Okay I decided to make a new Freddy Kruger story, and this one is based on the old Nightmare on Elm Street.

I also give you guys the permission to tell me if I need to add any details, grammer, etc. But, you must tell me what sentence. (give me my previous sentence then your version to see what makes the sentence sound better) If you do that it will help me become a better writer.

~Thank you~

-Fantasy33-

Chapter 1

Moving in

Living in a house is easy, but moving to a new one and missing all your friends, is hard. For me it's even harder living with a step-father that loves your mother more than you. I even hate the fact that he physically abuses my little sister when she doesn't do what he says, only when mom isn't home.

When our car stopped in the driveway I jumped out of the car, with my little sis, and went in the house, to find our rooms. I heard the car doors open and shut as I went up the stairs. I stopped when I noticed there was only one room with one bed.

I noticed the bed wasn't ours. It had a pink blanket, one white pillow, and pink curtains. The good thing it was big.

"Annie, look! I found another room." My real name is Ann, but she likes to call me Annie, because she called me that when she was just 5 years old.

I ran to the sound of my little sister's voice and saw her in a room that had a white bed with white covers and one pillow.

The room just had a plain white bed. When I walked in the room I saw the sun shining on the bed that was bringing out its white glow. I wonder what it felt like. I reached with my hand and placed it on the covers.

A little girl with brown hair was crying on the bed. She was wearing a pink dress and had her hair into pigtails. What was she crying about? I heard the question repeat in over and over, like echoes.

(A.N: Ann has visions when she touches objects, and she can also see the dead. You can say she sort of like a Medium.)

"Annie?" I felt someone touch my arm.

The vision was gone. It just… disappeared. I turned around and saw my sister's blue eyes look back into my green eyes. She had a worried face. I noticed that her blonde hair was shining from the sunlight. As I looked at her my black hair fell in front my right eye.

"Annie? Are you okay?" I blinked twice.

Then I placed my left hand on top of my sisters head pet her. "I'm fine, Lil." I called her that because that was her favorite name, plus she would always smile.

I smiled at her as I heard her hum while she was smiling.

"I know what room you want." I smiled at her.

She was confused, until I showed her the pink bed. She gasped. "Thank you Annie this is the best room ever." Then she hugged me.

"You're welcome." I said as I pet her again.

I was still wondering why that girl was crying. Who was she?

My thoughts were interrupted by the sound of feet stepping on the stairs, that sort of sound like a metronome tick… tack…tick …tack (the stairs creak a bit since it's old).

Lil ran to the stairs and I chased after her, I stopped in the hallway, somebody was standing in front at us smiling, but it wasn't mom.

He looked at Lil and me, especially me, I noticed he looked down and up at my body. That little pervert. If I could teach him a lesson or two, I would punch him in the face and kick his crotch so hard; he wouldn't mess with me or Lil.

"Come on, Lilly; let's go to your room." He smiled with loathe and lust in his eyes as his hands were reached out to grab her.

She was scared and cried a bit when she ran to me. "Annie, help me. Help me, Annie." She was pulling on my arm as I saw tears coming out of her eyes.

I put her behind me. "Stay back, Lil." I told her.

His brown eyes looked back at me with lust. "Or you'll do." He smiled back at me.

I was disgusted. I was going to kick him in the nose, but I heard mom's voice. "Did they find their rooms Pete?" She asked.

"Yes, Margret." He disguised his real voice with a very sweet one.

"Can you please come down I need some help unpacking." Mom said.

"Coming, dear." He said in his fake sweet voice.

Then he looked at us again. "Next time she won't be here to save you." He smiled and walked down the stairs.

I walked to my room to take a nap from the long journey. I climbed in the bed and was going to put the covers over me, until Lil jumped in the bed.

"Can I sleep with you?" She asked.

"Sure, Lil." I smiled as she placed her head on the same pillow.

As I saw her resting that's when I shut my eyes.

I hope you liked it, I will accept any reviews. ^-^