ok so. heres the deal. im doing an interactive animation for aschool project whitch involvesboth twilight.(te he) and startreck (te he) only this is like nothing you have seen biffor. all charectures for star treck are made up exept for (tribles kirk spock uhura and that green heard chick from the origanal series.)

ok so biffor i make this i need reviews to see if its good couse this is for my A levels. plz help. also if you like the charectures im gonna write a proper story about them. charectur profiles are inclouded in this.

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Scripts for my animation by Samantha Jane Sykes

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Easter egg face book script (DURINGSCENES THERE ARE EASTER EGGS YOU CAN CLICK THAT LEAD TO HIDDEN STUFF)

Green hair rocks has logged on.

Kingoflinguistic has logged on.

Greenhairrocks: hi thanks for friending me. I know your mom and I thought id add you.

Kingoflinguistics: no way you now my mom

Greenhairrocks: I used to be a throyl until James T Kirk freed us all so ye I know your mom

Kingoflinguistics: Did you ether talk to James Kirk

Greenhairrocks: Ye I was his trainer among other things.

Kingoflinguistics: I work under his daughter who is the latest captain of the enterprise

Greenhairrocks: He has a daughter

Kingoflinguistics: Ye she's real nice

Greenhairrocks: Hang on ill friend request her

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KaptainKickassKurk: Hay so you new dad. Was he a pain then too tee he.

Greenhairrocks: I didn't really think he was a pain

KaptainKickassKurk: Ye all the girls seem to say that. Did you meet Spock?

Greenhairrocks: I met Uhura who talked of Spock often

KaptainKickassKurk: Coolness right gota go I have to fill a report to Starfleet

Kingoflinguistics: Ye who knew that there was that much paper work in being a captain.

KaptainKickassKurk: Totally

Greenhairrocks: Talk to you guys later the providers are wonting to through a party for Laura she was able to make a hover car she built go up to light speed today so there throwing the party to celebrate her triumph and all that

Kingoflinguistics: seeya

KaptainKickassKurk: Bye

Greenhairrocks has logged off.

Kingoflinguistics: See you on the bridge tomoz lil.

KaptainKickassKurk: Kk bye

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Easter egg twilight movie 4 seconds

Have Cullen's playing base ball then something happens that's not in the movie.(POSABLYINVOLVE BLADE)

Ester egg twilight story 28.5 seconds (MY CHARECTURE IS READING TWILIGHT CLICK ON THE BOOK AND YOU SEE THIS)

Twilight in a nut shell

Boy meets girl

Boy wants to eat girl

Girl falls for boy

Boy falls for girl

Boy turns out to be a blood sucking fiend

Girl still likes boy

Boy takes girl to meet family

Family likes girl (except rose)

Boy takes girl to baseball game

Evil vampires want to eat girl

Girl nearly dies

Boy saves girl

Prom at end

Hints that girl's best friend is a werewolf

End of twilight

So it's your average teen romance really

(THIS IS REALY THE STARTOF THE ANIM. ITS CHARECTURE PROFILES)

Info page as long as they need

Page 1

Looks like some star fleet officers aren't doing what there told.

Find out what they are doing by clicking Easter egg buttons like this one. (Arrow pointing to example)

Easter eggs can be found anywhere and are many different sizes so keep an eye out

Page 2

The star ship enterprise, this is one of the federation's best ships. Its captain is lily Tiberius Kirk. (At least right now any way)

Page 3

Lilly is the new captain of the star ship. She is kirks daughter and is the youngest of three kids. She secretly has a crush on Grayson and wants to maroon Amy on the planate Alfa vaga. Her favourite animals are "Tribbles" and her favourite drink is romulan ail however her favourite human drink is absinth. She loves the colour green which is why she promoted Te lane to first officer (don't tell anyone).

Page 4

You are...

Te lane. Her mother was an orian whose name is unknown and her father was a vulkan named sybok. She takes after her uncle as she like he was is the science officer of the star ship. She is also the second in command and though

Scene one

Ship moving

Scene two

Amy: Can I talk to you please 1.6 seconds

(THERE WILL BEA THINGTHAT POPS UP WITH TWO BUTTENS IT WILL SAY you are fully capable of desiding youre own destiny the question you face is whitch path will you choose. the you will see ignore or talk for the buttons)

Scene three ignore

Te Lane: Damn it Amy.

I was reading that.

WHY DID YOU DO THAT! 3 Seconds

Amy: Why!

Why!

I'll tell you why!

Because I'm Amy mwahahahahahahaha! 4 seconds

Ta Lane: If you do not apologies in the next 5 seconds I will be forced to take drastic actions 6 seconds

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Prepare to fight Amy 1 second

Scene three talk

Te Lane: What is it Amy 1 second

Amy: Well I don't really want to talk what I really want to do is this 4 seconds

Amy nocks book out of Te Lane's hands

Te Lane: What the... Amy what are you doing 2.6 seconds

Amy: Prepare to fight 1 second

at the end of scene three another choice comes up. kick or neck pinch

Scene four kick

Scene 4 noises

Cheering from me

Cheering from jenny

Te lane: No one touches my twilight book. 1 second

Scene four pinch

Te lane: A neck pinch a day keeps Amy away 3 seconds

end credits to iron maidens final frontiyer. (lols)

so was it good. reviews are realy needed.