaned.

I stopped for a few seconds and looked up, "You don't like this Zero?" I asked as I stick my tongue out and lick the tip of his dick. Zero moan at the sight of me and then sighed, "It's not that I don't like it, it's just that we shouldn't be doing this. You should probably take a shower and go to bed," Zero grabbed his towel and left me in the bathroom all alone. I sat on the floor thinking about what just happened.

"What the hell came over me" I let out a deep sigh.

I got up from where I was sitting and got ready to shower. Throughout the shower I was thinking about Zero and what I just did not too long ago. The me that I know would never do something like that, but when I saw his body my mind went into a haze. I couldn't get Zero out of my mind, then all of a sudden I realized that I was love Zero, a love that was much more than a brother kind of way. I got out of the shower and got dressed for bed. When I headed to my room to sleep I was having problems sleeping, I wanted to be with Zero and tell him exactly how I feel. I got up and headed straight for Zero's room. When I got to his bedroom door I placed my ear on his door and listened. All I heard was moaning sounds coming from inside his room and my first thought was Zero is having a nightmare. I opened the door walk into Zero's bedroom and went straight to his bed so I could join him. As soon as I joined him on the bed, the bed started moving.

"Yukki what are you doing?" Zero asked, with eyes as wide as ones of a deer that was caught in a head light.

"I heard you moaning and thought you were having nightmares, are you ok?" I asked.

"Yukki I'm ok, so you can leave now," Zero growled.

I frowned, "I'm not leaving Zero."

"Yukki, don't make me make you leave because I can" Zero growled.

"What will you do Zero that will make me leave?" I asked sarcastically.

"This" Zero jumped on top of me and pined my arms down. I tried to move, but Zero started growled when I did.

"Let pick up where we started in the bathroom," when Zero said this my eye widen. Zero leaned down to my lips and capture them with his own, the feeling of them against my own cause me to moan, as it was such a wonderful feeling. Zero pulled himself away, "You're enjoying this" Zero smile. I looked up as he said this and started to blush as he was telling the truth. Zero's hands slide under my shirt taking it off, "Right now I really wants to see your beautiful naked body Yukki," hearing him say this and feeling his hand taking off my clothes was causing my body to heat up really fast. Zero kissed me on my lips and traveled all the way down to my breast, he stopped for a few seconds to look me in the eyes and smile before he took my nipple into his mouth.

"Zero stop playing around, I'm too wet and horny for foreplay. Now you either penetrate my vagina with you dick or I'm going to leave and take care of it myself." Zero stared at me for a second amazed that I said that before his stripped down and position himself at my entrance.

"Yukki are you sure you want to do this" Zero asked.

"Yes Zero I'm sure, if I wasn't I wouldn't be her."

"OK..." he said before he slammed his dick inside of me. I let out a loud scream of pain as his dick penetrated me.

"Yukki I'm so sorry we can stop right now if you want."

"No, it's fine but you should have known that you don't slam you dick into a girl if she is a virgin, alright right Zero. Now give me a moment to adjust before you start moving."

Zero waited until I gave him a signal to start trusting in me, he started out slowly so that I can get used to it. It hurt for little bit at, but then it started to feel really good. When Zero notice that I wasn't in pain anymore, he started to pick up the pace. Soon Zero was pounding into me with inhuman speed, but we didn't care as it felt so good.

"Yukki, I Love You" Zero panted.

"I Love You Too Zero" I panted back.

Right after Zero heard me tell him that I love him, he cummed hard inside of me.

"AH... ZERO," I yelled as I cummed from the feeling of his seeds filling me up. Zero collapsed on top of me once he came down from his little high.

"That was amazing," Zero panted

"It was," I agreed

Zero smiled at me before he grabbed his blanket and wrapped both of us in it, soon after we both drifted off to sleep.

Ta da, lol in my own opinion, this one is way better than the first one so yay for that. I would like for some Reviews from you guy to know if I did better on this one or not. I know that it is much longer than it used to be, but I just need to know if you guys enjoyed this. J