also if they don't say something outloud but think it i'll put it between "(...)" that's all. :)
Hey there, my name's Eveline.
i'm going to tell you a story that changed my friend's, Michelle, and my life completely.
now let me be honest with you, in the beginning it's going to be really, really boring...BUT! but that doesn't mean it's not going to get interesting.
we'll be in great adventures together and in quite some danger too, we will have to save countless of innocent people...
but most of the time others will have to save us instead because...how do i put it, we're really horrible at fighting.
but don't mind that, we're going to get stronger. now, onto the story!
eveline: yaaawn...ugh this whole morning is awfull, i get the feeling that at this rate my whole day'll be ruined.
eveline's mom: eveline, please don't be such a pessimist! it's very unladylike...and hold your hand before your mouth when you yawn!
eveline: *sigh*...sorry mom.
eveline's mom: anyway, your father told me he'll be home late today.
eveline: like always... well geuss i'll get going.
eveline's mom: and where do you think you're going, young lady?
eveline: i promised Michelle i'd visit her today, that's not a problem is it?
eveline's mom: i guess not, be home before 10 PM... it'd be horrible if the neighbours thought you're going out at such a young age!
eveline: *sweatdrop* mom...i'm 19...
eveline's mom: that's exactly what i mean, you better get going now, Michelle must've been waiting a long time.
eveline: (i was going to say something about her last sentence but forget it, if i do i'll never leave the house today.) okay mom, bye!
eveline's mom: bye sweetie!
-on the way to Michelle-
eveline: (seriously, why do my parents still treat me like a child...it's really embarassing sometimes...well, atleast i know they love me.)
saleswoman: AH, YOU THERE YOUNG LADY!
eveline: ?
saleswoman: say, are you perhaps interested in our newest product? it's very popular amongst young girls like you these days.
eveline: (i hate it wen people try to sell me some weird crap) sure, what is it... (but i guess i'll have to be polite, it might be something interesting)
saleswoman: i have these beautiful hairclips from fishman island, do you have any interest?
eveline: (hairclips...from fishman island? mmm... i'm not really for accesoires, but i think michelle would like them) sure, what kinds do you have?
saleswoman: i have these crystal white pearl hairclips that'd look great on you, don't you think so?
eveline: wow, they're really pretty! but i'm really looking for myself, i'd rather buy them for my friend.
saleswoman: ah okay, and what are the color of her hair and eyes, if i may ask?
eveline: she has red hair and dark blue eyes, oh she also has quite a girlish sense of style!
saleswoman: hmmm, let's see what i've got here...aha i know the perfect hairclip for your friend! what do you think of this one?
eveline: (WOW!~ it's really pretty! even more beautiful than the last one) !
saleswoman: i see you're quite satisfied with this one, hmm? i wouldn't expect any other reaction honestly...this is one of the rarest hairclips you can buy in fishman island.
eveline: (this'd suit Michelle so well...a yellow and light blue hairclip in the form of a seahorse with a crystal eye on it...)...IT'S BEAUTIFUL! I'LL TAKE IT!
saleswoman: i see, you're very enthousiastic about it hehe, you must have an amazing friend, so i'll take the prize down a little...but don't tell anyone okay *wink*
eveline: got it! thank you very much, miss.
saleswoman: that'll be 500 beri then.
eveline: (even with the price down, that's quite a lot for a hairclip...but considering it's so rare apperently i'll go with it.) okay...here you go, miss.
saleswoman: thank you very much for your business young lady, i hope your friend'll be happy with it!
eveline: i'm sure she'll like it thank you, miss.
-in front of Michelle's house-
DRIING!
michelle: i'm on my way! just wait a minute and i'll be right there!
eveline: *giggle* (oh Michelle ^.^)
michelle: *opens door* yey, eveline! you're here! i've waited so long for you! *tears up*
eveline: stop acting already i know you didn't expect me to come here. *giggle*
michelle: true, but you promised the last two times and you said you coudln't come afterwards.
eveline: yeah, sorry about that. *smile* but you know, i'm going to make it up to you.
michelle: ...how?
eveline: TA-DA!
michelle: eh... a present?!
eveline: mhm!
michelle: have i ever told you that you're THE BEST friend EVER!
eveline: no, why don't you tell me now...
michelle: ...seriously?
eveline: i was just kidding! i was just kidding, okay?! *smile*
michelle: heh...anyway, let's open it!...WOOOOW! IT'S BEAUTIFUL!
eveline: i know, the saleswoman told me they'd suit you realy well.
michelle: uwah~ thank you so much eveline! you know what, i'll say it... YOU'RE THE BEST FRIEND EVER!
eveline: hehe, thanks...hey why don't you wear it now so you can show it off to EVERYONE we pass by...
michelle: hahaha good idea, it's always so much fun to see peoples reactions when we do something weird.
we spent the whole day showing that hairclip of to random people in the street, it was hilarious! atleast to us,
then some old lady started yelling at us for not respecting the elders by annoying them...
after i got her home, i looked at the time...
eveline: ah, crap! it's already 9:48 PM! if i don't get home in atleast 12 minutes, my mom will kill me! (with words and a long speech about how i shouldn't go outside that late...) HURRY HURRY HURRY HURYY!
chapter 2 will be up soon...if i get more inspiration that is T^T *sob* *sob*...