Prologue
"Come on! Are you scared or what? Just go inside!"
"But Faithstar said to never go inside!" a beautiful she-cat said, looking.
"That's because she wants this place all to herself," I answered back impatiently. I brightened up. "Believe me, it's awesome!"
"If it's so awesome, why don't you go in?" the other cat retorted back.
Stubborn she-cat . . .
"Because I already went!" I groaned loudly. I was losing my patience.
"Fine! But just for a few seconds. I go in, I find the herbs and I get out. Got it?" the other she-cat meowed.
"Yeah, sure, got it," I replied hurriedly, wanting her to go in quickly.
"Okay. Here I go."
I looked up to see the dark, abandoned twoleg nest. I could still hear sounds from inside. It gave me the creeps and a chill ran down my spine. Maybe it was a cold breeze. Maybe it was just the ghost of fear itself.
"Do you think it's gonna work? Will they accept her?" whispered a third cat, padding up behind me.
"Yes. They can't refuse," I mewed, smiling chillingly.
Goodbye forever, my beautiful love. Until StarClan.
Okay, this is my second fic. I really wanted to try writing a sort of creepier, darker one, and though I think I'm not gonna do very good, I still want your thoughts and opinions on it so far, so please, please review! :) Reviews help me update faster!
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