This story starts with a young man named Scibles fighting to protect Traverse Town.

Scibles sees a man ina a white cloak running around the second district, accompanied by a large Heartless.

Scibles: "Hey! Are you the source of these Heartless?!"

Scibles shouted at the man, but he had gotten no response, The man opened up a portal through the corridors of darkness, and walked through.

Scibles:"Hey!"

Scibles chased the man into the portal, and ended up in a different world, with the man no where to be found. He looked around and he saw that he was in the center of the town, and he could see a castle in the distance. Scibles walked up to someone and asked him where he was.

Scibles: "Excuse me, sir. What world am I in?

The man: "This world is called Radient Garden. I suppose you are not here for a visit, due to the Keyblade in your hand."

Scibles: "You know about the Keyblade? How?"

The man laughed.

The man: "I, too, wield the Keyblade."

The man raised his arm in front of him and summoned the Keyblade to his hand.

Scibles: "Wow! Do you know how to get out of this world?"

The man handed Scibles a ring made of gold.

The man: "If you wear that ring, you will become encased in something called Keyblade Armor. The Keyblade Armor lets you wander in the Lanes Between, without having to worry about the darkness getting to you.

Scibles: "Oh ok, I don't believe I caught your name. My name is Scibles! What's your's?

The man: "My name is Shiokawa, you can call me Critical."

Scibles: "Why the name Critical?"

Critical: "People who become my enemy, have made a critical mistake."

Scibles: "Oh ok."

Critical stood up off of his chair.

Critical: "I have a feeling, you don't know what you're doing. How about I come with you, until you have got the hang of the Keyblade."

Scibles: "Yeah, I guess you're right. Sure, you can come with me!"

Critical hit the metal plate on his shoulder with his hand, and he became encased in what he had said was Keyblade Armor. Scibles put the ring he was given on, and then he too, was in Keyblade Armor.

Critical threw his Keyblade in the air, and it transformed into a flying motorcycle. Scibles also threw his Keyblade in the air, copying what Critical had done, and his Keyblade transformed into hover board.

Critical: "We should go t-"

Before Critical could finish his sentence, he heard some screams coming from the residential area of Radient Garden.

Critical: "We should go help whoever that was!"

Scibles agreed. Critical had went back to his normal attire, and Scibles took off the ring and went back to his normal attire as well. After that they dashed to the residential area.

***End of Chapter 1***

Notes: Critical IS the main protagonist of this Kingdom Hearts story. I had Scibles be the first character who appeared in the story, so I could have an easy way of Critical and Scibles finding each other.

I hope you enjoyed the story, give any sort of criticism as long as you are not Trolling. If you do troll, I am going to ignore your feedback.