Hey mina!

Yay! New fan fic! I'm not particularly good when it comes to romance so bear with me, OK?

Shinichi: Oh, you're not that bad.

Me: Yes actually, I am. It once took me six months to realize one of my friends wanted to be more than friends. He was hitting on me for SIX MONTHS! Who the hell does that?!

Shinichi: Oh. Wow.

Me: Yeah. I politely declined. We're still friends, which I am very glad for. I have problems making friends to begin with; I don't want to lose the ones I already have.

Ahem! Anyway, this fan fic is a Shin X OC, or OC X Shin (Neither will be overly dominant). I will call it a ShinMax / MaxShin from now on, because why not.

As per all my fan fics-

"Speaking."

"Whispering."

Thoughts.

Disclaimer: I don't own Detective Conan, I so wish I did, but sadly, I don't.


I almost screamed, "Oh. My. God. I won! I won the contest!"

Kira squealed, "That's great Max! What's the prize?"

"The prize is a free family 4 pack of tickets to Tropical Land. And I won!" I couldn't believe it. I'd never won anything in my life. I kind of had the worst luck ever, what with attracting dead bodies were ever I go and all. As a detective I solve any and all mysteries that come my way but it can get annoying sometimes.

Rosalina's eyes widened, "Tropical Land! I hear it's almost impossible to get tickets for that place."

I look at her, "Oh it is. That's what's so awesome about this."

"So, who are you taking?" Archer asked.

"Well if we get two more tickets for that day we can all go." Rygart said. He turned to me, "What day are they for?"

I frowned as I read the date on the tickets. "It says there for Friday 9/13. That's tomorrow! Dammit! Figures my good luck wouldn't hold!"

"You can't go? That's too bad." Archer said.

Saphira looked up from her burger, "Figures you'd get tickets for Friday the 13'Th."

I ignored her and turned to Archer. "No, I can go. The question is, can you guys?" I said looking at all of them in turn.

They all shook their heads.

"Oh well. You can go without us. We wouldn't want to ruin your fun, now would we guys?" Kira smiled.

They all agreed.

"Aaaww! You guys! Thanks!" I smiled. I paused and frowned, "Wait, what do I do with the other tickets?"

The next day

I stood in front of the main gates to Tropical land, alone. It was nice of everyone to understand. It would have been more fun with them, but it can't be helped. I spent the rest of the day riding rides and playing games.

That is, I did until I had to solve a murder on the merry-go-round. It ended up being the woman's son. He was in debt and wanted her inheritance.

Ugh! Why can't people just get along!? I thought as I was going to leave. Just then, I saw movement out if the corner of my eye. I turned my head in time to see a stocky man dressed all in black go into an ally. What's he up to? I decided to follow and observe him.

I hid behind the corner to watch him. He was talking with another shorter man in black. The other man seemed jumpy and nervous. I strained my ears to hear their conversation.

"I-I br-brought the money, j-just as you asked. N-Now give me the pictures." Though it was a demand he sounded almost timid.

The other man looked down at him, "First, show me the money." There was venom in his words.

The shorter man brought out a large briefcase and opened it. It was full of money.

Oh my god! There has to be at least $100,000,000 in there! Good thing I brought that camera. I'll have to thank Kira for giving it to me later. I started taking pictures of them.

"OK. Here are the photos of your company's illegal drug and gun smuggling." The larger man said, trading the briefcase for a little flash drive.

The smaller man visibly relaxed, "You're sure this is the only copy?"

"Are you doubting us?" The larger man almost growled.

The smaller man flinched, "N-No, of course not!"

"What do we have here?" The new voice came from behind me.

Oh shit! I turned around in time to see a tall thin man with silver-white hair swing a lead pipe at my head. To my horror I wasn't fast enough to doge it.

*Thud!*

"Aniki!"

That was the stocky man.

"I can't believe you let yourself be followed!"

That must be the silver-white haired man.

"Don't worry; you know I always clean up my messes."

"No. We don't want to leave a bullet trail. Let's use this."

"What's that?"

"It's a new poison the scientists in the organization created. It's supposed to be undetectable in any tests. They have yet to test it on any humans so she can be our little guinea pig."

Suddenly, I felt someone grab a handful of my hair and lift my head up. They put something in my mouth, which I assumed was the poison. They then poured water down my throat. My reflexes made me swallow the water along with whatever was in my mouth.

All-of-a sudden my body started burning.

Holly shit! It feels like my bones are tuning to molten lead. I guess this is it. I'm dying. I'll miss you guys. I'm just glad you didn't come with me.

That was all I could think before I blacked out.

Little did I know, someone had seen me follow that man into the ally. He also saw that tall skinny man go in after me. He watched as they both came back out, and when I didn't, he went in to look for me.


Muhahahaha! Cliffhanger, I'm so evil.

OK, so it's not much but it's a start. I hope you liked it. Review or favorite if you did. If not leave a review giving me some tips. God knows I could use the help.

This chapter's song was This Is Usually The Part Where People Scream by Alesana.