Hello wonderful people. You all probably hate me for asking for your judgement as to the continuation of my story, and even though I was given an overwhelmingly good response, I never fulfilled what I intended on doing. I did start the process of starting over, but then my laptop busted. So. Here I am just now figuring out I can type it from my iPhone, and started writing as soon as the app downloaded. I'm going to be putting the re written first chapter below, and if you guys are happy with it, I'll post it as another story and keep writing. Thanks-Dani
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Rachel Berry was ecstatic. She couldn't take her signature megawatt smile off her face as her father told her she was getting exactly what she wanted for her seventeenth birthday. All she could really ask for at this point. Rachel wanted a normal life, that is as much as a normal life she could get after being the most famous 16/17 year old girl in the world. Yeah. I'm aware of what you are thinking... Pshh. Good luck being normal after you threw that fact out there, Hun. But the thing is, Rachel Berry isn't famous. Rach Marie is. And yes, they are the same person. Yeah, yeah they'd know it was Rach on the street if they saw her, but they wouldn't know it was Rachel.. Or vice versa. But Rach Marie has bright unnaturally red hair.. Fake hair that is (it's a wig, not that any of her fans know that) and Rachel, well Rachel has her very natural chocolate brown hair. That's all that's really needed to trick people into believing they were two completely different persons.
So, i guess our story begins in Columbus, Ohio, at Rach Marie's last concert before she 'takes a much needed break from all the ups and downs of being a teen celebrity.'
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Finn Hudson, Santana Lopez, Noah 'Puck' Puckerman, Brittany S. Peirce, and Quinn Fabray were sitting in the middle of the floor seating at the Rach Marie concert. None of them, except Finn and Santana, had a clue as to who the girl on stage really was. Hell, none of the thousands of people watching the petite girl sing on that stage knew. All except for two.
Finn saw his little sister. The girl who he didn't get to see very often, but he would do anything for her. Nothing could hurt her if it were up to him. Rachel had always tried to play tough, but Finn knew his sisters soft side, and he knew that she needed to feel protected sometimes.
Santana saw her best friend in the entire world. She saw millions of flashbacks of moments they had laughed, cried, and smiled about. The girl who she always knew she could trust with her life. She also felt guilt when she saw the person she supposedly told everything to. She never did tell her about how she felt about Brittany...
Puck saw a hot piece of ass that he actually knew he had no chance of getting at. She was like super famous or something. His sister has like a million posters of this chick on her wall. He thought that the whole getting drug to some concert by Finn wasn't too bad She did have like a killer voice.
Quinn saw her boyfriend Finn staring adoringly at the girl on the stage. She thought now that it was the fact that Finn had a crush on the famous girl Quinn couldn't really measure up to, the one he never met, was the reason he took his friends to the concert. Little did she know..
Brittany saw a girl with pretty hair and good dance moves singing. She was pretty unconcerned with anything other than watching the girl, except for the fact that Lord Tubbington still hadn't gone to his intervention meetings, because his smoking problem got a tad bit out if control. She also would look over at how pretty Tana looked smiling while watching the concert.
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Behind the stage, after the concert Rachel was going a little bit crazy.
"Whoooo Hooo mother suckers! I'm do-o-one! Haha! You aren't! Haaha! Sucks for you!" She shouted as she ran through the corridors weaving her way through stage hands trying to get to her dressing room.
"I'm gonna get this shit off of my face and go hoooommmmmeee!"
"Rachel Babara Berry! Lower your voice and get in the dressing room. You are making a scene." Rachel's father, and caretaker while she was on the road scolded.
Rachel Bowed her head, "Sorry dad, you just know I'm really excited," she looked up with a playful smile on her face.
Her father nodded, "I know you are sweetie. But promise me you will be good for your mother. Okay? I know you are going to have so much fun. Just don't get crazy," he smiled.
"Yes dad. I promise. I'm gonna miss you a lot."
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Santana, Brittany, Finn, and Quinn were standing outside the arena after the concert waiting for Puck to buy a t-shirt for his sister when Quinn suggested they should get autographs.
Finn shrugged, " I dunno guys"
Brittany pouted, "but Finny I want one!"
Puck returned and said with a smirk, "Yeah Finny,"
"Yeah, but the line is really long Britt... And they're probably just going to stop it after so many people.."
"Fine fatty. Be a party pooper then," Santana half-joked.
Quinn sighed, "he has a point. Lets just go on home."
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"Hey Finn can me and the girls crash at your place tonight? It's late and I sure as fuck don't want to drive home."
"I don't know Puck, it doesn't sound like a good idea."
Puck raised and eyebrow, "Since when are you acting like a douche?"
"I don't know what you are talking about," Finn said, unfazed.
"You complain about the lines when they wanted autographs, when we know you usually have no problem with that, and you say 'I don't think that's a good idea' when it was a good idea thousands of times before when we wanted to stay," Puck said.
"My sister is coming back."
Puck smirked, "The hot chick in all of your family photos?"
Santana sat in the back stifling a giggle. She knew how over protective Finn was of Rachel, "Man Puck, you are in for it now! He is wayyy overprotective of Rachel."
Finn tightened his fists around the wheel, "Don't. Talk. About. My. Sister. Like. That. Best friend or not I will punch you."
Puck put his hands up, "Sorry man. But wait, Rachel. So.. Is the Rachel chick Santana can talk on and on for hours about your sister?"
All of the other people in the car let out a in unison "Duh!" And Finn added, "And you guys call me the stupid one."
"Well sorry I didn't know," Puck defended, "but I wanna meet her. And I'm assuming Q and Brit do too. So can we pweese stay at your place?"
"Fine." Puck let out and un- badass 'yay!' And Finn continued, "but I don't want you to poison her mind with your pistols of hell. Okay?"
Santana gave him a look and rolled her eyes, "Dude she isn't six. She just turned seventeen."
"You should listen to Satan," Puck said.
"Pardon to interrupt," Quinn spoke up, "But I can't stay. I have to go home. But ill go in and say hi,"
"Yeah, me too, Lord Tubbington can't be left alone for more than eight hours. Court order," Brittany piped in, "but I think Rachel, Tana, Quinny, and I should have a sleepover next Friday."
The other girls in the car chimed in with their agreements as the car pulled into the driveway.
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So that was it folks please lemme know how you like it and I will do my best to keep it coming. Byee, and know I'm always open for suggestions!