hi guys, this is my 1st fanfic guz, and id really appreciate it if u left coments saying wat you liked and wat u didnt like. k bye

once upon a time in doctorwholand, docter who was fixing the Tardis. The tardis was blue, and his time travel spaceship (IN CASE yOu didn't no). Anyway, clara cAMe down in a lether jumpsut (cos shes a hore and amy and ross are so m uch better cumpanions). she sed 'dctor, tak me to jupiter'. he said 'no clare, cos jupiter is shit innit'. Doctor whoe prefered earth t jupiter anywa. so dey went to earth and to claras house. CLara was macking some wine in the kichen to sedooce the dkter, but he came in and scoolded clare.

'chlorine, wat do u think ur doin' said the docktor

'making wine' said clra

'You might relese a dalek or if ur lucky, satan."

'i wont, doctr, i promiss.'

'its just lies with you. i knew i shouldnt hae tken you abourd the trdis, i love amie, not u.'

'im sorry dktr, i swere to steven moffatt, i will nevr relese a deelek.'

so the dctor went to look out for cyberman and shit, and cleroy looked after her children. wen all of a sdden...pof! CLARA DISAPPEARED.

matt smith was sad. he began to crie.

'Clarafel, im so sorry i calld u a bich." (wich he didn't, but he impleed it.)

But then, anover pof came. it was amie and roree...

TWO BEE CONINTUED...