Ok I have just read the last Divergent book and I am not a happy bunny I couldn't see the actually lasting words because I was crying. So I made an alternative ending and I hope this gives you guys to goodiness left in you because that ending sucked…no offence Veronica Roth amazing as you are that ending I was not happy with among with many, many Tris/Tobias followers. There will be Four parts to this story.
PART 1
Tris
I felt my eyes begin to open and I looked around the infirmary I tried to remember the last thing which happened
David
Being shot
My mother
Pain
And then nothing
I couldn't feel anything but pain I turned my head slightly and saw Tobias sitting in a chair with his head lying on the bed with his eyes closed peacefully sleeping. I had no idea how long he had been there but it didn't look comfortable. I lifted my hand and stroked his cheek wincing slightly as the pain in my arm screamed at me to rest. Tobias shifted before opening his eyes
"Tris?" he adjusted his eyes and I smiled weakly at him "Tris" he became more alert and stood up and cradled my head between his hands
"Hey" I replied my throat sore and croaky
"Here" he poured some water into a cup and helped me "Careful"
The cool water helped my aching throat and I pulled back
"How long have I been here?"
"About a week, god Tris I had no idea…when I saw you I…" he choked and I saw tears in his eyes
"Hey" I stroked his cheek "I'm ok I'm here and you're here and that's what matters"
I managed to see Christina and surviving the bone crushing hug she gave me she left me and Tobias
"I almost died Tris when I saw you lying there" he jaw tensed "David is still alive despite my efforts"
I chuckled "Kiss me"
He smiled and leaned forward his lips brushing delicately against my own just the thought of not being able to be with him like this or ever was heart wrenching.
"Tobias?"
"Yeah" he leaned his forehead against my own
"Let's go"
He pulled back so he could look at me properly
"Where?"
"Anywhere there must be other people in the world I want to start fresh with you"
He smiled and nodded before leaning in to kiss me again
Three months later
It was strange the silence having being used to the sounds of guns or shouting for what seemed like forever I sighed softly as I began to hang the clothes out to dry outside our home, our home I thought it was a strange thing. It turns out as we made our way travelling there was a small but neat civilization just outside a place called New York. They made their own crops, managed somehow to supply water and on the rare occasion wine which was made by some men and women in an old house it was quite fascinating to watch. I felt arm being wrapped around me and I smiled
"What you doing" he leaned his head against my shoulder and turned and kissed his cheek
"Riding a bike"
He chuckled and turned me round the t-shirt falling on the grass lawn "are you happy?" he asked
"Yes" I nodded with a smile